deanp

Nice work man, I really enjoyed this track. And congrats on getting air time on BBC Radio 1. Try reaching out to SMC Radio too.

As said before, the track is very nice, good to listen. Little more subbass and punch to the kick aside with al little more of sidechaining would fit the needs - imho

Hi! A good loud track. 01:40 you have a lot of lead in the left channel. It is advisable to set the lead in the center

Hey Dean, VERY IMPRESSIVE don't know really know where to start, sorry mate can't pick a thing wrong with this amazing piece, listening to it in headset and sounds perfect with plenty of space for everything to work where it should, guessing you on vocals? If so great voice for this type of track, liking it mix with the female vocal works a treat...MUCH RESPECT....Peace mosaic...big time fav'd....

Nice Build up am waiting for it oh its still building ahhhhhhhhhhhh here it is yessssssssss bouncing now dam this is good nice clean sound vox is on point love it good job.
Robin

nice track dean, the synth work is great and the vocal is a great match, love that staged entry faded up, the keys building the beat building then the drop the heads bouncing up and down , nice bass too. its authentic sounding too and packs a punch, keep pushing yourself and introducing new ideas to your work bro, top job

Hey Dean, mate firstly love the intro to this one, great vocal, liking the space you have going here within track, nice clarity in headset, beat is perfect for this type of track, poss. only little thing I would say (only my thoughts if I was doing track mate) is maybe have just the beat minus percussion in the first lot of beat that comes in, second lot of beat that comes in is perfect, great bass and beat drive a lot cleaner without percussion, listening to this very nice piece makes me want to get another trancer done, excellent work, guessing one of the better sounding trance piece I've heard on the loop since my return...Favd...Peace n much Respect to you my friend on this piece of work...mos...

Classic movie type intro, nice work.

A good classic dance song. The voice is perfect for this genre but in the first part it sounds too loud in my opinion, better in the second part

Nice vocals!

this was the first thing i listened to this morning thank u for the nice message

Enjoyable positive and uplifting track (don't get many of those) and a timely message for me personally at this point in time. Wasn't entirely convinced that the sax sound towards the end fitted but the guitar certainly did. Cheers Zoot.

cool track man sounds brilliant well done you
Enjoyed my listen

Very early 80s nice! Great synth works

forgot to mention cool title too, ive made loads of mistakes in my life mate but i have no regrets :))

nice synth works dean, nice change ups and choice of synth instruments and risers nice high notes and the vocals are both good and sit great together in a nice mix , enjoyed my listen, keep up the good work mate

Hello, I understand what the previous posters mean. In a song of this genre, which is clearly more dance than trance, the driving bass and drums are actually missing. Although they are present in the song, they don't really come into their own. That's why the overall acoustic picture appears too bright and unbalanced in frequency. If you can achieve that balance (I hope I'm making myself clear?) then it would be the perfect song. The song is already very good, but there is more that can be done. Put in some more work – it will be worth it!
Kind regards, Manuela

I noticed the adjustments you've made to the track. It's definitely evolving in the right direction. Perhaps a more punchiness or depth in the kick could really enhance the overall impact of the track without overshadowing the other elements. Just a friendly suggestion to consider. Keep up the great work!

Cheers,

There is a lot to like about this one. You need some good mastering (Izotope) software now. The EQ is great on the bottom end, maybe a touch reduction on the High Hgh end. but very good indeed.
Some examples to strive for.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XT9IDo-vF5k
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5lX8uqR2va0
Bon Chance!

Hi, Dean! So, I know I've said this previously in comments on other tracks here on LM, Trance is my favourite EDM genre. It was a treat to hear this track from you. Totally enjoyed it. I suck at making Trance. You clearly have figured out how to do it right.

I have read about the EQ issue on the kick. Frankly, I'd like to hear it come through even more, but at some point balancing the sounds in a mix comes down to a matter of taste, which is inherently subjective I think. The suggestion that perhaps you should find another kick sample was interesting. At Point Blank, our instructor told us that if we had to do a lot of EQing on a kick, we had the wrong sound to begin with. (Advice that I rarely follow, but probably has merit.) Synth work was excellent and I really admired how you got the bass pumping. I still can't do that properly.

Again, is a great track and well worth the 6 weeks effort.

Regards from Ottawa,

Eric

really cool, but yeah, it might be time to find another kick sample :)

Beautiful track. It has a great deal of potential. Club worthy for sure. Well done, you!

LovePeace&Light,

Mykaèl

this sounds a little different now mate them drums and the kick cut through lovely, some may still want the drums louder but i think its balanced really well now the music gives you them peaks and the littlest things that you miss like the EQ on the kick tack can define it for you, ive made loads of similar mistakes but when you been listening and tweaking for time it becomes more difficult because you dont here it like your listeners, its so obvious when you spot things afterwards us producers are a self rightesous lot though but aint it great to get good feedback all pushing the same thing too, it makes it feel worthwhile and remember we are not always right but one thing is for sure, i want as much success for your work as i do my own, our biggest fans are here and i think most genuinely feel the same about each others work, on ward and upward bro, your a good listen dean

I enjoyed my listen thanks sounded good to me :)

great track, smooth mix reminds me aurora festival lol... i love the synths and arp but bro i like the kick hitting hard hahaha but i guess thats personal tastes...
keep up mate
peace