kerry

You have great vocals and lyrics. The tech. stuff in your mixdown is very minor as was stated above. You have alot of talent in you and I enjoyed the listen. Keep on with your writing, singing and music your good at it.
Gord

Nice simple song (which I like). I like your lyrics. Nice job.
Gord

Good track, the vocals seem like they need something else to them to fatten them up, maybe double the track, add a little reverb. I'm not sure anyway way I would rather review the song rather than the production, so good lyrics, and very nice music. Keep it up.

..hello kerry (my daughter's name too!)..very nice effort for being 'new' to making music..i agree with some of the earlier comments in many respects..whenever you are working with nature sounds..water, rain and wind in particular, it's best to keep the velocities down and work up..they can cut through quite easily..you've a lovely voice and i'd like to hear you more up front..all in all a pretty if melancholy song..love to hear more from you..all the best..cait

Very good Kerry,I hear your influences and think you have a gift for lyrics and putting all your songs together.I think Minor2go is on the right track...maybe some collaborating might serve your songs well and blow your songs into bigger productions like the influences you mentioned,you can do it!

Allen

BIG UPS TO YOU ON THIS ONE!

imma luvin' your STYLE and LYRICS

i hope we can collab in the future
maybe do a hook or two for me
;)

Much Respect from LA

LUV YO LYRICS!!

you've got a very NICE voice
and that GUITAR was EXCELLENT
coupled with those STRINGZ!

just need to work on the mixdown
on the vol. of your vocals!

But THAT'S JUST TECHNICAL STUFF!

it can be worked on, but
YOUR VOICE!
is a GIFT!

i wanna hear MORE FROM YOU!

Much Respect from LA

i love the vocals, great voice

Brilliant, reminded me of Nirvina (4 first plucked stings esp) I really like this track.

New producers never use FX to full advantage, it takes a lot of stuido time to even understand what is possible let alone doing what is right.

Great work Kerry

Ez Icarus

Very nice vocals here. The looped track sounds great too. I agree with ChrissG on the adding effects part. I think with some reverb these vocals would have been amazing in a different respect.

You do sound a bit shy here, but everyone's like that when they start. So there's absolutely nothing wrong with that. But I will say I think you could sound fantastic if you found a way to open up and record.

I did notice a few microphone pops, and I know it's annoyingly hard to ensure you don't have them with home recording equipment, but you have to try and get rid of them. Also, that microphone buzz is annoying as hell. If you can find a microphone that'll get rid of that, it'll help.

A USB microphone, which you can purchase from gaming stores for use with Rock Band and such games (it's where I got mine) would be a good thing to look into. I find the ones that plug directly into USB ports, the logitech brand ones, have very little microphone buzz and pick up sound a lot better, which would get rid of some of the distortion when you sing louder.

You have an awesome voice and you're a good songwriter so I look forward to hearing more of your songs :)

You have a very nice voice. I think what you need to work on the most is equilization. I don't mean track effects; I mean getting every track to be the same volume, or maybe lower volumes so that the background doesn't override your vocals. I have a very hard time hearing you over the rain sound effects in the song. I really like the lyrics and the overall mood of the song. It takes a lot of talent to sing with Midi and have it sound decent, let alone this good. I look forward to seeing you make more music :)

nice mellow track and a very good effort with the vocals, the only one little niggle and its only a personal thing, i was always waiting for a tempo change or an uplifting part to the song but it didnt come! but its still a nice piece best wishes always D. :0)

nice track here.. my only constructive ould be not to shy away from effects on your voice.. to give it a cool eerie edge.. and the vocals could do with a bit more by the way of eq'in.. However this is a beautiful song nice acoustic and very good voice.. well done

Hi Kerry. Wonderful piece, indeed a sad song.
Sounds like you have to be careful with the gain settings when you record (on the "gooo away"), the sound begins to distort. But as I said it's a good song and the voice is nice.
Cheers
/pmk

It's great to hear someone be able to sing without autotune. You have multiple skills going on here. Keep doin what you're doin. Courageous song. Did you write the lyrics? Looking forward to hearing more... peace :)

kerry,,iv listened to all ur tracks and i like what im ahearin,i see u usin acid pro which is wot i use and its easy to make ur vocals a lil tidier/effective,, just mess around with the compression/reverbs and then u can make ur voice sound really good,thats wot i do anyway,if u like any hiphop check my stuff and maybe u could do a hook or two for me in the future,if not is cool,, keep doin ur thing,mal

sweet piano!

vocals could be mixed slightly better
but LIKE this track!

KEEP IT UP!

Peace from LA

Good lyrics on this track, keep it up.

very nice. the minimal production actually works.