This is a nice mix of rap and what to me is like almost 80s rock. I see your driven by your beliefs, which to me, always somehow leads to great music. This track is very raw, its like being in a garage listening to you guys vibe. Great work, the hook is a relaxing contrast. Loving that guitar to, its fresh.
Keep doing you man, this is refreshing.
Hey thanks for that review.That was 1 of the first ones that i wrote.That was sorta experimental wit just the one guitar and the zoom mrs 1044.At this stage im working wit ableton live 8.Its a bit mind boggleling but im hoping to have some new sounds on loopys soon and u r right,iam driven by my beliefs.It brings unknown music styles out of me.Thanks Bro
Great message. Great feel. Unfortunately, I could not understand all of the words. The music overpowered your vocals. I got the just of the song from the description.
When I am laying down a vocal track, I try to really enunciate my words, being my voice is so deep so there is clarity as I sing the phrase. I learned this from my Dad. He would always say, "If they cannot understand what you are singing, they will not get the song."
Hi T,u r so right,being new to this game, its ok to learn from ur mistakes.Sometimes i think the tune of the track will draw the listener before they may realise the message in the vocals.Might be a bit backwards aye?Iv gotta sort out my levels and balance the sound.Iam really grateful for any advice you can give me and i will keep in mind what ur Dad had passed on to you,God Bless ya T.
Beautiful song. I could not understand the rap part though. The song has a heart-felt message and it will bless those who hear it if they could understand what is being said. Other than that, beautiful.
Hey T,thanks for the reply.I know my bro wasnt 100% in it,but he had just written that 30min prior to puttin it on loopy.But he has done a proper version that i havent even heard yet.Hes given me the Zoom mrs1044 back but wit no power lead.Never mind,ive just been playin with the ableton on my new apple lappy i just got and man i thought the Zoom was complicated.So if you got any tips on ableton live 8,i sure could do wit som.But the sound is awesom.Oh i got ur reply via email in regards to masterpiece,thanks.I really luv that song,oh and being Maori which is a native from New Zealand(lol)is where Tino aatahua comes from(very beautiful)Hey, it was cool 2 catch up T.Catch ya later.Bless ya
thanks James for that reveiw.I do know that my guitar had been sitting in my closet for a decade before i got her out.Shes an ole Cort strat so it does sort of ave that 70s sound to it doesnt it.Bless ya bro
Pro ill give it a shot,but it involves sittin in a dark room waiting for the lord to deliver.I got a few ballads coming later.But ill keep an ear out 4 ya.Bless ya Pro
Pro,it would be a pleasure to do something wit cha.Im sure my home boy will be down wit dat.I should have the ableton live suite 8 kickin soon.Will have better sound quality.Cant wait.blessings
a lot of passion in your music, your lyrics. i feel your devotion, and it's very cool when it is expressed in a contemporary genre like this rap and these beats. it flows beautifully - i can keep on listening - for me it is always a balance between keeping that groove up but bringing in enough variation to maintain interest. you get that. congrats
criticism? well - i'd have to listen 1 more time - but a completely contrasting section can be very effective - like "bringing down" the band, so you can bring it up again. just throwin it out there. peace.
Midi,u r absolutely right about the contrast.I wasnt to sure about the instrumental ending as more could ave been added to the blank.I was only trying to make the 4 minute barrier.Im new to this game when it comes producing the sound that i want to put out there so your criticism helps me improve as i dont know how to read or write music,but play by ear.Im hoping to have a new and improved sound when i get tne ableton suite 8 into motion.I value ur review.Thanks Midi
hey Yttrium thank u for that + review.i wasnt expecting anything as i know that there is so much to do in this piece.My reverb/c,delay are out, my bro needs to put a bit more heart into his flow and as for myself it could be the cheap mic that we use or it could be that im not fit enough to do vocals.So that was pretty uplifting,cheers
I know the vocals sound like crap Dem,but im hoping its the quality of the mic,then again it could be that im not fit enough to do vocals.As for my bro,he needs to get his flow on and get his heart back into the scene cause if u dont feel it this is the result u get.Oh he gets told all the time that he sounds like mnm and he cant stand it.I am looking at fixing this piece in the near future.Your review is greatly appreciated as this is a learning curb.Thanks Dem
Hey John,thanks 4 that review.im glad u liked it.We do focus on the message but camouflage it with a good rhythm and a repetitive chorus in order to get it out there.Thanks for dat bud.
Zee,1st of all,thanks 4 that review.Im glad u liked the melody as this track is one of my favs,and just to lift u up a bit,i cant even play the guitar even thou that is me playin on this track.To the well trained ear u will be able to pic up imperfections and that is why we put them on this site,hoping someone like a professional producer will take us on for face value and tweak our work and make a profit.So there is hope 4 u yet with the guitar.Good 1 zee
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Keep doing you man, this is refreshing.
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John
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When I am laying down a vocal track, I try to really enunciate my words, being my voice is so deep so there is clarity as I sing the phrase. I learned this from my Dad. He would always say, "If they cannot understand what you are singing, they will not get the song."
Just a little direction.
Have a blessed week.
Twanna
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Have a blessed week.
Twanna
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Yeah, a nice surprise. A very unique track to my mind.
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criticism? well - i'd have to listen 1 more time - but a completely contrasting section can be very effective - like "bringing down" the band, so you can bring it up again. just throwin it out there. peace.
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Faved
John
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Very heartfelt devotion
10/10
John