I've enjoyed this track. Everything sounds good to me. But I'm not really a fan of the sound that comes in around 2:26 and onward. Those sounds in my opinion doesn't really fit the theme of the track and it really hurts the track. To me this track sounds like a fantasy chillstep track and I believe all the sounds you use should fit said theme. I would suggest changing the sounds that come in towards the end to something more light rather than the hard-ish sounds used. Once you fix that I think this track would be great and vocals will only add.
this is a fantastic soundtrack music...the last theme when the hero found her love and they just sit together silently and stare to the horizon think about the 3rd world war and the result : they are the last ones...:-)
as you said it's a bit rough mix, we can hear it at the end, around 2.45 when some groovy bass? synth appears in a horribly overdriven status...
I have mixed feelings about this.
Pros:
Very harmonic; easy on the ears; great running time (mainly because of the following Cons)...
Cons:
Sounds like elevator music; doesn't invoke that feeling to click "replay" over and over...
You said you'll be expanding on it. From my perspective, it needs a little more dynamics in its presentation. I see the mood is intended to invoke a mellow atmosphere, it does, so the dynamics I'm talking about is not some major twist or transition. Maybe another instrument to guide the progression or ease in and out to create an extra flavor. I do it often in my new work: TARGET PRACTICE (4/22/2017)[4 track demo album].
Thank you. Please also bear in mind that this is a rough, unmastered WIP that I will update regularly. I am interested to see what you can do mastering-wise to the final version. :)
I really like the vibes of this track! Nice tempo, nice timbre and I love the effects. That thing you did at 1:23 was killer. The chopped up vocals are really cool as well.
Personally, I unfortunately didn't see the fantasy theme until the flute popped in. Then again, it was very chill and pleasing to listen to. Well done!
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Where like lyrics or concept is to recite things one wouldn't be able to say unless hearing this beat
Empowering
No doubt!
-Ramey J
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Nice work!
I'm glad you actually see the concept i was going for. Most people see something different.
As for your quom about 2:26, I need to take a look and see what you mean. I didnt make that much of a difference between the first and second drop.
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as you said it's a bit rough mix, we can hear it at the end, around 2.45 when some groovy bass? synth appears in a horribly overdriven status...
handshake, Danke
-Zivon
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Pros:
Very harmonic; easy on the ears; great running time (mainly because of the following Cons)...
Cons:
Sounds like elevator music; doesn't invoke that feeling to click "replay" over and over...
You said you'll be expanding on it. From my perspective, it needs a little more dynamics in its presentation. I see the mood is intended to invoke a mellow atmosphere, it does, so the dynamics I'm talking about is not some major twist or transition. Maybe another instrument to guide the progression or ease in and out to create an extra flavor. I do it often in my new work: TARGET PRACTICE (4/22/2017)[4 track demo album].
But its not bad!
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Personally, I unfortunately didn't see the fantasy theme until the flute popped in. Then again, it was very chill and pleasing to listen to. Well done!
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