Amazing track. The ambience is like a wall of sound, where it's obvious that you really nailed the mixing of the track. All of the melodies compliment each other, and the arrangement never makes it stale.
Absolutely beautiful piece! Just what I need to help me study for exams rn :) It's so relaxing! My only critique is that one of the hi hats that comes in at about 32 seconds has a high end that is a little bit harsh, and ever so slightly takes away from the listening experience. Otherwise, superb track!
I'm on my laptop, listening through my laptop speakers lol, I know. Although I can't hear your mixing, your ideas on production are very good, especially the intro, the chords, and the plucky things was sick bro! The vocal chops, arps, and the chords man, good music ^-^
Thank you very much jamid, fortunately I was able to find someone to help me mix and master. I will post the new version when it is finished. Thank yoy for all of your support =)
Hey good track man, saw your post in the forums. I like everything I am hearing, I'm listening on cheap headphones and they are not picking up any clipping. Nice mix of sounds and I get where you are coming from with your approach. Thanks for sharing this!!
Hi, Zion. Nice track. I agree with Jamid and Silverman. This would work a whole lot better if you remixed it, dropping all levels down so it doesn't flatline at the max. I was taught that if the mix really isn't working, start over and pull all the faders down to the bottom of their range. Then start bringing the up one by one, but don't let your overall main stereo output levels get any hotter than -3db. Preferably a lot lower. I must admit, I hate starting over, particularly when I've locked in volume automation on the individual instrument tracks in a project, but sometimes it is the best solution.
Volumes are all running at more or less the same level?
It's making it sound very loud but also very flat.
There are no little spaces tubes tunnels for my imagination to get a toehold in.
It's a bit like all the entrances into the piece have been walled up.
Hello Zivon,
The track concept is brilliant, but you are drowning it with over gaining the level of the volume.
You can look at your LM upload you can see that the top and the bottom of your wav are in one straight line with no head room at all.
I hope this is useful to you?
Jamid
great track with beautiful (almost ethereal) synth tunes...no idea what the problem with the bass (I'm in work with bulls..t pc) so later at home...
but let me get one thing: I know that every genre's gotta 'typical' drum, synth, guitar etc...sound but here the snare's pounding sound is a bit irritating (could be my fault...)
Genres are not useful to creative artists except those who want to make their music fit with some pre-determined formula...This is really good Zivonmusic....and I enjoyed the listen...nice easy-flowing mix that carries you along for the quiet ride....a big well done to you ..and a fav from me.....keep doing it your own way...thats what the real atrists do.....Ed
Lets say that it's a very nice mix and you created it and it sets a great relaxing mood. The gene really doesn't matter, I like it and it sound good to me.
I'm not good at defining genres, but I guess this is a bit of both. Anyway to me that's not the most important. more important is that you managed to create very nice mood which I like alot! It even goes to 'favs'...:)
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- Søren
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Keep on PLAY!!!
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Also, I kust noticed I spelled "Dragon" incorrectly.
No matter. Tha k you! :))
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equal with the description's dream world...beautiful, ethereal journey on the fantasy's land...hats off
Danke
:))
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Where is it?
Jamid
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Can you work with the following DAW?
Pro Tools
Logic Pro
Ableton Live?
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Maybe if you want I'll send you the setting?
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It's making it sound very loud but also very flat.
There are no little spaces tubes tunnels for my imagination to get a toehold in.
It's a bit like all the entrances into the piece have been walled up.
I'm sorry that the song did not excite your imagination like it did mine! :(
BUT I think I fixed the audio clipping? Have another listen maybe?
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The track concept is brilliant, but you are drowning it with over gaining the level of the volume.
You can look at your LM upload you can see that the top and the bottom of your wav are in one straight line with no head room at all.
I hope this is useful to you?
Jamid
Oh well haha.
I thank you for your feedback and please have another listan to see if it still clips.
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but let me get one thing: I know that every genre's gotta 'typical' drum, synth, guitar etc...sound but here the snare's pounding sound is a bit irritating (could be my fault...)
but all in all, cool track, handshake, Danke
But i am glad you enjoyed the track! thank you, Danke!
-Zivon
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Keep on good job
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good work
Cru
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Well done
Jamid
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