This would be a good track for a movie like inception where one is invading the dreams of others or perhaps something similiar. I can imagine wandering around inside the mind of someone else. For the most part it would be humming alone just fine, but who knows what lurks behind the next bend. Well a cinematic track should inspire imagery and this track certainly does that well.
Thank you. I need to work on this one a little bit more in certain areas, but I think cinematic does work quite well so thank you for appreciating that aspect of it. :)
Jazz/fusion? I think that at 1:15 the samples my be out of key with each other slightly, was this intentional? I'm not saying it's bad...that's why I asked if it was intentional. I likey a lot! The reversed samples/keys are really cool the way they rise and fall!
I like jazz but can quite pull it off unfortunately.
I'm glad you liked the track. I took another listen and I know what you mean about a slight discord, I think it just about works without being too jarring
Thank you for listening and reviewing. :)
Love the guitar and horn on this baby. The atmosphere reminds me of walking around downtown Montreal for some reason. I can almost see the lights brighten the summer evening, hordes of beautiful women walking along the street off to their party destination for the night, I and my friends watching with great expectations for the evening. Ahhhh..... Youth is too soon lost.
That high-pitched synth is really great. Spooky, but in a fun way. The sound at 2:08 as well...like a bent guitar/bass...whatever it is, I love that as well. The vocal samples are nice, but I think you may just wanna lower their volume a bit when they first appear. Other than that, this was a really enjoyable listen. Keep up the good work.
Thank you. I have updated the track but not uploaded that yet, but I will take another listen before I do and try to adjust the levels. The problem is that I keep finding samples that are really cool and scary lol.
Great backing track with great vocals and lyrics equals great track. If there is something inherently wrong with this piece, I didn't hear it. Sounds perfect.
Always wondered why people mess up good music with weak vocal work.
( what I don't like about the vocals - for one they seem very weak compared to how strong the music is. - and whatever that effect was that is applied to them did not help them either.
I mean if the vocals are being made to sound like instruments I don't like it. )
You want to improve this.
Take the time to really get a vocal line that is one
understandable
and
At least get a hook that ummm I don't know maybe SAYS SOMETHING.
or At least remove the vocals and let the music speak for itself.
Hmmm I actually appreciate constructive criticism, but it has to be constructive. What don't you like about the vocals?
Tips for improvement or what you would do better or differently please?
Thanks for listening.
UPDATE
Thank You this is just the kind of feedback that I want and need. Truthfully I think the vocals are pretty weak too. I may remove them or even remove the track. I think compared to some of the stuff I've made since, this is one of the weakest things I have uploaded.
Your honesty and in depth thoughts are gratefully received. :)
Will come back and listen and review more.. Love Your voice and way to sing and yes.. Sounds like the same taste.. Sooooo nice.. Nice to meet a woman too with that taste and productions.. Like Spirvkurl I also like new wave sounding bass..
Excellent track. Great transition, production and instrumentation. You used the vocals very skillfully. I'm definitely looking forward to hearing more of yours in the near future.
hey ResistanceIsFutile......what a great track to add to the spooky list....really like the ghostly high pitched synth. Well done and thanks for sharing
Trax
Like the creative variety, the funky beats and Your voice dear.. As You wrote to me, it can be higher some places.. also in the other songs.. Guess You especially write that, when You like the voice.. And I do.. You should sing a lot more on Your tracks.. make longer lyrics and so on..
truly love the atmosphere in this one, carried me away to ride the subway in fast motion-in my originally visually artistically oriented mind. I tend to use use guitars in the same way you do, implementing them with bass and electro flows, yet this is way more funky, great job!
Nice. I didnt know what to think of it at first, Its like Chilled out Funk. Don't think that is an available genre either tho. I like it, something different. An inspired 7.5/10
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I very much enjoyed the ride
John
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I'm glad you liked the track. I took another listen and I know what you mean about a slight discord, I think it just about works without being too jarring
Thank you for listening and reviewing. :)
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Excellent track and a def fav
John
I appreciate the listen and you adding to your favourites.
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Great work
John
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:)
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Faved for sure
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( what I don't like about the vocals - for one they seem very weak compared to how strong the music is. - and whatever that effect was that is applied to them did not help them either.
I mean if the vocals are being made to sound like instruments I don't like it. )
You want to improve this.
Take the time to really get a vocal line that is one
understandable
and
At least get a hook that ummm I don't know maybe SAYS SOMETHING.
or At least remove the vocals and let the music speak for itself.
Hope this helps
Tips for improvement or what you would do better or differently please?
Thanks for listening.
UPDATE
Thank You this is just the kind of feedback that I want and need. Truthfully I think the vocals are pretty weak too. I may remove them or even remove the track. I think compared to some of the stuff I've made since, this is one of the weakest things I have uploaded.
Your honesty and in depth thoughts are gratefully received. :)
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Love the creativity, nice energy and ehmmm... (can You say that to a girl??? - balls!!!)... He he
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Will come back and listen and review more.. Love Your voice and way to sing and yes.. Sounds like the same taste.. Sooooo nice.. Nice to meet a woman too with that taste and productions.. Like Spirvkurl I also like new wave sounding bass..
Hugs Stina..
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Thanks for the review. :)
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All The Best
John
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Trax
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Thanks
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Peace ... VlaRB.
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Have a nice sunday.. s
Hugs Stina..
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But I can see people getting into this kind of thing.
Good work.
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