AlexBorvin

Loved my listen, nice work on the track

Beautiful summer chords. I love it!

Excellent track man i enjoyed my listen :)

This is beautiful, Alex! I completely understand why that main sound is stuck in your head now, its absolutely mesmerizing. Creating a 7-minute track around a persistent melody without it ever feeling repetitive is a massive achievement. Just like Juan Carlos said, when that interlude hits around 2:55, you actually find yourself missing that main sequence until it makes its perfect comeback.

You absolutely nailed the emotional weight. It has that raw, melancholic, ever-pervading sadness that Kayos mentioned, but packaged in an incredible electronic atmosphere. The vocals are sweet, the transition is flawless, and every instrument has its own perfect space in the mix.

Stunning piece of music, my friend. Don't worry about the loop in your head, it was completely worth it! Massive respect!

Hello Alex !! Listening to this track, I think I understood why this is the only sound in your head..... Fantastic work man !!!! Excellent work - emotional creation !!!!! Cheerssssssssssssss !

nice work Alex vox are sweet, melody and bass are a tight fit also, good beat and nice transition, good work

This has a raw authenticity about it - real sadness is ever-pervading, it doesn't shift just because you smile. I think you hit the sadness spot v well, Alex

Fabulous, captivating song which never gets repetitive. Great job!

Hi Alex, I listen to it now 2nd time. You did hit the spot. The voice fits perfect, but I don't have a clue what she is saying :-) The length and the mood is perfect. I love long tracks. Cheers, Oli

Great track

Great track, like it a lot, yes, the constant flow gives it a special feeling. the interlude is a nice touch, I immediately fell in love with the vocal, reminded me of a space movie, can't recall which one. Well done. I can imagine it's in your head now, only one solution for that, up to the next one ;)

this is nice man. a bit too long for me but i know this genre lends itself to longer tracks. i enjoyed it tho. very atmospheric

Hello AlexBorvin, pretty cool track my friend, enjoyed this a lot......nice job

I loved it!
I thought the repetitive melody would get tiring, but no, after the interlude I was actually missing it, thank goodness it came back haha.
Fantastic work.
Best regards, Juan Carlos

Pretty sweet track man well done!

I really like this. Nice build up and great choice of instruments, each one given it's own space in the mix. Nice break at 2.55, the synths sound amazing. Personally, I think you've put in the hard work and created a stunning piece of music. It's excellent.

You've crafted an amazing space where the instruments and percussion truly shine. The mix is beautifully done, and the emotions you aim to evoke connect perfectly with the listener. It is really good electronic music.
Best regards, Anthony

Great Track. I love it. Great work. Keep it up.

A fabulous mash up - bit of Rock, some Trap and the sounds are so well blended - first off, I thought it sounded a bit like A Flock of Seagulls, A bit 80s

very good track bro!

Amazing track.

Banging tune you have created i enjoyed my listen :)

Wow, those beats are insane. However, still see some potential concerning the vocals. All in all superb job, love the track. Congrats!

I've spent the last year crafting a blend of trap with a cinematic/electronic twist. Lately, I've started exploring the world of ambient/electronic music, and I can't wait to drop some new tracks on LM very soon!. This song will definitely inspire me. Good job!

First of all, I like the fast paced nature of his track. It gives a very almost house. House kind of feel to it with the pumping kicks.

By the way, did you have any symbolic or poetic meaning with the lyrics? The "want to sleep. Hate to sleep" Bit seems to tell the story from two different ends.

Meaning is objective and it doesn't always have to be wrong. So feel free not to answer that question lol

As for the background noise, I use all native plugins on FL studio 12, you should be able to stamp out a lot of that with the parametric EQ function.
Hope this helps, well done

-z