DUDE. The vocal effect really took over the song.
I like the effect, it's just that it's not what I intended for the vocals to be used for.
I like the beat, but it's more of dance/ trance.
You need to work on how you mix the vocals onto an instrumental, but other than that, I think you did a decent job with it!
Remember I'm not being mean, just giving you some constructive criticism.
-Skrib
Thank you for praising my production but its his vocals. i think they aren't too bad i like the lyrics enough and the rapping is pretty good so i thought I'd tweak it out and make it wild. Idk i want to hear a lot of opinions. i plan to make an intro and outro as well as throw in a female or male singing a few hooks in the middle before the next rap section. I usually do acoustic or punk or emo music but this was a first for me I'm brushing up my hip hop skills with my own style to it. like people complained there wasn't a heavy enough beat but there doesn't need to be. that's cookie-cutter. i aim to make music different and interesting.
I really like the swish of those cymbals, kind of reminds me of nice heavy rain actually... then you top it off with a Rhodes piano one of my personal favorites.
This is a really nice first effort, keep it going! I'll be checking out the other 2 tracks real soon.
Not really my genre, but still really well put together,.even though i think i uptempo hat would do this beat justice..and its distorted in my headphones..but good production skills here
big beat is a subgenre on breakbeat. i was going for big beat. notice that it's track1 ive never made music before this..what category should i label it as in you humble opinion.
my friend i had a good listen to all 3 tracks and even though your still climbing the ladder when it comes to the finer skills of producing, your a man with his own ideas and are willing to try make a sound of your own. and lets face it, these days too many people whom have the years of production skills end up jumping on band wagons and think the only way im going to "make it" is by doing what is already "popular". to have ideas of your own is a skill far more important me thinks and will only make your ride easier as you gain more production skills along your path. in a world full of copy cats be an original. stop by anytime, ive been doing it my own way for many years, regards....................!1X1!......................
Trippy instrument choice. YEAH VOX!!! Very cool vocal effects. I hope that's you! Hmm, so when the beat comes back in after the vocals. It feels a little off time. Maybe thats just me, but its the feelinggggg mannnnn. I really feel like this track needs to EXPLODE into a chorus with some solid 4 to the floor and saw hits.
keep it up d00d and check me out!
LOL that's not me in the vocals its from an acapella I found here on looperman, I added the effects but I'm not satisfied with them. But I've since lost that project file and cannot update it -_-. Thank you for your sweet enthusiasm, I wish I could fix this thing up everyday I learn more about music production so it would be so much better but it's stuck this way i guess lol. I really really appreciate the review my friend I'll try and return the favor!
on THROWBACK Rap by skriblej demo by lanfran by lanfran
I like the effect, it's just that it's not what I intended for the vocals to be used for.
I like the beat, but it's more of dance/ trance.
You need to work on how you mix the vocals onto an instrumental, but other than that, I think you did a decent job with it!
Remember I'm not being mean, just giving you some constructive criticism.
-Skrib
on THROWBACK Rap by skriblej demo by lanfran by lanfran
http://www.looperman.com/plaayer.php?aid=2531
Thank you for praising my production but its his vocals. i think they aren't too bad i like the lyrics enough and the rapping is pretty good so i thought I'd tweak it out and make it wild. Idk i want to hear a lot of opinions. i plan to make an intro and outro as well as throw in a female or male singing a few hooks in the middle before the next rap section. I usually do acoustic or punk or emo music but this was a first for me I'm brushing up my hip hop skills with my own style to it. like people complained there wasn't a heavy enough beat but there doesn't need to be. that's cookie-cutter. i aim to make music different and interesting.
on Track1v3cleanerbutwaytoolong by lanfran
I really like the swish of those cymbals, kind of reminds me of nice heavy rain actually... then you top it off with a Rhodes piano one of my personal favorites.
This is a really nice first effort, keep it going! I'll be checking out the other 2 tracks real soon.
on Track1v3cleanerbutwaytoolong by lanfran
John
on Track 6 (demo) by lanfran
on Track 6 (demo) by lanfran
Envy
on track7 (demo) ft lasttriedtherapy by lanfran
on Track 6 (demo) by lanfran
I was waiting for that part of the whole thing.
hmmm
If so then this thing really needs work.
on Track 6 (demo) by lanfran
on Track 6 (demo) by lanfran
keep it up d00d and check me out!
( d eltaaah
on track7 (demo) ft lasttriedtherapy by lanfran