AlanMcLarenProject

hey dude this is sick !!

Great job! I love it! I really dig that darker vibe.

Great mix, very warm.

Definitely got that dark, trip hop vibe, takes me back to my college days, Massive Attack was a huge part of my soundtrack, thanks for the ride.

You have a really pleasant voice and it works really well on this track - deffo picks up on that 'Teardrop' Massive Attack vibe

I like this, thanks for the listen. Nice and gentle and thoughtful. All the best Zoot.

Nice intro loving the sound on the guitar
i find it hard to do beats at this speed but you have nailed it here.
Cool track Nice in chilled i enjoyed my listen :)

Although I can't remember being a youth (too many years ago), you definitely create a mood. Interesting track, unique. Cosmo

Love the track's melancholic vibe. Congrats.

Nostalgia is a powerful thing, especially true for me. This is quite the musical translation. Well done.

Enjoyed this track, the guitars are standouts for me along with the percussions, effects and other sound elements are well done......nice work

this is nice music i like this kind of music

V pleasant Lo-fi-ish music - great for having on in background to keep your mood focussed

I really enjoyed this one, nice composition

What a beautiful music. Great job.
I love it!

very good track loveit

very good mellow track love it very well made itboad tears to my it was nice

I always like makers who try to do everything themselves like you and me. There's a bit of Seal here in the vocals, and a fascinating prog rock track!

Wow what a fabulous track - the vocalist is amazing and the music unfolds in a diverse, intriguing way - I felt there was some discrepancies with volume towards the end of the track with the vocal - but I am no expert.

Wow - the vocals with that twang guitar really make something different here - has a country feel - v well composed

What a great journey. I love your vocal.
Really interesting progression and arrangement.
Well done!
Cheers!

This went in a direction I totally didn't see coming, in a really good way. Very well done, and the progression is awesome. Could be a bit refined in a few areas, but a bang up job overall.

Very cool great work.

Alan, how's it goin' man?
This is a cool piece. It reminds me a lot of early 90s Bowie. Especially when he was working with Trent Reznor. I think the instrumentation and the arrangement was well done. As far as the "home-made mixing", There are a few things that could be adjusted.
The drums could come up. Right now, they sit just a little too low in the mix. Especially when the 5:10 section starts with that increase of intensity. They get a little lost.
Same with the vocals. They're a little low. I would even add just a touch of reverb with a short decay. Doing so would let them bleed into the music for a more blended effect. Maybe even some delay and stereo separation in a few parts for a more dramatic effect.
Honestly, I'd love to have the stems to this to do a re-mix. Not a remake, but a re-mix. If that's something you'd be interested in, let me know.
Overall though, other than a couple mixing tweaks, this is a great track. It's got a good vibe. I like it quite a bit.
Take care.
V.

Ashes and dreams and those guitars make for a really wonderful psychedelic journey love it Kay