its not bad!!...but it need more action it sounds to fast monotone and your mastering is not really good....work it over and thake more time for this song than it can be a good track....greetings Matcher
I think that base and lead are too loud at the start. Drums are nice realy banging and goes well with the base and lead synth. Well its nice but needs more work, and it also ends too loud. But it has the potential to be great... Peace out
Cool groove! It almost feels like the intro is too long or something. I like the break you give the listener around 1:40 though. Doesn't seem to be missing anything. Nice one!
Whoa! Dude. I am totally reminded of that one track that was in the movie Blade right now (Blood Pumpin or somethin like that, can't remember now it's been so long).
And it's changed (sad face). Haha, not really. The transition was pretty decent. Though its another shorty (real sad face).
I wish this was longer, man. I'm thinkin it could easily hit the 5 or 6 min mark and still retain its freshness. Man, you've got to finish this one mate. Later on!
Since yer using the same screen name as your stage name, you don't need to include it in the title of the song too. Kinda redundant, ya know? Just figured I'd share that with ya.
As for the track, Play 2= The track starts off kinda basic and I really didn't have any idea about where it was gonna go. I really dig the way it progressed (specially past the voc-sam of 'bass', though I'm not normally a big fan of vocal stabs and such).
Anyways, you said this is currently unfinished? I could discuss music ideas with ya all day, but I might have a quicker solution here (even as much as I hate doing it)...
Check out my song Lightswitch Rave 2 on here. Kinda has a similar vibe, maybe. And it might give you some ideas.
Oh, and another good track to check out is...
GameboiX- 1 Hour work (or something like that). Another one with a similar vibe to this. I think you'll dig that one too.
Also, would you mind if I used this maybe (prolly a remixed version) in my Lightswitch megamix? I'd shoot you a copy of the remix to use however ya wanted afterwards. Thanks for sharing. Later on!
As this song is my first real song I've ever made, it may not sound so good to some people..
I'm kindof ''newb'' at this producing thing.. so every advice I can get may help me progress..
Gonna check those songs later..
As for that remix,
I don't mind at all..
You may remix this song if you like ;)
It´s worth if u look for a singer!!
Your song is cool, but needs an acca-pella to become more intresting...
I suggest you also extend itadding a bassline and a strong synth at the end!!
The mark i´ll give to your song is a 7 1/2!! Bey
everything on this track is 9/10, but without a bassline, the tracks only a 7 or an 8. Still really like it though, this track's definately going places.
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Well yeah, this song requires more work.. because I made this song in couple of hours..
Going to improve this song someday
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many have said that ;)
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liked it a lot.
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techno but a good track anywayz,keep it up:))
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Yeah, I though about the same thing..
this song would soung great with voice..
But there is one problem..
I can't find solist..
my own voice suks, so I can't record it :D
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And it's changed (sad face). Haha, not really. The transition was pretty decent. Though its another shorty (real sad face).
I wish this was longer, man. I'm thinkin it could easily hit the 5 or 6 min mark and still retain its freshness. Man, you've got to finish this one mate. Later on!
I really hope that I will make it longer and finish this song completely.. and maybe I will add some vocals.. ;)
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Since yer using the same screen name as your stage name, you don't need to include it in the title of the song too. Kinda redundant, ya know? Just figured I'd share that with ya.
As for the track, Play 2= The track starts off kinda basic and I really didn't have any idea about where it was gonna go. I really dig the way it progressed (specially past the voc-sam of 'bass', though I'm not normally a big fan of vocal stabs and such).
Anyways, you said this is currently unfinished? I could discuss music ideas with ya all day, but I might have a quicker solution here (even as much as I hate doing it)...
Check out my song Lightswitch Rave 2 on here. Kinda has a similar vibe, maybe. And it might give you some ideas.
Oh, and another good track to check out is...
GameboiX- 1 Hour work (or something like that). Another one with a similar vibe to this. I think you'll dig that one too.
Also, would you mind if I used this maybe (prolly a remixed version) in my Lightswitch megamix? I'd shoot you a copy of the remix to use however ya wanted afterwards. Thanks for sharing. Later on!
As this song is my first real song I've ever made, it may not sound so good to some people..
I'm kindof ''newb'' at this producing thing.. so every advice I can get may help me progress..
Gonna check those songs later..
As for that remix,
I don't mind at all..
You may remix this song if you like ;)
cheers!
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nice job man ! :D
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Your song is cool, but needs an acca-pella to become more intresting...
I suggest you also extend itadding a bassline and a strong synth at the end!!
The mark i´ll give to your song is a 7 1/2!! Bey
I will think about it .. :)
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thanks for advice ;)