Zivonmusic

Used this loop here
https://youtu.be/pF40hys9krY

Great Track Zivon...! Keep on PLAY!!

I like this piece, there's some great sound layering to draw my ear in, and I like the changes from lighter to heavy bass, and also the piano outro. One suggestion - I think it could use a break somewhere in it, maybe the piano in the middle, and then drop back in to the heavy stuff. My mind wanted a bit more evolution. For what it's worth!

A picture is worth a thousand words but a song can tell a thousand stories. You compose the layers brilliantly to portray the main theme of the song. It feels brisk hearing those pads, like a soft gale sweeping across snowy plains.

I reckon if you want to continue with this concept you could interpolate the story of the wolf and the ice planet with a theme you find personally reflective or relevant to society and then express it as lyrics.

I heard one of your songs and immediately I loved your sound, had to bookmark your tracks page so I could get around to listening to each one and reflecting upon it.

To be honest there is no definition layer wise to a complete song, an incomplete song would perhaps have issues in mastering which haven't been addressed yet but your songs are pure fidelity. To my ears it's a beautifully composed ambient/chill track.

I really like the concepts of your music, this song especially aspires to be groovy and relaxed. I also enjoy how you've crafted up some very basic melodies and utilized them uniquely to your chilled style.

You make great electronic tracks which combine components of many styles, makes the reach of your music far more dynamic for different audiences.

I do like this, it´s a nice chord progression. The vocals need to come up in the mix. They are still buried in the back of the song. Also might I suggest dropping a little cash on buying Valhalla VST. It is the most amazing reverb, digital echo you will ever work with, and it´s not that expensive. If your going to mix vocals, you will need it. overall it´s progressing lovely.
carry on
Cru

Interesting song!

Like BLEEP, I identify this mostly with electo and/or pop. Like BradoSanz I found the vocals almost unintelligible.

With that said, the song had a lot of potential in many ways. Well thought out, well arranged, and a really nice sounding mix and master!

The song actually is a pleasant surprise, yet you must forgive my intoxication. I wanted to record, but my neighbors made too much noise. This song is the right kind of noise, and I would say it under oath.

This is going in that faves, and I thank you for the DL!

The music is good in my limited experience of electronic music, but what seems to be most obviously flawed is the vocal mixing. It is covered up and drowned in reverb. I would suggest panning it more directly center (reverb included) so that it stands out more. Also, it could also benefit from a little bit of volume increase to my ears. Right now, it is too drowned out to be heard. Give it a shot and see what happens!

Best,

Brado

nice electro pop song!

bleep

you are a genius!!!!!!!

donno...for me it's a finished song...2 minutes full creativity, maybe you can add some plus on the drums (percussions) but it's not really necessary...great, great tracky....
bit sounds like a trailer music...

congrats and handshake, Danke

like that

=) I love it

I like it :)

Epic song which could be use in a fantasy game probably.
nice feeling
congrates

Not sure about the picture but the track is very cinematic sounding so visual in some sense.
Great little tune.
Nicely put together.

Wow, this is really cool and unique! I think it fits the picture pretty well. I'm considering entering a contest where you have to make a track based on a specific picture, which is what it sounds like you did hear. I'd imagine it's probably harder than I think to do that, buy you did it well :)

seriously perfect

gut stuff

nice one~

I can try to remaster it for you if you would like to send me the stems. I think it sounds really good and I would like to hear more of your work. lmk thanks

Sounds like a great tune to me.
My only criticism is you seem to be making the same mistakes I keep making .... not getting the levels right.
You need to add raise and lower some volumes here and there.

Dude I would deem this finished tbh. It's a bloody good track. I love it!
Keep it up!

yeah it's cool man. Make sure you're not deeming it unfinished when it is, this can be a sort of catch-22... sometimes they are finished, sometimes not... sometimes I could make 50 versions of 1 song and they'd all be cool, sometimes sometimes...

Maybe try checking out https://www.freesound.org and searching some words to see what inspires ya

have fun