Another nice one J. I guess it's just a matter of preference but for me the highlight was your guitar work in the background. Really tasty licks that nonetheless supported the vocals without overwhelming them. Respect!
I like your beat picking skills. Your flow reminds me of rapper "The Grouch." Spoken word element to your style with storytelling added. Nice work man.
This is another hotshot! track from you once again, are you rapping these lyrics off the top of your head or do you write your lyrics down, I'm asking because sometimes when I hear a track the lyrics just come to me and I do one takes off the top of my head, didn't always find that easy but with time it's become like second nature especially if I'm vibing with the track.
Your lyrics are brilliant! they make you think & your delivery as I have always said is so fresh & laid back. TOP! Work here indeed.
The one thing I like about this time of the month is because of Easter holidays & I get a little free time from work to breathe & with all that's going on, this was a breath of fresh air. Keep it up.
Angelus, thanks for getting in early om the comments and taking a listen. I agree it's a hotshot! I never go off the top of my head. Sometimes I'll be writing a verse then I'll hear a beat, and I'm like "ohhh that's the one!" For this one I got lucky I was laying a verse down and I messed up, and the hook came to me.
Usually it's all written out. This was my first track of this style, im hoping the producer makes some more beats like it.
Enjoy your time off. Thanks for all the love.
And remember it aint no vacation with out a in your hand/... I hope that's okay to say.
Thanks for taking a listen. I am glad you found it enjoyable. Believe it or not I get the comment "I don't like rap but I liked this" more often thank you think.
Hey Johnnie, haha, that's also not how I meant it, I'm just this silly amateur. But I've collaborated with people in the past (usually on guitar), I noted you used a drumcomputer for this one, which is absolutely fine.. but I thought maybe if you want a non-computer drum loop, them I can create something for you or with you, or any such variation :)
Of course if you want to pay me for studio work.. but nah, I prefer doing free bits for people whose music I enjoy :)
Just going through my old songs, looking for one to delete so I can upload a new one. This is a nice comment, just thought I'd note that. Id prefer if it was all live instruments, but that's too much to ask for these days.
Me encanta la introducción y esa batería intensa que acompaña tu voz. Profundo bajo y ese coro sintético, que enriquece la pista, es muy agradable y queda muy bien. Buen toque de guitarra. Trabajo de altura. Que tengas un buen día hermano. Paz y salud.
WOW! this beat goes hard! it's such a powerhouse track indeed. You are riding that beat like a champion! like that nonchalant flow you got going on, it suits the track. GREAT lyrics/work! on the beat. Kudos!
Bonito tema amigo mio, con mucha clase, buena voz con mucho sentimiento, un autentico lujo para mis oídos. Me gusta también el ritmo y la mezcla, muy profesional. Que tengas una buena noche hermano. Paz y salud.
Gracias por los buenos deseos. Trato de mantener mis raps en el lado más elegante. A veces me bloquean los escritores y siento que ya lo he dicho todo. Me alegro de que pudieras disfrutarlo.
Nice work Johnnie - you are a little tighter with the vocal here and its very fine as is the lyric. The track is really nice too, wonderful orchestration, etc. A hit for sure : )
The hit maker. Thanks for the gas. Im born to be. Haha. It was done well, this is still an early track out. That's why I love looperman, the community can appreciate a project.
Great track John great flow and vibe red hot beat and melody it's Kanye ISH bro, really good listen and fav, Sheesh scene of the crime, smokey in tha house with the bangers, ends abrupt like you had me dancing bro
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Cam
I am glad it was an enjoyable listen.
Johnnie
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This is another hotshot! track from you once again, are you rapping these lyrics off the top of your head or do you write your lyrics down, I'm asking because sometimes when I hear a track the lyrics just come to me and I do one takes off the top of my head, didn't always find that easy but with time it's become like second nature especially if I'm vibing with the track.
Your lyrics are brilliant! they make you think & your delivery as I have always said is so fresh & laid back. TOP! Work here indeed.
The one thing I like about this time of the month is because of Easter holidays & I get a little free time from work to breathe & with all that's going on, this was a breath of fresh air. Keep it up.
Usually it's all written out. This was my first track of this style, im hoping the producer makes some more beats like it.
Enjoy your time off. Thanks for all the love.
And remember it aint no vacation with out a in your hand/... I hope that's okay to say.
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This is a brilliant track mate.
Your voice is unique.
Well done mate.
Maj
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Of course if you want to pay me for studio work.. but nah, I prefer doing free bits for people whose music I enjoy :)
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M.T.
Im glad you had an enjoyable listen.
Johnnie
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Johnnie
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M.T.
Johnnie
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It does end abruptly. Just put it on repeat!!
Johnnie
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Johnnie
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and Antonio I did not sign my post so let this act as a signature for the reply I gave to you.
Johnnie
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