Dude, you have skills...period. I am glad to see that you finally started lettin' people download your tracks. What happened to the rest of em? I had some of them marked as favorites but my favs were lost when the site was reconstructed...
Keep makin' tracks dog, you got a fan in me brother.
Nice subbs, nice beat, nice track overall. Props man . Wanna do a collab? I got some half tracks done on my profile lookin for someone to step up to tha plate
I got stress on my chest Trying to raise up off it unnecessary shit bothering me often Not feeling it any longer Standing at a fork in the road I got a hunger, I'm told But the fire that burns can't be controlled Submit to the game or should I stay in my own playground? I don't know But it's starting to feel all the same Like I'm riding a merry-go-round Shit is childish Ain't trying to be selfish any longer But these demons grow stronger with me Raise up off me I got stress on my chest trying to raise up off it visualizing the corners of a coffin trying to bide my time often But with compromise the mind & heart softens
Everyone has great feedback for you. For me, at 2:20 is when it hits it's stride.
After a few listens it really grows on you.
If you've ever seen The Other Guys with Will Ferrel and Mark Walhberg, there is a scene where it's just a montage of 3D images of them partying at a bar, that is exactly how i imagine the music video for this, but instead, mix in a MASE & Puff Daddy video from 1997, and add the graphics of Tron Legacy -- that's this.
yo, yo, yo this is willbraham about to spam your review section. it ain't up for election. democratic? asiatic, and hemertic like odb said it, let me speak...
I turn my game on like nintendo I burn corners like enzos I got benjis, euros, and pesos Come with me and you'll feel so dope Up against the leather while we driving on the deadliest roads but we be the deadliest foes they can't fuck wit me and can't fuck wit my hos fo show I got a show in about half an O so pass the o and I'll pack a bowl hold the wheel as I seal the deal leaving the rest in the dust in their rusted ass busted ass but you and me girl going to last on the finest things you need a ring on it you can have about 15 on it you need a new scene you can be the producer in the editing suite hooking me up with the phat beat and turning the bass up like we're turning up cups after hitting multi-platinum I turn my game on like nintendo burning corners like enzos I got benjis, euros, and pesos You need a ring on it you can have about 15 on it
lol - basically, it's a straight up hip-hop track for me. barrows heavily from rap, but ultimately is about the part pleasing the female and making to shut up and dance - hell, ain't nothing wrong with that. I'm nodding my head ahaha.
You just went HAM on this review. What you should do: Record that verse so I can hear how you would flow it! Damn bro I gotta get flowers for my page now cuz you killed it!
Damn i was going to say the same thing BrainDeadEBPR Said, this shit is wicked man! BTW i uploaded another track and again i go a lil crazy on the shares, lol check it out if u want...Peace keep them coming!!
I think if you threw some brass...would livein it up.
it's not that it sounds a different genre...you can make anythin into hiphop.....but to some it might sound boring.or doesn't have enough fiya .even doesn't sound to hiphop'ish..just gotta remember that vocals change a track....Bone thugs n harmony.
not everythin they made was hard hittin hiphop....but that's what some expect...heavy kicks..or it's not considered hiphop
Thank you for that Brass Idea. I think if anyone wants the track and I hear vocals I will definitely add a brass part. Im gonna play with it just incase that comes to light. I get what you mean tho, the track is not crazy complex as some may need it to be, your dead on about the vocals and thank you for the bone thugs n harmony reference (this should inspire some new ideas). Feel free to comment however long you like, don't let this be the last track you review. I will be listening to your work in a moment. Stay Safe Stay Serous.
I certainly wouldn't have thought to put the piano with the synth, I found that a very original idea , complex melody form which sounds very logic though, the piano adds a jazz sort of feeling behind the more dance part making me think of a game of cards or something, maybe poker; really good track; See you've put the voices at the end again for the ending, really like that sound.
Thank you for your review. Sometimes I just pick random instruments but I always start with the piano. Good 2 see you checked out some more tracks I uploaded. I will definitely check you out again.
This track needs desperately vocals! It sounds fenomenal, I thought youre another one who things he can makes instrumentals for artists but you really can! Believe me, you have great skills. I will keep my eyes on you! PS It is hard to match strings with synths like you did at the ending. You succeded.
Damn, thats all i can say, damn. I felt i had to check your stuff out since you checked mine out and im glad i did cuz this was crazy good. keep it up man.
Thank you for listening and leaving your words. I believe there is always room 4 improvement so we need to know how to improve by someone letting us know. Don't let this be the last track you hear from me as I will be checking you out some more. No pressure.
Man thanks for your reviews you have a special way with words. I have never been to Laguna Seca but thank you for giving me the knowledge to learn something new. This is what I do to live. HMU anytime.
yo man its mana steele, first of all welcome back its been along time sice our last collaboration...but the wait is over! as soon as i was able to log on i stareted to look for some beats and you never fail (btw this track is fire) i did something to "the system" instrumental you got, give it a listen when you have time. i hope you like. peace.
WELCOME BACK! It has been a hot minute so I know you goin harder now time has past. I want to say thank you for blessing the instrumentals and lets keep this poppin. It would be nice to get in the studio together so lets shoot for that. I dont like it, I love it. Peace.
Earlier today I reviewed someones rap track with your instrumental, it was very good but this is awesome; very good rap track, and the name of this track describes it well, great synth melody with a electronic feel to it but also made for rap, and your beats are great, strange ending though with the childrens voices, not sure why that was there...
Thank you for listening and leaving feedback. I use the children's voices as a signature. It makes me feel good hearing the ideas people have to offer. Each work I try to do things different but keep it relative of the key. Mad Props to you.
Commented on Hydro by 06BentonMcKenzie06
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/119536
I LOVED THIS TRACK MAN HERE IS THE LINK
to me rapping on it
Commented on Hydro by 06BentonMcKenzie06
Dude, you have skills...period. I am glad to see that you finally started lettin' people download your tracks. What happened to the rest of em? I had some of them marked as favorites but my favs were lost when the site was reconstructed...
Keep makin' tracks dog, you got a fan in me brother.
Commented on Betta by 06BentonMcKenzie06
Nice subbs, nice beat, nice track overall. Props man . Wanna do a collab? I got some half tracks done on my profile lookin for someone to step up to tha plate
Commented on Betta by 06BentonMcKenzie06
Nice layed bacc beat. I bet it sounds good in the car. I like that sub.
Commented on Betta by 06BentonMcKenzie06
its a banger fasho i would leave it as is
Commented on Betta by 06BentonMcKenzie06
Good shit man I like it
Commented on Betta by 06BentonMcKenzie06
I got stress on my chest
Trying to raise up off it
unnecessary shit bothering me often
Not feeling it any longer
Standing at a fork in the road
I got a hunger, I'm told
But the fire that burns can't be controlled
Submit to the game
or should I stay in my own playground?
I don't know
But it's starting to feel all the same
Like I'm riding a merry-go-round
Shit is childish
Ain't trying to be selfish any longer
But these demons grow stronger with me
Raise up off me
I got stress on my chest
trying to raise up off it
visualizing the corners of a coffin
trying to bide my time often
But with compromise the mind & heart softens
The track is deep bro. I can't touch it.
Commented on Betta by 06BentonMcKenzie06
It comes straight from the source, you are there! Great sound as usually, I wish I could make 'lay-back' tracks like this, but I am a nervous guy...
Commented on Betta by 06BentonMcKenzie06
Feelin' this bro.
_C-DUB_
Commented on Games by 06BentonMcKenzie06
Everyone has great feedback for you. For me, at 2:20 is when it hits it's stride.
After a few listens it really grows on you.
If you've ever seen The Other Guys with Will Ferrel and Mark Walhberg, there is a scene where it's just a montage of 3D images of them partying at a bar, that is exactly how i imagine the music video for this, but instead, mix in a MASE & Puff Daddy video from 1997, and add the graphics of Tron Legacy -- that's this.
yo, yo, yo
this is willbraham about to spam your review section. it ain't up for election. democratic? asiatic, and hemertic like odb said it, let me speak...
I turn my game on like nintendo
I burn corners like enzos
I got benjis, euros, and pesos
Come with me and you'll feel so dope
Up against the leather
while we driving on the deadliest roads
but we be the deadliest foes
they can't fuck wit me
and can't fuck wit my hos
fo show
I got a show in about half an O
so pass the o and I'll pack a bowl
hold the wheel as I seal the deal
leaving the rest in the dust
in their rusted ass busted ass
but you and me girl going to last on the finest things
you need a ring on it
you can have about 15 on it
you need a new scene
you can be the producer in the editing suite
hooking me up with the phat beat and turning the bass up
like we're turning up cups after hitting multi-platinum
I turn my game on like nintendo
burning corners like enzos
I got benjis, euros, and pesos
You need a ring on it
you can have about 15 on it
lol - basically, it's a straight up hip-hop track for me. barrows heavily from rap, but ultimately is about the part pleasing the female and making to shut up and dance - hell, ain't nothing wrong with that. I'm nodding my head ahaha.
MOAR
Commented on Games by 06BentonMcKenzie06
this is well put together and it has a great bassline.
Sound quality is clean and crisp.
VOCALS!!!
Great work keep it up.
Commented on Halfway Sick by 06BentonMcKenzie06
Damn i was going to say the same thing BrainDeadEBPR Said, this shit is wicked man! BTW i uploaded another track and again i go a lil crazy on the shares, lol check it out if u want...Peace
keep them coming!!
Commented on Games by 06BentonMcKenzie06
I think if you threw some brass...would livein it up.
it's not that it sounds a different genre...you can make anythin into hiphop.....but to some it might sound boring.or doesn't have enough fiya .even doesn't sound to hiphop'ish..just gotta remember that vocals change a track....Bone thugs n harmony.
not everythin they made was hard hittin hiphop....but that's what some expect...heavy kicks..or it's not considered hiphop
ok to much ramblin..i'm outa here
but I like it
keep on that grind homie
Commented on Games by 06BentonMcKenzie06
I certainly wouldn't have thought to put the piano with the synth, I found that a very original idea , complex melody form which sounds very logic though, the piano adds a jazz sort of feeling behind the more dance part making me think of a game of cards or something, maybe poker; really good track;
See you've put the voices at the end again for the ending, really like that sound.
Commented on Hydro by 06BentonMcKenzie06
This track needs desperately vocals! It sounds fenomenal, I thought youre another one who things he can makes instrumentals for artists but you really can! Believe me, you have great skills. I will keep my eyes on you!
PS It is hard to match strings with synths like you did at the ending. You succeded.
Commented on Games by 06BentonMcKenzie06
I hear a commercial modern track.
I sounds well ballanced and full.
I would make it more 'agressive'
Commented on Hydro by 06BentonMcKenzie06
like this track bro nice 1 got me doing a little acapella in me chair lol
Commented on Halfway Sick by 06BentonMcKenzie06
Damn, thats all i can say, damn.
I felt i had to check your stuff out since you checked mine out and im glad i did cuz this was crazy good.
keep it up man.
Commented on Hydro by 06BentonMcKenzie06
Oh my god bro....you make beats that are unheard of. You have this clean futuristic undertone to it all.
I feel like I'm in Blade Runner but on the penthouse level looking down at the crazy streets. Neon lights and contemplation.
Commented on Halfway Sick by 06BentonMcKenzie06
More like fully sick!
I feel like rolling down the freeway to this. DAMN THIS THING IS DOPE!
I really like the saws and synths...makes me feel like I'm at Laguna Seca. The whistles are also tight.
Holy crap as soon as the beat drops out....dude...I don't know what you do for a living but you make mad beats.
Commented on Halfway Sick by 06BentonMcKenzie06
Real nice beat!!..like the switch up too,works well!love the strings in the switch up part,and that synth sits nice,good stuff!!
Commented on Halfway Sick by 06BentonMcKenzie06
Nice. I like how u flipped it half-way through tha track.
_C-DUB_
Commented on Hydro by 06BentonMcKenzie06
yo man its mana steele, first of all welcome back its been along time sice our last collaboration...but the wait is over! as soon as i was able to log on i stareted to look for some beats and you never fail (btw this track is fire) i did something to "the system" instrumental you got, give it a listen when you have time. i hope you like. peace.
Commented on Hydro by 06BentonMcKenzie06
Earlier today I reviewed someones rap track with your instrumental, it was very good but this is awesome; very good rap track, and the name of this track describes it well, great synth melody with a electronic feel to it but also made for rap,
and your beats are great, strange ending though with the childrens voices, not sure why that was there...