Mrbillionx

I love it, now just add some extras there and there

Nice sound dark feel keep it going just needs a drop for the bass to kick in good start

I really like the piano melody. Very nice! might become my favorite sound for the week :) I hope you finish this song! :D

Hey I just read your description and I'm glad I did because I was about to say that the dissonance in the vocals was a little bit hit and miss. I think if you tighten up what needs to be tightened you will have a pretty good track here. I can hear where you're trying to take it but you're not quite there yet.

The lyrics are hard hitting and great, but im not fond of the minimalistic approach. I think at the minimum there should be some synths in the back, and with those kind of lyics id pump up the drums a bit. -Gabe

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