kerry

I can hear the emotion in this one, something that is hard to convey as an artist. It's difficult at times to really put yourself out there and bare your soul. I think you did that on this one and you connected.

My only advice to you (and it is just a small detail). Watch your pitch on the vocals. Sometimes when people sing softly they have a tendency to go just a tiny bit flat on the notes. If you sing softly, make sure you are still breathing deeply and singing from your diaphragm (my college courses in vocal technique taught me that trick - it actually takes more effort to sing softly than loud).

You have a really nice quality and tone to your voice. Just use good technique when you sing and you will find yourself moving to the next level. Great job here. I look forward to more from you.

Bear

merci de ton passage!
si cela vous dit que l'on travail
ensemble c 'est avec plaisir!
vôtre musique est très bonne, la seule chose
qui serait a revoir c est le mix!
à bientôt
karl

Maybe if your interested a collaboration? I like the dark sound of your music really nice piano work.

this is nice! really wanna hear it mastered it would be epic. lyrics are good and nice piano. good work!

really dig the perf and sounds you've created around it

Very Nice piece kerry. I really like the piano and the lyrics are heavyhearted and somber. The mix on the vocals could use a little work but that's about it. Reminds me of that movie Less than Zero from the late 80's. Nice work and worth the listen.
Peace

This is a pretty song.

Hauntingly sad yet beautiful! You are a unique talent Kerry.

You are like Dido meets Lene Marlin!
What a winning formula!!
I think you could clear up the vocal issues by lowering your recording level a bit when you record your voice.You can always turn it up later when you mix your track.
That aside,I love what you're doing.It's really special!
g.x

MINOR2GO is becoming quite a legend around here!
His beautiful music is touching and insipring a lot of people.
Nice work with this one!
Your voice is so pure and haunting,a gr8 compliment to his instrumental.
I'm hooked!
g.x

You are a great talent,no doubt!
You remind me of Lene Marlin,who is one of my favourite artists.
Beautiful voice you have.
I think you will go far!
love
g.x

I'm blown away by this!
I didn't realise that the pain of Matthews loss would touch anybody on Looperman like this.
Thank you for your awesome tribute!
I am moved to tears!It's beautiful!!
I would really love a copy if you would allow it?housemusic@mweb.co.za
Love
g.x

Good song, it could be better when mixed down, otherwise a very nice laid back tune. Love pianos...and that touch of guitar ?

Really nice song...

Peace...

Beautiful soulful lovely melody (something with the mixing, in some places/bars the voice is too loud and the piano is just in the back somewhere. The voice needs to be there, I think, forceful but distant).

ONLY TOP, but u need a little help at the mixxing i think :) its sounds to loud, try to get it clearer and it will be much better quality.

best wiches for ure Song

Very nice backing track - better than nice, exceptional would be the word for it. The guitar solo is off the charts, so my compliments to the guitar player. Awesome job.

I love your lyrics on this one, and the melody you have chosen. Again, there are a few minor issues with the mic, but they don't detract from the body of work. I wish I had you in a studio in person.....we could work magic with your voice. This is a great song. Really really nice.

First, my compliments to the guitar player (is that you?). It is first class acoustic work for sure.

As far as the vocals go, I think they are bordering on clipping in a few spots, and it is probably due to the mic you are using, the recording level it is set at, and possibly the distance you are from the mic. You may have the recording level a bit too high. This can cause issues when you want to put more natural volume or emphasis into your vocal work (dynamics). If you lower the recording level just a bit, and move back away from the mic a little, it will allow you to sing with a bit more force.

One thing to remember, most people have a tendency to sing a little flat when they sing softly. By opening up and using your diaphragm, you will able to stay on pitch throughout.

You have a nice, warm quality to your voice. The only thing keeping you from being a superstar is your equipment and how you use it. Keep singing and working on it.

Please don't take this as criticism. I really enjoyed this and am off to listen to another of yours. Thanks for posting.

Love acoustic, feeling the lyrics you wrote. You have very nice vocals. Keep writing and playing. Take Care
Gord

I would not say that good. But they are emotionally attached to me.
Noise Sound, it looks well suited to this song but a bit too much.
Guitars sound is very good. I can feel your perception of all notes.
You play guitar very well. Your voice is very suitable for this style. It gives the sense of the traditional 80-90's rock music feel is not roughly, like today.

try to record a new singing by take better microphone that can support your voice and compressed in a room with silence. Mix everything together again by putting a little FX to it, is would be more perfect. (that just my opinion)

Sorry my bad English
Inspire_Nung

I like the instrumentation on this track. You might try to pull the vocals back little cause they are sitting right on top of everything and not blending too well.

you are amazing, the only reason why you haven`t got reviews on here is because of the quality of the recording. I can hear through it though your a star!

You have a great gift of bringing the melancholic into your songs which I think is a winning formula. I like the simplicity of your folky style but I also agree with AllenV about collaborating here on looperman to extend and develop your musical styles and arranging. If you've listened to any of Minor2go's tracks then you'll know how good an arranger/producer he is. If time allows doing a collab would be the next step up. A very catchy and haunting track...

Wow!! You have an incredibly beautiful voice. The only thing I can suggest is what atw said. The production on your vocals need some improvement. Awesome vibe going on here nonetheless. Great work.

hey kerry great job on this track, like the lyrics and ur voice is always great to listen to :)

Wonderful song. Music sweet, penetrating and sad. Everything is perfect. Wonderful voice. Instant Fav.