theFISHface

i can do rap on it.... iam sure it gonna be much much better.... if u don trust meh then think once n jz lemme try to this one... hope for positive feedback from u ... :)

Its actually not boring> I dig these chill out tracks> I'm gonna see if i can write a lil something and and see what i can do for you

hot stuff man,i really liked it a lot !!! :X:X

Keep up doing this good work,keep on playin'with sounds :D.

With tons of respect,
Maniak aka Ios

13 great age to get the groove on! The remix it really getting there. Abner's advice is spot on. A little unbalanced up to 1:13 but the loop you use at 1:13 could be the hook that you need. Also from 1:13 your song starts to take shape. Dont over use to many guitar riffs and organ riffs at the same time. (Beginning) The beginning is excellent to :15 again listen from 1:13 a see how nice and settled it is! It could be your opening. Think of this as a song book (Beginning)(Middle)(End) and take your time. Keep up the good work. Fila

This great staff. I agree with Abner that the track is short and off beat here and the but other you are great. Keep going you will definately get beter day by day. Good luck and God bless

You did a good job and my view was that you are getting the idea in jazz BUT ! i found some off beat in the intro from the Drum sect and i find that the song is still to short.See in this Genre of jazz the are no rules BUT' then again the a rules, if you star a song you must remember that your doing music only no vocals and you need to focus on a catchy frease or loop that identifies the song so that when the human ears listens to it, start to loop in the continent.I you finish the song to soon people wont appreciate what already started, Well hope you understand my point,Good luck my friend.

Nice choice of instruments you have here! Suggestion I would now try and stretch this track to 2 minutes maybe open with the drums for about 10 sec or 4 bars then add bass let it groove for 10 sec or another 4 bars then start building your tune from there!! Give it a try Filaofsoul

Nice track. Was that Gene Krupa on drums? Sound pretty good!

I use a couple of the same loops in a track of mine called Strollin. Like what you've done here.

John

This one caught my attention, really chopped up style but I like it.

And yes this is dubstep, if this wasn't dubstep then I don't know what the hell to call it.

But I liked it, a lot. :D

Really good sound combo here.....the scratching and the funky piano are highlights

well done
Trax

yeah thats something i could kick bak to. love the bass line and the keys they go really well together

some nice heavy bass lines in this - its abstract sounds just seem to fit so well inside the track - I could detect some decent sub to the bass as well - sounded Pendulum dude - good job - it was dub and not dub - but enjoyable

We'll have to agree to disagree :)
Cheers!

For your first trip into this genre, this sounds really good,
Haha much better than when I made ​​my first dubstep track!
If you want to continue to make dubstep,then you need just practice,practice!Keep up

Alen

Nice sounding house,trance-ish intro. The wobbles: even though if they were loops, were very well put together. I think the drums could sound a little better without the over-used open hat, and if you could make your own wobbles next time it might sound a little more natural (seeing as the different loops did sound like they didn't quite flow together too well in parts).

Other than that though you did a pretty good job with this track!

Ste :D

Saying it's first dubstep track, I'd say it's pretty good. In fact prolly better than mine. Keep it up!

started not like dubstep :). . . but then went into DUBSTEP :)
Good Track For A first go :) . . . I agree with DollarMenunaire could be longer but it dos'nt really matter a lot i.m.o ,

If you gona make some more and need any tips n that just send me a message :)

ST3RL1NG!

the intro kinda made me think some crunk beat was gonna pop up. but yeah this def sounds like dubstep track and not a bad one at all. only thing i would recommend is to try to make it longer

Great stuff. The bass is great. I wish it was a little longer. God bless

Very nice track, my friend, I just wish there was more of it :-)

Great work

John

I like this piece. I'm a sucker for short and odd. I dig the pinging rhythm guitar.
j.a.

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God bless.

Twanna

Yeah, this is some good hardcore! Nice use of loops! It's got a good rhythm! Cool choice of melodies! Well done!

Hi
Good Job you have make here. I like this
cheers Zappo.