Zivonmusic

The dynamic range of this track is awesome. You find such nice high and lows. Keep up the good work!

Well done. I like the mix and the arrangement. Congrats!

Fire!!!

This is very nice. I like the ethereal feel of the verses. The chorus needs a boost, if you are going to do stabs like that, you need a bass line running under the two top synth pads to emphasize the huge dynamic in volume and emotional sound you are trying to portray. And not just a repeat of the chords first note. An actual moving bassline giving you the melody. Otherwise it's a nice little tune, keep on this one.
Cru

Wow, really excellent one, nice work!
However, i feel a shade unexploited potential too in it. It's just an opinion, but i think the basic melody is very accentual, while a bit short. Not really a problem because the brilliant and various escort, but a bit variation here and there in it would have even added something extra too.
Still, it's a very good track, well done!
Regards, traz

Amazing track. The ambience is like a wall of sound, where it's obvious that you really nailed the mixing of the track. All of the melodies compliment each other, and the arrangement never makes it stale.

Really nice track. You can really lay back and dream on this one :-) Fav'ed

- Søren

This is not my Genre...! But, I Really love it, sounds so Beautiful & chill...! Great Performance Zivon...! ;)
Keep on PLAY!!!

Perilous dreamer. Beeeautiful.. I honestly got lost within the song. Very memorable, indeed. Wow!! keep em' comin' Zivonmusic Peace DDC

Absolutely beautiful piece! Just what I need to help me study for exams rn :) It's so relaxing! My only critique is that one of the hi hats that comes in at about 32 seconds has a high end that is a little bit harsh, and ever so slightly takes away from the listening experience. Otherwise, superb track!

stunning performance

equal with the description's dream world...beautiful, ethereal journey on the fantasy's land...hats off

Danke

I did comment on this one.
Where is it?
Jamid

I'm on my laptop, listening through my laptop speakers lol, I know. Although I can't hear your mixing, your ideas on production are very good, especially the intro, the chords, and the plucky things was sick bro! The vocal chops, arps, and the chords man, good music ^-^

I don't work with FL Studio's.
Can you work with the following DAW?
Pro Tools
Logic Pro
Ableton Live?

What DAW you are using to do your mix?
Maybe if you want I'll send you the setting?

Hey good track man, saw your post in the forums. I like everything I am hearing, I'm listening on cheap headphones and they are not picking up any clipping. Nice mix of sounds and I get where you are coming from with your approach. Thanks for sharing this!!

Kyle

Hi, Zion. Nice track. I agree with Jamid and Silverman. This would work a whole lot better if you remixed it, dropping all levels down so it doesn't flatline at the max. I was taught that if the mix really isn't working, start over and pull all the faders down to the bottom of their range. Then start bringing the up one by one, but don't let your overall main stereo output levels get any hotter than -3db. Preferably a lot lower. I must admit, I hate starting over, particularly when I've locked in volume automation on the individual instrument tracks in a project, but sometimes it is the best solution.

Volumes are all running at more or less the same level?
It's making it sound very loud but also very flat.
There are no little spaces tubes tunnels for my imagination to get a toehold in.
It's a bit like all the entrances into the piece have been walled up.

Hello Zivon,
The track concept is brilliant, but you are drowning it with over gaining the level of the volume.
You can look at your LM upload you can see that the top and the bottom of your wav are in one straight line with no head room at all.
I hope this is useful to you?
Jamid

great track with beautiful (almost ethereal) synth tunes...no idea what the problem with the bass (I'm in work with bulls..t pc) so later at home...
but let me get one thing: I know that every genre's gotta 'typical' drum, synth, guitar etc...sound but here the snare's pounding sound is a bit irritating (could be my fault...)

but all in all, cool track, handshake, Danke

That s a nice track you got here mate
Keep on good job

Yes but there is also a deep melancholic resonance in this tune that cannot be ignored and makes it very appealing.
good work
Cru

this is very nice. love the deep tones, which create a smooth balance with the higher tones. captures the balance of nature. very soothing.

I love this one Bro,
Well done
Jamid

Love it.