Mrbillionx

this is great Terrence. His pella goes great with the beat. The beat is crunk too. Great work

reviewing and listening, kick a$$ kick. good effects, filling these headphones well. this feels industrial to me, definitely spacey but a little industrial as well. AHHH there's the money at 1:28. awwww i wished it progressed. That was the perfect root chord for your chorus progression. Pretty out there. More gold at 2:34 but again i wished it progressed. I'd feel more confident vocally if it had a rhythm. Well mixed, interesting and creative instrument choices. Ending is freaking me out. Keep it up bruthhaa

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This is very good, very rough breaks and bass,with much effect!
I like it, sounds sick!

Awesome track you have here bro. Love the drums, you are extremely talented. Well done man.

nice minimal work here mr b...enjoyed the sounds
well done
Trax

yeah you have a dark core dnb tune going on here i am not into dark core and cant teview it well because i am not familiar with how it is supposed to sound but good track though it did not excite me but great effort though keep them coming

i like this track.
the voice that u used has a good twist in this song.
Very relaxing.
Good stuff, i am curious how you finish this song.

greetings

I really like this. Reminds me of some of the more minimal beats by the Neptunes. There's a certain swagger that comes with leaving the beats bare like that, and it helps that this has a really funky groove. Lyrically, I really have nothing to say because I hardly ever listen to the lyrics of a song, unless I've heard it a million times and it's just ingrained in my head.

Overall, great job.

I really don't mind the minimal approach. I think the lack of real melody actually adds to the attitude of the rap. Also I think you give yourself plenty of options for either developing the track more yourself or even allowing someone else to collaborate with you and add more elements.

Wow, really nice track here. I like the bass, nice drum pattern, good sample with reverb on it. Nice kick too, but I think perhaps making it more punchy would be a good idea. Great vocal sample followed up by a great bass sequence, nice arcade like lasor sounds in the background. As JohnB mentioned earlier, the transitons are great. Kind of reminds me of Benny Benassi in the sense that the bass is awesome and the robot vocals come in just before you add the bass.

Not much to say on this one in terms of improvement.

Fav'd again, and downloaded it, very well produced!

Ste :)

I thought that as you'd reviewed two of my tracks, I thought I'd take the time to sit down and listen to a couple of yours.

I would like to say that everyones been focusing on your reviews, to me it doesn't matter much, but just to say, be careful what you say to some people. Its fine to give an expireienced musician some criticism, but younger musicians and people who are new to making music might take offense, but I'm not going to complain, because you've definatly done a lot on this site in a short space of time, which is more than I can say about myself.

Getting on to your track however, I really like the drums, however, I felt that a few things were needed to improve it. I think the drums needed some more reverb on them, just to make the track flow, but the bass has something of a glitch about it, and if it wasn't for the consistency of the drumloop I'd have classed this track as IDM. The bass itself could be improved with a really deep sub-bass underneath the one you currently have, and I think maybe adding a punchier kick and a sidechain to the bass from that kick would be a good idea.

But this is a really nice track to listen to, very well composed, and I think that I'm going to listen to another one of your tracks now, beacuse you've definatley made a good first impression on me with this track.

Fav'd.

Ste :)

A very pretty track. Is that you singing? Nice lyics, nice vocals and a backing track that compliments the vocals. This is a well done piece.

Very Nice Track My Friend

John

I see u used my track. I like the vocals u added

omg what a song is it your on vocal or what naaaaa dousent matter

BANGING TRACK !!

i dl it and hear iut in my car thx 4 up

greez blaze

I sifted through most of your tracks, our styles are pretty different, so I couldn't really find anything that spoke to me. This was my favorite track, mainly the piano. Other than that I agree with ResistanceIsFutile, your not quite reaching were you need to be with this!! Keep up the good work though ;)

-Angelus

Wow this is actually a pretty good electro beat!

These are the sounds I like man ;)

but why is it about french fries ?

Awesome track! I dig all the video game effects! Great beats and bass! Very cool stuff!

i like em with vanilla shakes,wild beat good melody,nice crossover very electro,above par track!

haha tis good brah. really not my style.. i tend to like music that more when you can feel words spill out of the beats, but i could in all honesty tell you that would be some bad @ss driveing music.. haha see how i have no idea how to mix music myself yet i could not tell you how to improve the track it self. it sounded d@m good thought 8 out of 10 brah

doughi boi

I like em with salt, I like em with pepper, I like em vinegar and a juicy hamburger. And........I would eat them on a boat. I would eat them with a goat. I would eat them on a train. I would eat them in the rain. I like french fries, Sam I Am, unless they're covered with strawberry jam. lol.

You've got me hungry.

Great track. Production and instrumentation are high quality and your transitions are seamless.

All The Best

John

Hello, I haven't been on looperman for a long time but this made me laugh so hard, and the music is great, definitely a winner for me, especially those bongos and congas.
Also liking that bassline, reminds me of the bassline from Noisia's - Blockparty, maybe that influenced you, It doesn't really make a difference, this is a great tune.
Keep it up - Soligen.

I really like what your doing with this,great piano,and nice choice of vocals!

nice track maan...loved the lyrics..the instrument is lil bit weird lol but i loved it ...keep the good work

i like where you're headed with this also. nice keys... cool little touches in there! look forward to the end result. Let me know when it's done :)
Cheers,
M