Okay, like three things here. One: this sounds like the actually backing track to a lyrical song rather than an instrumental, and rather well done at that. Two: You're a little lacking in your midrange on the guitars, which is what's making them sound somewhat hollow. Three: I like your riffs!
I took your advice and turned up my mids and theres definately an improvement. I just posted the song I did this on, "limpdry", and I think it has more body or like a more bassy tone which is good but the songs style is slighty different than usual, idk. If u get to it check it out and please let me know what u think.... Like all my tunes, it also lacks a bass line to give everything that beefyness, peace.
ok, just download ableton lite its free, it has drum samples that are good quality and you can record everything into there easy, youre past the point of using wave pad
Guitar sounds ok but a little tinny, bass drum sounds ok, snare is not bad, but needs better isolation, the cymbals however sound really bad, very muddy and distorted. needs lots of compression overall, but pretty good if you recorded this youreself all live instruments throught th air
The drums I downloaded from looperman in the loops section and I knew they sounded a bit rough but the beat was what I was looking for. I'm still trying to figure out how to mess with specific sounds/instruments in tracks....Thank you very much for taking the time to throw me some feedback, I very much appreciate it! - peace
you can always tell the true heavy metal cause the audio pattern is a solid block! LOL. anyway - there is some serious chops going on here, whether you like the wall of sound or not. which I do. keep screamin' brother!!!!
You are one of the ones I watch for. I'm always liking the aggressive guitar riffs, and it's one of those things you don't see much of here. That's why I look for you, you always have some good aggressive and abrasive stuff. This one is no different. Like the progression a lot. Drum volume seems a little low, but so what, I wanted the crunchiness and got it. Another good one! Thank you for doing what you're doing.
Thank you, I appreciate that you enjoy my music! A year ago my stuff wasn't so "acceptable" but thanx to looperman.com and all the users that share, I have been able to find good drum loops to unleash to :)Thanx again man, peace
I like your jams evil army. Freeing oneself thru that rockin guitar. Sick. Enjoyed what this did for me. Thank you for sharing. This is perfect for my morning, ruff night about the friends of my enemies. You rock. Peace.
Interesting song.
A lot of nice riffs thrown at this wall.
I really think your ideas deserve to be developed further and reach the form of a complete song.
Ciao, Domenico
The tone at 1:52 seems out of place but the rest is solid. Would like to hear some bass doing it's own thing under it. I like the choppiness at the end.
groovy & agressive as it should be & as Domenco has told there are various beautifull riff & also a proper effect for guitar riff in a the head of this good player .best wishes._______Behnam
dig the shifts that occur thru-out this track - bein a minimalist/phase-music-lover esp 1.30-3.30 hits an unexpectedly trippy zone with great overtones that works within the whole - keep going!!!!
Thank you! It took me forever to come to a conclusion as to which pieces should go where and the pieces I finally chose are from a 28 minute straight jam to the loop. Thank you for listening and your comment! :)
The guitar playing is really good. Lots of good riffs and tight timing. But as a piece of music its basically a bit boring without any variety in the drums or bass or other sounds or vocals. I know nothing about you or your situation but it's very clear that you need to add some other elements to complement your good metal guitar playing. Vocals are an obvious thing but if you can't find a vocalist, instrumental can be just fine (that's what I do as I have no regular vocalists). For a start, you really need to move away from just drum loops to some hypersampled drum software such as Superior Drummer of BFD. I've made this suggestion when commenting on a previous track of yours. You particularly need this for metal as metal drums are typically filled with all sorts of fills and variation. Please do this as playing over the same loop really isn't good enough though it's just fine for practising. Good luck to you.
Feeling that guitar a lot! Could definitely expand this to a fuller take. Title fits the feeling that the guitar is singing. What happened to the bass in the guitar levels? You got powerful riffs here, felt like someone screaming in harmony! This is great, thanks for sharing this. Enjoyed the listen. Peace.
Thank u, I'm happy to hear u enjoyed this one. I kinda left the guitar levels with light bass tone because one of these days I'll mix a bass guitar track with it but for now I was kinda lazy.:) Thank u again!
I was in a band for a while but never got more serious than a couple coffee shops and some back yard partys. I'd love to perform some fully composed songs, fresh, or old. Thank you for your words, they assure me that I'm not a wiener ;) Peace Danke.
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Amazing distortion guitars
Good Work
Paulo
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listening on Adam A8X, the snare is too loud, there is no bass and the cymbals are a bit too loud
other than that - cool riffing
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Just up them Drum beats if you can, to give it that extra kick!
Thats just what i would do man!
Great guitar's and i think there's plenty of room to volume up the drums without lowering guitar volume.!
Great metal Track and i love it as it is so good work!!
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A lot of nice riffs thrown at this wall.
I really think your ideas deserve to be developed further and reach the form of a complete song.
Ciao, Domenico
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Do you play in band? If not, you should... :-)
You have superb groovy rhythm guitar ideas.
Nice demo.
Danke
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Good luck!
Domenico