When I read the name of the song "I Miss You",
I thought that this is a love song,But this track sounds so hunting haha,and I like this track,good job!
Oh what a great voice! , shame about the autotune , sorry it's just me , i'm allergique to it , otherwise love the track , the laid back feel , and the bucket load of emotions through out
Great stuff
Nice track, to be honest I dont think you need the autotune, sounds like you would have a good voice without it. As a side note I like autotune I think its a cool effect and use it myself sometimes, I just think on this track it is taking away from your vocals. Keep up the good work.
Yeah some electro sounds I kinda just want to add an electro touch so I use autotune only sometimes...not always. thank you for your comment, though, I really appreciate it!
Nicely done. I think you have a great voice, and it is good enough to carry the song without the autotune (I'm not a big fan of autotune, especially with people who can sing.....and you can sing). It would be interesting to hear this one with you singing the same lyrics and melody with a piano accompaniment. Great lyrics and I think you have mad skills and control.
thank you so much! I actually thought this song didn't have the autotune on it...weird. I do know I have a version with autotune and one without but thank you for the comment!
I like this song very much even with the drums,even though i would have done without it, because your very talented with such a beautiful voice, that it carries its own with the guitar.
lol added u, pretty sure the loop is frm MINOR2GO on here yeah thanks for the critiquee.. i am waiting for validation on two loops so wenever those come up you can use em and show me what ya come up wit. thankss
You seem to really like the musical box sound, I like this song, I did feel the guitar did come in a little abrupt.
I think we should have a chat about collaborating, I'll produce for you one song and you sing on it? i think I have a couple of things that would work well with your voice!
Let me know if you feel the idea!
Thank you and yes I do like the musical box sound a lottt. i'll probably fix the abruptness and post the track re-done. thanks for the critique, and that would be lovely to do a colab with you. Match me up with a beat and you can send it to me through "sendspace.com" to email: m.oneill2525@yahoo.com and I will see what I can do ! thanks !
This is nice, I like what you did with my loop, at little credit next time WOULD be nice but really nice voice, maybe just be aware that the beat might be a little out of time with the loop at some points.
Other than that, keep up the good work.
Very well done. Singing fits in well with the kinda dark atmosphere of it and i liked the music box tune thing. However, the piano comes in at a kinda wierd time so i would probs say line it up a little bit more. Probs just cut a second or 2 off. Then reverse a crash and put reverb on it to make it come in a little less bluntly. 1 more bit of ranting and ill finish, the hip hop kinda bit at the end could be a seperate song to be honest, doesnt fit too well in with the middle bit. Either way both parts sound very good. Nice one.
Hey Jdashit!
Cute song. Like the lyrics you wrote. Guitar loop fits the song among singing, but the drum coming unexpectedly and its to fast for this type of song i think. Maybe you just wanted that way... this is only my opinion.
Keep your work!
I really enjoyed this, I love the vocals & lyrics. This reminded me of Kylie Minogue, really nice pop feel & I like the guitar synth. I would turn the vocals up just a tiny bit more, but other wise great track!
Nice song. You have talent in songwriting. That you playing the guitar? I think the drums were unexpected. I think it would work really well if the drums were half the time. Or if it was just the guitar and vocal. Great stuff!
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I thought that this is a love song,But this track sounds so hunting haha,and I like this track,good job!
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Great stuff
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Kyle
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Very nice track.
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I think we should have a chat about collaborating, I'll produce for you one song and you sing on it? i think I have a couple of things that would work well with your voice!
Let me know if you feel the idea!
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Other than that, keep up the good work.
Soligen,
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Cute song. Like the lyrics you wrote. Guitar loop fits the song among singing, but the drum coming unexpectedly and its to fast for this type of song i think. Maybe you just wanted that way... this is only my opinion.
Keep your work!
Cheers!
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Faved..!
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-David
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Slow down the drums do. Sometimes less is more.
Keep Hustling
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