Zivonmusic

gut stuff

nice one~

I can try to remaster it for you if you would like to send me the stems. I think it sounds really good and I would like to hear more of your work. lmk thanks

Sounds like a great tune to me.
My only criticism is you seem to be making the same mistakes I keep making .... not getting the levels right.
You need to add raise and lower some volumes here and there.

Dude I would deem this finished tbh. It's a bloody good track. I love it!
Keep it up!

yeah it's cool man. Make sure you're not deeming it unfinished when it is, this can be a sort of catch-22... sometimes they are finished, sometimes not... sometimes I could make 50 versions of 1 song and they'd all be cool, sometimes sometimes...

Maybe try checking out https://www.freesound.org and searching some words to see what inspires ya

have fun

I came up with putting silent screams within the beat

Where like lyrics or concept is to recite things one wouldn't be able to say unless hearing this beat

Empowering

No doubt!
-Ramey J

really good song for relaxing at home :)

bleep

AMAZING

Cool!

Awesome

this remind me my 2012 dubstep period when i use to play call of duty while listening some good dubstep huh idk why really dope tho i like it

I've enjoyed this track. Everything sounds good to me. But I'm not really a fan of the sound that comes in around 2:26 and onward. Those sounds in my opinion doesn't really fit the theme of the track and it really hurts the track. To me this track sounds like a fantasy chillstep track and I believe all the sounds you use should fit said theme. I would suggest changing the sounds that come in towards the end to something more light rather than the hard-ish sounds used. Once you fix that I think this track would be great and vocals will only add.

Nice work!

I love your song, can I use it to sing on it for my EP? I'll give you credits :)

this is a fantastic soundtrack music...the last theme when the hero found her love and they just sit together silently and stare to the horizon think about the 3rd world war and the result : they are the last ones...:-)

as you said it's a bit rough mix, we can hear it at the end, around 2.45 when some groovy bass? synth appears in a horribly overdriven status...

handshake, Danke

Good really relaxingg

I have mixed feelings about this.
Pros:
Very harmonic; easy on the ears; great running time (mainly because of the following Cons)...
Cons:
Sounds like elevator music; doesn't invoke that feeling to click "replay" over and over...

You said you'll be expanding on it. From my perspective, it needs a little more dynamics in its presentation. I see the mood is intended to invoke a mellow atmosphere, it does, so the dynamics I'm talking about is not some major twist or transition. Maybe another instrument to guide the progression or ease in and out to create an extra flavor. I do it often in my new work: TARGET PRACTICE (4/22/2017)[4 track demo album].

But its not bad!

Awesome lets work - email me - jordanjnr16@gmail.com

The idea is there, There is some noticeable mixing issues that I could help you with . email me :) And maybe you could help me some of my songs !!

When you make a song and want to add some vocals to is email me djzmike@hotmail.ca

nice job

Want to Collaborate sometime?

like that

Good one

very nice~