larrybarrow31

You ready to flip this? I got something from the soul that dam near makes me want to cry each time I spit it.

This has a pleasing melodic element, and a good pop rhythm. I'm listening quietly, but it seems to lack a bass line. Seems like this would be a necessary next step. Hoping you can develop it and get some cool vocals laid down. Enjoyed listening!

I missed this one.. I hear some beautiful gospel chords. I would like to add some piano or organ to this...

Nice one man! Love the chilled vibes :D

Very "Yes" like. Maybe you could you use a bass line. I think that is all you would need. Thanks for the listen -- PDMuzak

DAM LOVE THE PIECE GREAT WORK WOULD HAVE LOVED SOME SHUFFLES N SPEED UP HATS SO SPICE IT UP BUT ALL IN ALL GREAT WORK GOSH BIN RIDING TO THIS BEAT ITS HELLA

NICE CONCEPT MAN LIKE THE WRITTNG STYLE

This is nice and different it don't even need no singer,u can rap the hook if you catch it at the right time and it would sound good

nice one
why to delete it are you crazy?
and also if you are looking for a man for rapping
hit me up ;)

I was listening to all tracks I was really enjoying them all. really good work on the this track.

I think one can only add to this once we know where your vocalist is going with it. Maybe all it needs are her vocals and some harmonies. The only thing I would change is your kick. It's a matter of taste, but for me I would look for something with a little more "thickness", like a bass-ier kick. This one sounds a bit "thin". I hope you understand what I'm trying to say...sometimes you have to say weird things when trying to explain sound.
Good track man.

Very nice piece of music! It surely deserves an expansion..

Congrats______Orlando

dude sorry about your loss and I must say you have got your inspiration right there,MUSIC.This tells me how good you are doing this, coz this track right here is totally totally sick. well,though unfinished, you've got something superb going and you must complete it.Love the track and hope you get down and finish it.Its got world class potential.keep it up

Bro absolutely sick with it.
Got that Lyfe Jennings sound going.

Great start to this, keep at this one, I like the Minneapolis sound feel to it as well. Awesome work
Cru

Too short!
Would have enjoyed more.
:)

Great track bro..the only problem that I had with it was, it was too short..had to hit replay to get my fill.Great work.

Home run...With some final touches, synth off the top
don't really sound like a guitar...
I would play it like the synth it is, a guitar on my part
would be no problem, give that part a sweet flavor...
Your call... :)

Outstanding start hit the nail on the head with this one...

Peace...TG.

Really liking the melody and tone of your voice on this snippet.could be a great track,very commercial sound.

I like this beat it kinda got that G funk vibe.

chill shiz

I LOVE this track soooo much.. Definitely a new fave on my list

OK...Lets get to work, if that's where you're going to put the voices then
maybe my guitar is just a touch too loud...
Wish I had the track with voices, then I could lock in and dance in between...

I'm lovin this sound, got my vote for sure...

PM...Me if you like we can work it out...No Problem..

Peace...TG.

Hello

Just wanted to say i enjoyed that snipp. It has a smooth Carl Thomas feel to it. Nice harmony as well. Would love to here the finished product.

priceless beatz

I have a suggestion. What if you changed the Note Velocity, of the piano to make it more emotional otherwise it is just hard played with no variations.

I could be wrong, but that is what I think it needs.