AlanMcLarenProject

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1036WjXmQ1Fr7t3wEuWwKXv7zt2M10sDn/view?usp=drivesdk

Hey I used the same sample..

i like the bass and the ambience you gave to the track, geat vocals too and production

Wow such an exciting track! Loved every note. There were (for me, in terms of vibes from various tracks), hints of Beth Gibbons from Portishead and the music had some Skunk Anansie feeling to it. The tension and the rhythymn sucks you in and takes you down so many avenues simultaneously. That rock guitar and the timpani interweave as the emotions play out. As they say in Wayne's World - Excellent! Kayos of VN

Long ah track (i like it tho)

I really do like this... It gives me a vibe of The X-Files, Twin Peaks.
Love guitar and the lyrics. Vocals were on point. Well done.

Hello Alan - Great guitar work here - got splashes of echo and the bunnymen and flock of seagull feel wehn I listened. Love that you have written lyrics. My only suggestion would be to deepen and beef up your vocal to get that angst across. Good work. KayOS at VintageNights

Alan, what's happnin'?

I dig this. It's kind of dark and groovy. It's got a good vibe to it.

I like to mix synths with traditional instruments in my work as well, so, I really liked the way you incorporated them in yours.

I think, however, the drums could have been a bit louder in the mix. They're kind of buried in the background, and hard to hear in some spots. Other than that, it sounds good.

Good work. Keep it up.
Take care.
V.

Indeed the guitars intro pulls into the song well, thought it was a few stoo long tho. Bass worked great and lyrics told a relatable tale.

nice intro guitar and great vocal, its tight, nice tone, some great sounds like that jews harp cross sort, nice melody tones and a relaxed drum track, the bass is fire, great work mate nice listen

Here's Alan to give us a masterclass on how to set an atmosphere in a song. Your mix sounds like it could be part of a movie soundtrack. Very cinematic!

The track has a great mood and a wonderful vibe!

nice sound guit melody when start your song this is captive immediatly my attention interesting abd i like the many sound electronic ..

The opening guitar riff pulls us gently into the song with waves of reverb and there is a electro buzz like a cross between a didge and a mouth harp setting up some cross rhythm. And then a very sweet vocal, and such complementary melodic and warm arps, builds with some seriously fine hooks. Electro pop bliss happening here. Very nice structure too - a real hit.

Great track Alan, Really love that vocal, and the track fits it beautifully. Did you build the track around an accapella ? sounds really nice, great mix and a really lovely EQ balance. Great job !

nice work Alan, lovely keys at the intro but they do get a little lost in the busier parts, maybe you could route the piano to another mixing slot also and just add some stereo enhancement to bring it out more, thats what a tend to do when im struggling for a section to cut through. vocal is a great fit and the guitar sims are great too nice track

Hi Alan, I am not good in analyzing details but the whole song is a flow of Art. Silver Bella do come out quite different behind all the spheres and the message flows directly into my soul. May give her voice 2-3 dB more gain after 58sec or less for the guitar :-) Cheers, Oli

woow excelente ritmo me encanta como empieza un poco nostalgia y lo que mas me a fascinado el hambiente envolvente que has creado con los instrumentos

Another moody and immersive track. There's a sense of anticipation all the way that's only resolved at the end when you drop the distorted guitar. Kinda almost a bit p J Harvey. Nice guitar tones, you use a sim or real amp?

The Guitar is far out, probably my favorite part of your track. The piano seems rather quiet to me. I almost can't hear it at all at some points (I'm using headphones). I think it'll sound better if you bring it out just a tad more.

and that Guitar at the end was pretty dope.

Love that Intro, Smoothly Psychedelic. Well done tune I enjoyed my listen. Tracktion, I remember playing around with that DAW in Linux a few years back, Good work.

Ooh, wasn't expecting that vocal, instantly got Tool vibes, nice, real nice.
This is happy Tool, I like it.
Oh the guitar comes in.
If you'd like a less midi-sounding guitar sound let me know, I'd record it for you.

That was a very well put together track. Great freakin' job!

So successful musical escalation in these eight minutes, once more with the "sovereign" involvement of the electric guitar ! Great job Alan.

Well it's an excellent work. I liked the "power" of the guitar parts and it was a pleasure listening this 6 min. piece of music. I intend to watch the video as well. So, see you there.

that is a great composition the instruments sonic space is on par for me. Keep it up. From watching the video you have I would not add anything to the track. But from listening without the video I feel some parts have plenty of space for some lead guitar. Also maybe a guitar slide or 2 as build ups. But that's just me and I spoil a lot of my work. So carry on producing this music it great

i love yours too !! good job alan....