I agree, absolutely. In fact Im going to eq and master all these songs "again" because the person I hired to do it did such a horrible job. Just havent had the time lately..
I never got these songs exactly how I wanted to hear it on load speakers, for I am certainly lacking expertise in the mix down of everything. Thanks for the comment..
Lesson 1.. Never mix your stuff on headphones. It will sound nothing like you wanted once it hits the big speakers..
I see now that you didn't do the music. I guess you can't pan the guitars. Sorry, I should have paid more attention. Vocals eq and panning would help, and disregard the guitar feedback.
Thanks for the suggestions. But, ya, there isnt much I can do with a downloaded instrumental. I will try to put a smoother eq sound on this one though as soon as I find the correct tool. With regards...
The issue seems to be the vocal's mix,eq and pan. Vocals sound like there is a lot of low end in there that is distracting and muddying things up. The vocals sound more spread out than the guitars, which sounds kinda bad. Vocals themselves are good, just overwhelming the guitars/everything in a bad way.
I'd say to try to take some of the vocal's low end out, and boost the bass guitar to compensate. Spread the guitars more and keep the vocal's more centered. The two don't sound properly connected.
Now, that said, I really like the writing of the guitars and lyrics. Not so much into the message, but it sounds like you have a bit of experience writing. That's big.
I love the heavy shit, and your distortion sounds pretty chunky and good. I'm jealous.
I hope you appreciate constructive criticism. Only wanting to help.
Hey, thanks for the thoughtful feedback. That was a really good instrumental track from toloache. Can't help but lay something down when sounds and styles click..
Thanks Firebird, I just remixed this one. Yes, there is a lot of cool stuff on this site, including talent. It sure opens up alot of possibilities for artists and musicians.. Hats off to the creators of Looperman for sure... with regards.
I'm a big metal head brother... I can digg the skill it takes to put something together like this.. nice..but you gotta work on the production side for me the track suffers a little because of the lack of EQing etc but I did enjoy the listen..keep 'em coming brother
You bet... I'm fairly new to mixing, compression and EQing. I hope to have the improved versions of all the songs in a week. Thanks for the input Numberjack.
One word came to mind when listening to this one... WOW. I like everything about this track, it has a good beat and the lyrics fit with the track. I don't like the ending of the track. Great job.
Thanks M4L.. I had fun making that track.. a lot of energy into it for sure. Another guy by the name of, "BoltArmy" of this site did a remix of this. I liked that one also... with regards.
Great guitars,the tone is perfect for this.I like how you brought them in and out at times,the dynamic worked well and your vocals hit the mark...I love it!
Thanks AllenV.. The guitars were from rei4real and another fellow of this site. I can do alot with that guitar sound.. Things naturally come together with it.
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I never got these songs exactly how I wanted to hear it on load speakers, for I am certainly lacking expertise in the mix down of everything. Thanks for the comment..
Lesson 1.. Never mix your stuff on headphones. It will sound nothing like you wanted once it hits the big speakers..
on The Nerve by Octonimus
on The Nerve by Octonimus
The issue seems to be the vocal's mix,eq and pan. Vocals sound like there is a lot of low end in there that is distracting and muddying things up. The vocals sound more spread out than the guitars, which sounds kinda bad. Vocals themselves are good, just overwhelming the guitars/everything in a bad way.
I'd say to try to take some of the vocal's low end out, and boost the bass guitar to compensate. Spread the guitars more and keep the vocal's more centered. The two don't sound properly connected.
Now, that said, I really like the writing of the guitars and lyrics. Not so much into the message, but it sounds like you have a bit of experience writing. That's big.
I love the heavy shit, and your distortion sounds pretty chunky and good. I'm jealous.
I hope you appreciate constructive criticism. Only wanting to help.
Take care.
Evan
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yes it is a good production as far as metal goes
well done Octonimus
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Keep it up, my friend.
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Allen
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Faved
John
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I like this track, awesome sound, much energy, this is great music my friend ...
absolutely great!!!
peace, rei