Very nice. Pleasing to the ears. Your song craft skills are very real. Enjoyed this 1 from start to finish. Maybe 4 bars of a key change to release that 'happy' feeling but it sounds nicely done the way it is. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
The melody sounds nice. Enchanting in a way. I can also hear those chants in the background. I love the sitar sound. This sounds sensual and exotic. Very good bassline. Around 2:30 when the horns came in I wanted them to go higher but still fine. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Kind of hard to keep time on this 1. I hear alot of elements but I can not hear any direction. Try it again but build around the guitar and hit parts. It sounds like you have not quantized anything. Even the smallest percent of quantize, 40-70% will tighten your parts and not have them sound computerish. Otherwise, solid effort and congrats on the upload. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Sounds big. Can put you n a trance. The strings compliment very well. Maybe add some sound fx to give it that 'political uproar' 'public protest' sound. Good melody. TIght work. Only 1 way but up!
You did a good job with this 1. The hook is right on it. I can still hear the many synths so that is good. You made it almost RnB but still Dub feel. That is amazing to me. Sounds like a fantasy/fairytale. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Love how it comes on, quick and straight to it. The vox sample fits well, it adds another dimension. It feels like there could be trouble in paradise but it still could be paradise. Great synth combination. Nice break around 2:00. A clean ending would be nice. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Damn nice. I would like to hear the music more then the beat so try a quick level check. Very impressive parts musically. Enjoyed from start 2 finish. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
That intro is killer. Love that part around 1:45. I like the fact your not afraid to go crazy with the snare. That bell like sound is okay but to me does not belong. Cool fade to end. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
I like the track. Not a bad song at all. I enjoyed the panning. What I don't like is that radio like voice at the beginning. Pretty cheesy. The second drop sounds better then the first drop. Otherwise, tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Cool percussion. A bit deep on the low end. Add some light by using higher registers. Good switch around 2:30. There is a bleep @ the end. Tight work, only 1 way but up!
Lookin' outside my window. Unfamiliar people presently on property. Watching them. Calmly equipping myself. Adrenaline. Excitement builds as their movement continues. I feel like I have done this before. Different scenarios flash in front of my eyes. Like an animal in the wild. I watch. I wait. (4:30) My heartbeat increases. In an instant the unfamiliars disappear. I have engaged. The battle is fierce. Only for a moment. Now what to do(7:45) The harsh reality sets in. There are unknown answers I must produce for these pressuring questions. I do not surrender. Because this has happened before. (9:30) I am alive. ---------- This is where you took my mind with your music. Tight work, only 1 way but up!
I really appreciate all your feedback. You're basically receiving my songs how I want them to be received. I guess I'm emulating a lot of cinematic and visual effects and trying to transpose them into music form. I love film, music, soundtracks, and editing things together. Again, thank you for the feed back, it motivates me to post more of my tracks which are numbered around 60, but I was just kind of procrastinating.
Good groove. Nice 1 bringing that synth in around 1:45 it creates pleasure. Feels sad in a way. Like saying goodbye to someone who keeps leaving and coming back. Now Im right there watching someone drown at the beach, slowly surfacing on the sand. Its the piano that does that. Gotta love that piano. The percussion represents the wall of water. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
It very much is a portrait. You are an excellent musician and have a very refined ear. Here is the video for Sketch Today (sketch the day) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5ZIPsth5dmQ
If you take a look, you'll see that my inspiration for the piece was very much as a portrait of our planet.
That drum sound is killer. That bass line is nasty. Ol school nasty. Like the piano chords maybe change out the piano melody for another synth. That change around 1:30 is wicked where the bass really goes off so watch 4 clashing. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
I love those cuts. It really adds that 'extra'. Soldier. Love the vibe. The lyrics sound crystal. Nice overall mix. The end I wanted to hear a hook and also I think I heard a glitch in the music @ the end. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Love the filter sweep. Great way 2 start off the groove and it sounds like a cooler ambulance siren! Epic intro. Love the panning. Very dance like. Could also sing over it as well. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
This feels like a situation starter. The introduction. Less is more in this case. Deep and can be expounded with even a hint of lyrics. Singing would fit over it too. Very ambient. Love the unexpected change around 2:00. 'Don't Get Caught In The Storm Trying To Get Through The Storm'. Tight work, only 1 way but up!
Thanks for the vibe. I also write poems and I have a project in mind to mix poetry with ambient music. Done that in two tracks (see my prof). I write in my native tongue though (Polish).
IMA MASTER DAT! Boi I promise u a beast with the hooks! I like how you ride the track it make me want to add different elements wen I hear how u freak it. Email me for .wav So you can have a1 quality. Tight work, only 1 way but up!
i jus wanna say i respect what you do, you said we almost have tha sme style when it comes to beat making, but i say u are the better half of it, you make some emotional instrumentals and i write wat i hear n feel. they inspire me. soon the looperman community's will notice us, cuz these hit aint stopin no time soon. once again thank you
Commented on Looperman Unofficial Anthem by LuckyFlaush
Very nice. Pleasing to the ears. Your song craft skills are very real. Enjoyed this 1 from start to finish. Maybe 4 bars of a key change to release that 'happy' feeling but it sounds nicely done the way it is. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Commented on Good Days by LuckyFlaush
The melody sounds nice. Enchanting in a way. I can also hear those chants in the background. I love the sitar sound. This sounds sensual and exotic. Very good bassline. Around 2:30 when the horns came in I wanted them to go higher but still fine. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Commented on Nuclear Bomb Instrumental by JamesDavies
Kind of hard to keep time on this 1. I hear alot of elements but I can not hear any direction. Try it again but build around the guitar and hit parts. It sounds like you have not quantized anything. Even the smallest percent of quantize, 40-70% will tighten your parts and not have them sound computerish. Otherwise, solid effort and congrats on the upload. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Commented on Political Streets by lostcause25
Sounds big. Can put you n a trance. The strings compliment very well. Maybe add some sound fx to give it that 'political uproar' 'public protest' sound. Good melody. TIght work. Only 1 way but up!
Commented on Same Ol Record by MusicByManic
I applaud your spirit. Vocals sound clear. Hardcore hip hop. Personally, 'I don't want to spin the same ol record.' Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Commented on All Work-Feat KJ and Shaq-Prod By Stretta by SimplicityBeats
I can dig. Verses sound clear. Tighten up the hook if u can. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Commented on fallen from the stars by lostcause25
You did a good job with this 1. The hook is right on it. I can still hear the many synths so that is good. You made it almost RnB but still Dub feel. That is amazing to me. Sounds like a fantasy/fairytale. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Commented on EMOTIONS by lostcause25
Love how it comes on, quick and straight to it. The vox sample fits well, it adds another dimension. It feels like there could be trouble in paradise but it still could be paradise. Great synth combination. Nice break around 2:00. A clean ending would be nice. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Commented on Violin Track by BrainDeadEBPR
Damn nice. I would like to hear the music more then the beat so try a quick level check. Very impressive parts musically. Enjoyed from start 2 finish. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Commented on On the Beach by 4bryan4
That intro is killer. Love that part around 1:45. I like the fact your not afraid to go crazy with the snare. That bell like sound is okay but to me does not belong. Cool fade to end. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Commented on CLUB IS ON FIRE by natenasty1
I like the track. Not a bad song at all. I enjoyed the panning. What I don't like is that radio like voice at the beginning. Pretty cheesy. The second drop sounds better then the first drop. Otherwise, tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Commented on Teenaged Surfing Pizza Ninjas by Willbraham
Cool percussion. A bit deep on the low end. Add some light by using higher registers. Good switch around 2:30. There is a bleep @ the end. Tight work, only 1 way but up!
Commented on Enjoy Yourself (In Room 13) by Willbraham
ROTFL. This is exactly what that is. Tight work, only 1 way but up!
Commented on I Ran Through the Ocean of Fire by Willbraham
Lookin' outside my window. Unfamiliar people presently on property. Watching them. Calmly equipping myself. Adrenaline. Excitement builds as their movement continues. I feel like I have done this before. Different scenarios flash in front of my eyes. Like an animal in the wild. I watch. I wait. (4:30) My heartbeat increases. In an instant the unfamiliars disappear. I have engaged. The battle is fierce. Only for a moment. Now what to do(7:45) The harsh reality sets in. There are unknown answers I must produce for these pressuring questions. I do not surrender. Because this has happened before. (9:30) I am alive.
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This is where you took my mind with your music. Tight work, only 1 way but up!
Commented on Conk Shell Girl on A Rainy Beach by Willbraham
Good groove. Nice 1 bringing that synth in around 1:45 it creates pleasure. Feels sad in a way. Like saying goodbye to someone who keeps leaving and coming back. Now Im right there watching someone drown at the beach, slowly surfacing on the sand. Its the piano that does that. Gotta love that piano. The percussion represents the wall of water. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Commented on Sketch Today - Sketch the Day by Willbraham
It sounds like a portrait. The pads and synths give it a good jam session feel. Very pleasing to the ears. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Commented on Insert Here by Willbraham
The drums sound live. Loving the drum efx. Also loving that piano/synth keys. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Commented on bicik131 by WSD13
That drum sound is killer. That bass line is nasty. Ol school nasty. Like the piano chords maybe change out the piano melody for another synth. That change around 1:30 is wicked where the bass really goes off so watch 4 clashing. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Commented on Soldier by nepaul
I love those cuts. It really adds that 'extra'. Soldier. Love the vibe. The lyrics sound crystal. Nice overall mix. The end I wanted to hear a hook and also I think I heard a glitch in the music @ the end. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Commented on FunkinCrunk by TonyRay
Nice orchestral feel with the strings. Maybe change the hi hat out otherwise nice. Good ending. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Commented on Dance On by Dudeyourdead
Love the filter sweep. Great way 2 start off the groove and it sounds like a cooler ambulance siren! Epic intro. Love the panning. Very dance like. Could also sing over it as well. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Commented on Through The Storm by RootsRat
This feels like a situation starter. The introduction. Less is more in this case. Deep and can be expounded with even a hint of lyrics. Singing would fit over it too. Very ambient. Love the unexpected change around 2:00. 'Don't Get Caught In The Storm Trying To Get Through The Storm'. Tight work, only 1 way but up!
Commented on ALMOST HAD IT ALL - ADELE CHOP by 2GRUFF2
Very creative. The music and the lyrics. I like the screw voice. Deep meaning. Passion. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Commented on Just Enough - Prod By alpha2 by ManofSteele
I like this 1. You a do a nice job of bringing tracks to life. You + The Beat = Deadly Combination. Tight work, only 1 way but up!
Commented on Master Dat Body - Prod By 06BentonMcKenzie06 by ManofSteele
IMA MASTER DAT! Boi I promise u a beast with the hooks! I like how you ride the track it make me want to add different elements wen I hear how u freak it. Email me for .wav So you can have a1 quality. Tight work, only 1 way but up!