Eldon1991

Niceeee I like the drums before drop
the track sounds like electro STEp ;)
when you finish it will be more danceble and hard ;)
GG PEACE ;)

i like dis , has a good flow a nice mc would sound sick on it with the grunt bass

job well done

not for of grime m8,nearly there! im not sayin it aint good tho man. jus need to mybe do what kizzer1011 said n slow drum dwn abit..think bass n kick need to have a liitle mre dirt to em lol
jus keep messin round with it m8,n save different versions everytime.then look back n listen n see which one u thinks is the best or wether two could get merged together or summat.
Anyways m8,keep up ur good wrk..ur better than me anyways!
Peace

This is totally sick and awesome! Lovin the bass work! Gutsy title too, it suits the track though! Nice synth work too, those melodies are very catchy! Definitely needs to be longer though, it left me hungering for more. Nice work!

ill.
this track is terminal. your bass and synth work are supurb. you know what my only criticism is gonna be...I WANT IT TO BE LONGER! lol
dirty work...kudos!

i like this dude.
alot more compicated then my tracks.
keep bangin at em.

hey eldon,

im starting an online radio show playing dubstep and i wanna get ur permission to drop 'I'm Dub For Life' on the shows,
emm, u hav to be an unsigned artist (no record deal) and the track needs to have been completely made by you, okay have a great xmas, keep churning out the tunes and make sure u reply 2 me,

lee.

Pretty dope, but I'd wanna modulate the organ sounds some what. They sound overly 'plastic' maybe. Igeneral really nice composition, but with some e xtras in the mastering including some sub range treatments, you'd punch it through real hardstyle.

Keep it dubbing.

nice man. the melodies mix well.

one thing, i guess it's just a personal preference, but i'd work on the beats. not so much the beat samples, more so the sequencing. you want that syncopated sound, you want it to sound slightly broken to give it that disjointed dubstep vibe. maybe adding some swing, or just manually placing some additional HH in. also, have a go at pitching your drum samples down. in order to do this, you will need to tighten the samples up, thus giving it that PUNCH sound, which is vital in making dubstep.

ohhh, another trick i like to use is layering. layer your snares to get a fuller sound. don't forget to tighten them also. if u layer a snappy clap over a thick dnb snare and then add a mid range snare to that, you get a really nice punchy snare that snaps nicely.

but man, props on the tune so far. the bassline is deffs there.
well done man.

PEACE!
Butcha d-_-b

Nice melody :) i like it

I really like the drum beats on this track a lot. It's good to hear some organ on this track, but anyone who knows me knows I love organs. Very cool bass progression! Nice arrangement to this track, it all flows nicely! Great work!

yeh man its a pretty blessed song da drums could be slowed down a bit, even though your not really a fan of grime, id say your pretty natural at it you should do some more songs. well put it this way, ive made about 100 grime beats and i downloaded yours so keep working at it, safe init

I like how this song pans back and forth in the beginning. The gun shots fit this song well and then like the door opening? Thats what i got out of it anyways. HAHA. I dont know if its "Grime." Anyways I like it its a fun song.

pieced together nicely, keep it up, ul come out with a banger one day!!
nice artwork on ur wall there by the way!!

Not bad on this one man, I see your pretty fresh to the site and first of all, welcome to the loop. I've checked out your other tacks and this is the better out of em all. It definitely needs to be longer, could of used some more variations, maybe some orchestra ambiance or some reverse synths to give that eerie presence, still not a bad job though. Look forward to hearing more of your stuff.

J DOT ~ 2006