Modnex

Nice dissonance immediately. Great vocal work. Perhaps a hair dry against the instruments in the verse. Chorus and heavy part sounds great. Nice and grungy, forgot what original rock (metal) sounds like.

Sounds like professional quality through most, excellent, faved.

WOW!!
I am a huge fan of Danke and I know his band plays more like this - you added fantastic vocals to it and I think it's complete now. Fav'ed!

Thanx bro, as I told you before.

It's one of the best (if not the best) vocs on my tracks.
Never thought that I find someone, who hits the mood of the song so well and can interpret it in such a variety of ways...
all my hats off, Danke

hi guys great collab, i rate you both as artist. i love Danke and the band, and i know he has struggled to find a vocalist, its great to here vocals on his work. i think your vox is cool bro, i would increase the volume on them just a bit, but that's personnel choice and not a criticism, well done for stepping out on this Mod, your first attempt at rock, well done bro,

Awesome!

hi Modnex, nice track, you need to finish this. for your sake not just your young cousins, otherwise it will eat away at you. ive suffered this a number of times with friends, once is to many, ive suffered pain in the hardest form, my mum was murdered when i was 15, ive suffered mental health issues too and know all about blaming yourself, you ask yourself too many times, why didnt i see this, was i around enough, could i have done more. the truth is, you never really have the answers and the hurt kills you if you dont share your troubles, its not gonna take away the pain, but it lightens the load, i done a cathartic song about my mental health here (overwhelming thoughts) and had great support from the guys, remember your not alone in this, there's lots of people who have experienced it or similar and feel exactly the same as you and your family, reach out bro it helps, take it from somebody that has the t shirt, im 56 now and still feel the pain daily. life does move on and yes it does get easier just, you made the biggest step by sharing with us strangers that can be the biggest challenge, admitting your own hurt. i got your back. like everything you done, just needs mixing down better. i felt compelled to comment mate its brave to share personal shit.
Paul

Nice work on the track.

Hey there - I listened to this a while back but somehow didnt get to comment - i like this very much - nice indie rock vibe (I always liked pavement and similar bands just a little more grit and quirkiness but in the alt country ball park and the sound reminds me of that) - everything about this is good, instrumentation, beats, vocal, lyric, sound, it's just not finished so ... please do keep going with it : )

Def has that end of 80's vibe
bass remins me in The The
vocals between the cure singer and the singer from the the at bits overall loved the way the vox was i think my resemblance to th eboy from th ecure is quite pap on with the way you sang it in my head anyway.
great track man look fowrward to listening to the end product.

2017 hmmm i hear you man i was a balls hair away from being 6 foot under with a virus ended up alseep for 3 weeks but i pulled through just to loose my younger brother the year later its a horrid thing for a family to ever go through and i am sorry for your loss but by doing this for your cuz has helped you in the process again good work that means something
well done :)

a beautiful tribute! the end ends a bit abruptly, good job man!
Michael

Modnex, condolences to you and your family from me and my family. This work is a honorable tribute to your cousin. There’s a possibility that someone struggling with the same battle will listen and know that someone cares. Hats off to you and also the mix is full on point. Take it all the way.

Mark

First of all condoleances. I've unfortunately gone through this 4 times and it never stops hurting.
I think the song has promise; I also think there are some improvement points. The strong points are I think the drums, chord scheme and lyrics. Your voice works well (cool britpop style), but check to see that the tune you're singing fits the scale of the chords.
Definitely keep working on it, making music is cathartic and it can also help others (or even yourself) to write these things down. All the best to you and your family!

very cool one ...
knowing the background of the song, I was expecting a different mood and I was very surprised by this song that conveys new wave feelings from the 80's ... the stuff is very good musically ... congratulations ...
fistbump, Danke

I think u should finish it, one, because it's a really good song and I liked your vocals. And two, it would be a nice gesture to your little cousin. All the best man.

Damn you're a 10 year veteran on the site! Big up for that. Solid track, well structured and produced. I'm reluctant to to give the only criticism that I have; I realize that the vocal has a autotune effect on it which is a form of distortion, just seems to be the need for a deesser. The siblance seems to come thru on the "s" in the vocal. Otherwise great track!

I love the instrumental and the vocals are a nice colorful touch, it kind of reminds me of the opening scene of -Apocalypse Now-, when the Doors are playing and Martian Sheen is losing his mind.

hey there! I was curious if you would allow me to use part of your song in a YouTube video for a project I have coming out. Let me know how to contact you privately!

This is some of the most unique DnB I have ever heard! I do hear the synth wave vibe on it as well, but that doesn't take away from the enjoyment... not in the least. The vocal parts are enticing and exciting! A really fun song my friend! Adding to favorites!

Nice work on the track, loved the vocals.

Kinda has an 80's era alternative Euro electronic vibe to it. That's an erea of mine, so naturally that's what I would hear. Good one man.

The drums are definitely D&B, the melodic and harmonic elements have a synthwave feel to them. Nice use of autotuned harmonies in the vox. I feel like I need to be driving an 80s Ferrari.

faved.

i enjoyed this!!Modnex nice work!!

Is this drum and bass - I have no idea with genre - to my mind its a great pop song built around some nice arpeggios, sweet melodies and solid beats . Also Love the sound of the vox and the switch up with the vox sound around half way through - almost a little punk interlude - well to my old ears. : )

Nice! This is a cool song. sort of an accessible D&B for the masses with a nice electronic feel. Well, thought composition is driven by that arpeggio as the chords dance around it. then that solo piano strike works so well at 2:12. That vox afterward so reminds me of something I might hear on a Bran van 3000 record. Were you using Valhalla Supermassive mate. the effects were spot on. really impressed with this one. Fav´d. That ending outro is also incredible. Standing O

Not my usual type but melodies in this are awesome!