Davytryhard

Way to rock, my young friend, faved

John

Really enjoyable piece, my friend, I look forward to its completion. I'll reseve a place for uit in my collection of great looperman tracks.

All The Best

John

So god! track my friend! congratulations I want to thanks for show you music work in this place. See you

Very well composed piece, my friend, and a very nice track to listen to on a sunny afternoon.

Are you studying in China?

Looking forward to more of your work

John

Nice tack man, I think this would really be a great song with some good vocals on it. Keep it up man, good composition.

you got a great track there man ! hope it comes out good with the vocals.

Killed it, you gatta let me in on this one bro!
very nice job, i love the darkness of the beat, you could shoot an xtreamly sick video to this song!

i cant wait to go in on this track everyone i show this to says were gunna kill it, beast track!

very mad that i cant download it but other than that the track is amazing!

Mate, great track, i am Chinese also, but i speak Cantonese.

The vocals need to be more clear i feel, as it would really lift the track with a female voice. Wow, i must ask you to collab with me on my tracks, i need a mandarin vocalist.

Great piece..

Love it

Peace...

I like where you are going with this. You are obviously very talented. The music is great especially the bass line but I could barely hear the vocals, they were very muffled and sounded like they were deep in the mix. I know this is just a start so keep up the good work. God bless.

I agree with XSITION. Great sounding song though. Also I'm not sure what piano your using, but I think a more authentic sounding vst or soundfont would make the song more dynamic.

Great intro. The music is great! Bring those vocals to the front more, as after a good mix down. Great composition!

Nice track, lots cool sounds in this, nice flow through the song, good vocals as well.

A meaty blossom of uncertainty
makes me want to spit hot fire

why cant i download it?

Hey Davytryheard,

I have a proposition,
I have a Radio Show on an Internet Radio Station starting JAN 4TH
On my show I play uprising DJ Talent, so if your an unsigned artist and it's okay with your girlfriend I would like to have your permission to play 'I Love Yesterday' on my shows,

If you send me your e-mail I'll send you the URL to the station,
Thanks,
Lee from Project Radio

wow Dave she is talented huh? Tell her I think she sounds AMAZING and not like a cartoon like I expected lols. But I agree the vocals need to be turned up a notch. Re work it let me know when your done.

I am glad I stumbled upon you. I am loving this.
That synth is sick! (Sytrus rocks)

...and if I really did not like it, I would not leave any constructive critic remarks. It would not be worth my time.
But I would turn up the tempo just a tiny notch. and please finish this track!
lol

I would love to collab with you one day if you are ever interested.
I have a few tracks that needs guitar, and that is one of my weaknesses.

Wow.
I am pretty much speechless.
Your girlfriend has an ornate beauty to her voice. If she ever decides to do an acapella track, please let me know. I wanna be the first to mix it.

One tiny bit of constructive critisism, (and this is something you will fix anyway in a finished version) but turn her voice up.
The track is stellar, but dont hide her. Highlight her.
;)

This Song you created was So beautiful I realy Love your Song!!!

I love this song soooo much even though I have a feeling I know what inspired it. Send me the lyrics to it. I cant sing but I know some peeps who can ;) by far this is my favorite its gonna rock when its all mastered up.

That was a pretty badass track man your main riff was f*&king awsome. Loved it keep em' coming.