AlexBorvin

It's awesome. It's like nothing I've heard before. Very original

What a amazing track! The intro had Silent Hill vibes all over an I really liked it.
Ended little bit too soon, but still impressive.
Great work! :)

-J-

That's a pretty slick track you got here. Excellent work on the mix. Everything is crystal, it all sits well by way of stereo separation and panning. I like the vox as well. In the beginning, it sounds like a vocoder and some distortion, maybe? I think the only thing I would have done differently with them is add a little reverb and or delay. But, that's just my own personal preference. What you have is just fine the way it is. I like the way the second set of vox are a little cleaner and dryer.
Yeah, this is a good track. I think my only real complaint is the abrupt ending. Even then, it's a small complaint.
Excellent work.
Take care.
V.

Great build up, Alex. Loving it

The intro is absolutely great, impressive sound. The whole song is very interesting with its electronic dance style. I liked it a lot. What I would possibly like more should be a slightly different ending. But anyhow, it is a very beautiful work.
My best regards, Anthony.

Hi Alex, I like your track, has a dark feeling, love the intro.

The "walking sound" starting at 00:16, is that intended as walking sound? If yes you could consider to record a real sound using your phone (using the right shoes at the right place and correct beat) I did that once before, walking on a gravel path, a 120 bpm beat on my earplugs to keep the pace for the duration I needed, the phone pointed downwards to record the sounds.

If you need assistance with the English pronunciation, try Google Translate (if the browser is allowed to play sound).
Put the English text in the left box and set it to auto-detect or English, then click the speaker icon (listen) at the bottom left of the left box, Google Translate will "speak" the text. This solution is most likely not perfect but better than nothing at all.

I need to sleep
But hate to sleep
I need to eat
But hate food
Need education
But I'm too old
I need help with this
But I am alone

I have put in the English adjustments - I hope that helps. Not easy writing in another language. A good dance track. I felt it needed a bit more vox stuff before the end. Kay

Ilike it a lot and the lyrics work well with the track. It sounds like an army marching, and the lyrics match that. Great job!

Fantastic!!

That analogue wave squeezing and biting soundz is impressive in my opinion, I like a bit of ruthless modulations and there's more terrific, terrifying, techno perturbations dropped so we get the point at the end which is also nice.

It sounds cinematic, I can imagine this being played in the background of a dark scene where the main character walks through the streets heading towards the villain's hideout.

The only criticism I have is that I agree with BaoBou in regards to there being a bit heavy on the compression, I feel like it is a bit too slammed on the brick wall causing the track to lose its dynamics a bit.

Hi Alex,
that sounds great and I could imagine seeing it performed live in a huge hall. Personally, I think the dominance of the bass here is perfect. However, for my taste, it could be longer... much longer. In any case: great work!
Best regards,
Micky

I agree with some of the other commenters on improvements to the track, but I think this version has its appeal. The low frequencies being more presents gives it this really (I don't want to say underground) unique feel.

Honestly? I think if you speed this up to around 135 BPM you have an absolute fire track (I tried it quickly in Ableton and holy crap that's good).
Clearly that's not what you intended, and that also sort of works, but I feel I need something to give the track a bit more punch. Maybe a bit less compression on the master track?
In any case, great work and glad you brought it out!

Excellent track i enjoyed my listen :)

To me it sounds dark and mysterious sort of an Egyptian feel of adventure and danger.
I like it nice work.

I like the drums

I like this track, thanks!

It's like you brought the rave to my ears. Honestly this is pretty cool. I could see this in an edit or go good with some 90's dance vocals, or even a modern vocal take. Great energy. Keep creating man!

I like it, still loving trance. To my ears the 3rd section sounds odd at some moments.

This is well done. There's enough variation and accents to keep it from getting boring. Personally, I like the length of it. It gives you time to really get into it and enjoy the ride.
I only have a couple of suggestions. I think you could bring the volume up during the 2:30-4:00 section. It's a nice break, but too quiet for as little that's happening. Either that or add some kind of dynamic movement over the top of it to carry you across and justify the lower volumes.
You have an excellent use of the cutoff/reso automation. Your restraint in the beginning from going wide open right away makes great anticipation for the build.
I like the crossfading, vocoded vocals.
I would also suggest maybe bringing the snare/claps up just a touch. They're fairly quiet in the mix.
Overall, man, I'd say good work. It sounds like you put some time and effort into it. Keep it up.
Take care.
V.

#GREAT WORK REALLY DREAMY SOUNDING, I THINK I WANT TO RAVE RIGHT NOW. THANKS FOR SHARING.

Hello AlexBorvin, I think you have a pretty interesting track here....I have my favorite genres but can and do appreciate others and respect the work and time it takes to put together works such as this...there's a lot right away i found interesting about this track....nice progressive percussions, the vocals about a third of the way in were quite good and nice effects make it a pleasant listen for me.....good job.

I quiet like this genre and quiet like this track.

Appreciating the music you wouldn't normally listen to is the main joy I find on a site like Looperman.
This is a great track, but a tad long. I think you can make it even stronger shortening it. Ienjoyed it though!