Really like this track, makes me think of a band named "Bile"
which is not a bad thing :) I like the vocal effects and the way it trails off at the end is a classic move, well done !
Ahh industrial in line with my own tastes, it was a little loud, the mix may need a little adjustment.
Has a Slayer feel to it :D I love Slayer
I think a switch up in the drums around 1:11 would be beneficial.
I'll be honest I like this track but the repetitive nature of the drums has me bored, overall a good effort, I would be interested coming in back to this :)
Thanks man! It's meant to be repetitive but I hear what you're saying. And I agree about the loudness level. My friend who wrote the song with me was just saying that as well so we'll work on that. We appreciate the honest feedback.
Creative use of your vocals. Blowing into the mic and heavily reverb is a great idea. Overall a very solid idea.
I think vocals would add a lot to this and give it an added dimension. Are you planning to add vocals? Hopefully you are. If you would like some help I wouldn't mind taking a crack at something like this. I can hear some Scott Weiland styled vocals in there. I've never tried that style but willing to. If interested give me a shout through the site.
Hey Wayne! Good to hear from you again dude! Thanks for checking it out. Normally I would say yes but I think I want this song to remain as it is. But I'm not opposed to a collaboration with you for this album I'm working on. I'll try to write something and post it here and if you dig it let me know.
Love this. Guitar is thrash worthy but the vox effects and stereo seperation is awesome. This defines the Rust Belt with a dark cynicism of America without question!!!
Cru
Thank you for the kind words man! I really enjoy creating this style of music so I think its time for me to release an EP of this kind of stuff. Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment!
Hey very cool stuff here! Great aggressive momentum! Killer bass sounds, and those vocals are pretty cool too! Haven't seen you around the site lately, hope all is well! I would be willing to take a stab at remixing. I'll message you. Any way good sh*t! Fave!
Fun style and great production on this one! Very vintage sort of sound to my ears. Reminds me a bit of KMFDM, which is of course a good thing. A bit minimal like Numan, but how could that be bad. Jammin tune! Faved for sure!
This sounds like some of my early work. In fact, I have a loop on here that's very similar the main bassline. Very cool. It does need some leads, though. I personally would add some melodic and almost hypnotic leads as a contrast to the sharp and aggressive nature of what's already there. But that's just how I do things.
Good work,man.
Yeah I heard the loops in question and you're right. Pretty similar sound. That's my favorite kind of synth sound. That like distorted bass lead sound. And oddly enough I was considering what you suggested in terms of guitar. I guess great minds think alike huh? :P Thanks for stopping by V!
Thanks for stopping by smallbots! Yeah it's really fun to play. Switching from riff 3 back to riff 1 is a little difficult still but whatever. Time will change that!
Thank you Danke! I emailed someone from here in the hopes that they'd be willing to collab by adding some chugs and leads but if not I may abandon the extra guitar idea and work on bettering what I already have so we shall see. Thanks again bud!
This is a good metal track. Meaning, it really is metal. It's heavy, loud and raw. There's enough of riff change that it doesn't get boring, but they're not so drastic that it loses the grove. The drums are good. I like the fact that there is an actual beat and not just blast beats from beginning to end. However, it's basically the same beat all the way through. It needs some variation and some big-ass fills to bring out the badassery of the tune. Mainly towards the end. Some double kick, and those blast beats would do wonders for that part. This beast rolls along so nicely, but never really seems to take off. But even so, that doesn't hinder what you already have.
As far as Manson being an influence and having a "Manson sound", that doesn't matter. Even Mr. Warner had his influences, ya know?
Overall, this is a quality metal track that deserves more love than it has.
Thanks V! I'll test that out! The thought had crossed over me that the ending was a bit stale so I'm glad you said that. Thanks again for listening and commenting!
greatest respects for mentalitY of your lyriX .
& your voice & execution is suitable for heavY metal
& especiallY such psyco style , jusT I wished there was not such obviously sensible marylin mansonian (if we think it's a new word ! ) vibe in this worthy challenge..althughT I underestand that's my problem ...
I also think your friend's Band which is going to do a remiX will show us real strong ponits of this good instrumental & impressive vocal of yours which tottalY mking this track as a groovy package.i'll looking forward to hear that new remiX too . regards.___Behnam
Thanks deciBel! Yeah Manson is a huge influence, especially Holy Wood. The lyrics just came to me. Its how I was feeling at that moment. I'm stoked for this remix as well!! Thanks for listening!
There is a huge tension in this song with that serious groovy...the synth work is awesome and I like the vocs, though it's so similar but fits for this style, I think...great song, congrats and HNY, Danke
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which is not a bad thing :) I like the vocal effects and the way it trails off at the end is a classic move, well done !
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Has a Slayer feel to it :D I love Slayer
I think a switch up in the drums around 1:11 would be beneficial.
I'll be honest I like this track but the repetitive nature of the drums has me bored, overall a good effort, I would be interested coming in back to this :)
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I think vocals would add a lot to this and give it an added dimension. Are you planning to add vocals? Hopefully you are. If you would like some help I wouldn't mind taking a crack at something like this. I can hear some Scott Weiland styled vocals in there. I've never tried that style but willing to. If interested give me a shout through the site.
Cheers!
Wayne
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I also love the guitars did your friend or you records it or its computed generated ?
Anyway that "weird" track gave me a good experience.
Peace from Master Byleth.
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Good work,man.
Take care.
V.
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Keep up the work!
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As far as Manson being an influence and having a "Manson sound", that doesn't matter. Even Mr. Warner had his influences, ya know?
Overall, this is a quality metal track that deserves more love than it has.
Take care.
V.
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wanna do a track with us?
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& your voice & execution is suitable for heavY metal
& especiallY such psyco style , jusT I wished there was not such obviously sensible marylin mansonian (if we think it's a new word ! ) vibe in this worthy challenge..althughT I underestand that's my problem ...
I also think your friend's Band which is going to do a remiX will show us real strong ponits of this good instrumental & impressive vocal of yours which tottalY mking this track as a groovy package.i'll looking forward to hear that new remiX too . regards.___Behnam
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Love it...
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