Davytryhard

Way to rock, my young friend, faved

John

Really enjoyable piece, my friend, I look forward to its completion. I'll reseve a place for uit in my collection of great looperman tracks.

All The Best

John

So god! track my friend! congratulations I want to thanks for show you music work in this place. See you

Very well composed piece, my friend, and a very nice track to listen to on a sunny afternoon.

Are you studying in China?

Looking forward to more of your work

John

Nice tack man, I think this would really be a great song with some good vocals on it. Keep it up man, good composition.

you got a great track there man ! hope it comes out good with the vocals.

Killed it, you gatta let me in on this one bro!
very nice job, i love the darkness of the beat, you could shoot an xtreamly sick video to this song!

i cant wait to go in on this track everyone i show this to says were gunna kill it, beast track!

very mad that i cant download it but other than that the track is amazing!

Mate, great track, i am Chinese also, but i speak Cantonese.

The vocals need to be more clear i feel, as it would really lift the track with a female voice. Wow, i must ask you to collab with me on my tracks, i need a mandarin vocalist.

Great piece..

Love it

Peace...

I like where you are going with this. You are obviously very talented. The music is great especially the bass line but I could barely hear the vocals, they were very muffled and sounded like they were deep in the mix. I know this is just a start so keep up the good work. God bless.

I agree with XSITION. Great sounding song though. Also I'm not sure what piano your using, but I think a more authentic sounding vst or soundfont would make the song more dynamic.

Great intro. The music is great! Bring those vocals to the front more, as after a good mix down. Great composition!

Nice track, lots cool sounds in this, nice flow through the song, good vocals as well.

Sounds good man. I really liked it. Sounds a little muddy but sounds good arrangment wise. I could rip up some awesome drums on this for you if you want and clean up the overall sound. Just send me the music minus the drums. Preferably guitar and piano parts seperate. if you are interested in having me work on this for you, e mail me at: conan_swanson@yahoo.com. Look forward to hearing from you! Rock on man!

A meaty blossom of uncertainty
makes me want to spit hot fire

why cant i download it?

Hey Davytryheard,

I have a proposition,
I have a Radio Show on an Internet Radio Station starting JAN 4TH
On my show I play uprising DJ Talent, so if your an unsigned artist and it's okay with your girlfriend I would like to have your permission to play 'I Love Yesterday' on my shows,

If you send me your e-mail I'll send you the URL to the station,
Thanks,
Lee from Project Radio

wow Dave she is talented huh? Tell her I think she sounds AMAZING and not like a cartoon like I expected lols. But I agree the vocals need to be turned up a notch. Re work it let me know when your done.

I am glad I stumbled upon you. I am loving this.
That synth is sick! (Sytrus rocks)

...and if I really did not like it, I would not leave any constructive critic remarks. It would not be worth my time.
But I would turn up the tempo just a tiny notch. and please finish this track!
lol

I would love to collab with you one day if you are ever interested.
I have a few tracks that needs guitar, and that is one of my weaknesses.

Wow.
I am pretty much speechless.
Your girlfriend has an ornate beauty to her voice. If she ever decides to do an acapella track, please let me know. I wanna be the first to mix it.

One tiny bit of constructive critisism, (and this is something you will fix anyway in a finished version) but turn her voice up.
The track is stellar, but dont hide her. Highlight her.
;)

Hey awesome track, really is a a heartfelt kind of song.
i have a friend who is a really great singer. who i would really love to give a go with this track. i think its a perfect match for her.
credit would go to you of course. i would just be recording her.
You can send it to my email. matt.hodg@hotmail.co.uk if you wish.
thanks great song again.

This Song you created was So beautiful I realy Love your Song!!!

I love this song soooo much even though I have a feeling I know what inspired it. Send me the lyrics to it. I cant sing but I know some peeps who can ;) by far this is my favorite its gonna rock when its all mastered up.

That was a pretty badass track man your main riff was f*&king awsome. Loved it keep em' coming.