dimestop

Ok I see you. Your beats are truly becoming next level. Have u ever tried rapping? Man I wish I hade confidence on my vocals just in the beat making. Good stuff bro

hey Paul :) nice that you put out new stuff. those dreamy pop urban beat comes in tight with your vox. i really love your greedy edit on yor vocals. you change your flow like a chamelon on this. fck them haters. i recently split up from my band , they wanted to do generic pop shit with evil people and no politics involved,. its hard to find your own thing today and your track gives me a lot of vibe. i really love your line" smell at the flower, plough and deflower. it´s what im feeling all the time in society. i was sad for a long time. but i grew older and im 30 now. i can accept reality. i reall ylove the end section (3.50) when the beat is a bit mellow and your vox can shine bright. i love when you go up in the register, and i can feel all the pain. im glad that your my mate as well. you were the first to welcome me here on looperman and cheered me up to go my own way. love from a banana

Woo Hoo - nice one Paul, in terms of feedback, I think eveyone already has it covered - great to hear you giving such a ballsy delivery, great mix of styles in the vocal delivery and fits really really well with the tune, great lyrics, you keep getting better and better at this, etc. The only thing I'd say that might be worth thinking about is the mix sounds a little loud - but having said that I dont think it's clipping - I mean that's what the volume knob is for hey. :)
Congratulations

Paul....... Welcome back mate. So let's jump right in. Man, this is genius on so many levels. The switch-ups @ 0.57, 2.07, and 3:16 sets this one out there like a mixtape! And you know I'm a connoisseur of baked in creativity. The mix is crisp, and the vocal effects and layering is excellent. I really like the string arrangement running in the background. And finally, judging from that solid brick waveform...... you put the business on your master track. Well done mate. Peace.

Mark

nice come back Paul , beautiful inspiration on this track!
Michael

~Riding on the wave of joy~ I meant to say, Too early in the morning but I gotta go run now, wake myself up before starting my day.

This is a really NICE! tune it has that feeling of spring or summer feeling but also of hope & you are absolutely ~SHINING~ on this & telling it like it is which is something I do. The upbeat energy on this is awesome!! your riding the on the wave of joy it seems. BTW, congrats on your new job well done you! on your achievements.

Haters?...there are overt and covert ones like snakes in the grass who smile in your face then slander you with gossip and lies behind your back. The best revenge I have found is to be happy no matter what they say or do, most of it's based on lies and pure jealousy, If this happens, at least I know I'm doing something right lol...Hate is the complement of fear and copycats have no imagination is something my uncle use to say. Keep up the great work...Your Happiness! of your achievement is overflowing in this track and infectious, it's lovely to hear. Well done! indeed.

Wow, that distinguished voice of yours mate.
It is really captivating my friend.
You've come a long way, Paul.
Well, Done mate.
Maj

That's really good Paul. And this is Looperman, no haters here, only lovers :)
Check the level of the vocals btw, they might be slightly in the red and I think you can bring them down quite a bit to make them a bit smoother. Good luck buddy!