Works for me...sounds pretty cool. I think maybe you could get the vocals to pop a little more if you hit them with some FX. Maybe a little delay and some reverb? Pretty pumping though.
Thanks much for your support and feedback! I too was thinking the verse vocals are a little dry. Got some ideas last night to bring this song closer to completion, especially after reading the comments. I appreciate you taking the time to listen!
Hey friend, I appreciate your stopping by! After yours and other comments I'm think of adding to the song a little, we'll see how that goes. Glad you like the groove
Definitely like this song alot. There are some moments where the clash seems a bit odd, but that's barely an issue. The spoken word really adds to the song, and is a very good feature.
Thanks for listening friend! I must admit to loving clash at times. I'm glad you enjoyed all the same. after hearing more comments, I've been thinking about some things to add to the song... it should get better. Thanks again!
Hello Orlando, thank you for being the first to review this song! After recieving some more comments, and laying in bed thinking about it, I think this song could use a few more elements. Maybe in a few days I'll have something. Thanks for your support!
Thanks very much for your positive comment! The club is cool, and I'll take the commercial suggestion for what it is...heh! I don't think I've heard Hate Dept, I'll have to check em out sometime. Appreciate the support!
It is great to see the massive appreciation this track gets and all these remixes ;)
Thought I would hop in and listen the original again on looperman,it is a really nice track you created.
It still carries the distinctive spivkurl kind of sound but it is really different from most of your stuff so it is good to see the creativity that goes into this ;)
Thanks for sharing this with all of us and allowing the remixes, it is fun to see how other people changed the track around too... but drifting off now haha
Thanks very much for listening my friend! It kind of blew my mind seeing what happened from this song. 7 minutes until the transition to phase 2 of Nightr8 poisoning is complete! I appreciate you always supporting me with your reviews and all!
Been hearing so many remixes of this this week i thought i'd drop by and remind myself of how the original went.
This track is becoming legendary. It's great.
Thanks for the return visit! I learned from ipods mainly, not to overlilsten to things... it can ruin them for long periods of time. That's part of why I'm trying to shift gears now. Appreciate you support and friendship!
wowww Spiv ! is this youur voice ?
oh I'm just in love with your cuuuuuutie singing lol !
very very cool ! and a bit crazy lol !
ps:i used your drum loops in my last track.
please drop your words in my box about that .
tank you much much :)
Elena :)
Heh... yeah that's me! You're very sweet! I definitely admit to being crazy, but I think I'm learning to use it for good instead of evil lately. I am on my way to hear your track, thanks for using some of my loops! Hope you are well!
I really like this song- definitely going in my favorites. Everything matches up really well. I tried doing a remix of this but it didn't sound very good. Well done, Spivkurl!
hey dude,i really like what you got here im going to download the stems and try give it a more of a hiphop feel to this,.will upload when finish,thanks for the awesome stems pack btw
I don't think it's just the new equipment that's aided in your work. These last few tracks have been far and above. I think you've hit a re-invented creative streak, my friend. Not to take away from your previous work, but the last couple tracks have had a far more "professional" level. While, granted, the equipment does help with that, it's not what creates, composes, and arranges the song. That's all you, brother.
This track is a hard hitter for sure. It does have a sort of retro-80's-new wave-synth pop thing happening. But, only on the surface. When you dig into it a little harder, it's a pretty powerful and aggressive beast. I really like that filtered rise on the bass. It helps add to the intensity. With as busy as this song is, it's never crowded, or cluttered. You've done a killer job at arranging everything so it sits just right. But, you always do.
If I were to paint a picture to this, (Because that's my first love), it would be someone stuck in a spider's web while the spider closes in.
Take care, Spiv.
Aaron
Mighty kind of you to stop by! I'd be happy to hear a remix by you, if it works out for you! Let me say, maybe best to download it soon, as I'm thinking it's better for this song to burn out than for it to fade away if you know what I mean. I really appreciate your positive comment! I didn't realize this track would get the reception it did. Must be partly because it's not "adult content". Thanks much!
Hey buddy, thank you very much! It's nice that my song is your first track comment on Looperman! I'm glad you enjoyed the music! If you had a track on your profile I'd come review it for you! Take care, and thanks again!
i was very busy , so i heard first another members who remixed your track , they are great ,
so i hear your track now after theirs but yours still the best!!
real great track !
love the synths and i downloaded the loops ...
That means a lot to me friend! They have all been fun remixes to hear, I'm just happy people are interested. If you make a mix, I'd love to hear it! Hope you are well!
this track is sick as in amazing i wish i was as good as you at dj-ing keep up the good work and wait for your next one you track makes me happy and i just wanna jumps around my room and dance.
Hey, thanks very much! I am pleased to be the first comment you have left on Looperman! Hope you keep coming back at least for the cool indie music. Be sure that if you had any tracks posted, I would be there reviewing them! I appreciate the positive support!
on Seplicate V2 by Spivkurl
on Seplicate V2 by Spivkurl
The organ is like something out of the 60's, Iron Butterfly, Doors .
Killer track bro,
on Seplicate V2 by Spivkurl
tv
on Seplicate V2 by Spivkurl
I'm digging this one bigtime Spiv !
Wish it was longer.
Real swanky groove with
on Seplicate V2 by Spivkurl
Keep up the very good work, as always!
-RealProblemShuckers
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Cheers_____Orlando
on Nightr8 by Spivkurl
on Nightr8 by Spivkurl
on Nightr8 by Spivkurl
on Nightr8 by Spivkurl
Thought I would hop in and listen the original again on looperman,it is a really nice track you created.
It still carries the distinctive spivkurl kind of sound but it is really different from most of your stuff so it is good to see the creativity that goes into this ;)
Thanks for sharing this with all of us and allowing the remixes, it is fun to see how other people changed the track around too... but drifting off now haha
Cheers :)
on Nightr8 by Spivkurl
This track is becoming legendary. It's great.
on Nightr8 by Spivkurl
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/156325
Keep up the good work!
-RealProblemShuckers
on Nightr8 by Spivkurl
on Nightr8 by Spivkurl
Theres my remix ;) Awesome track btw! I loved messing around with that bass :D
on Nightr8 by Spivkurl
oh I'm just in love with your cuuuuuutie singing lol !
very very cool ! and a bit crazy lol !
ps:i used your drum loops in my last track.
please drop your words in my box about that .
tank you much much :)
Elena :)
on Nightr8 by Spivkurl
i finished a first impression of a remix in hardtrancestyle of nightr8
and i want you to hear it !
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/156283
hope you'll like it !!!
greetzzz
on Nightr8 by Spivkurl
-RealProblemShuckers
on Nightr8 by Spivkurl
on Nightr8 by Spivkurl
heres a link to my remix of your track,.once again thanks for the stems bro,hope you enjoy
on Nightr8 by Spivkurl
on Nightr8 by Spivkurl
I don't think it's just the new equipment that's aided in your work. These last few tracks have been far and above. I think you've hit a re-invented creative streak, my friend. Not to take away from your previous work, but the last couple tracks have had a far more "professional" level. While, granted, the equipment does help with that, it's not what creates, composes, and arranges the song. That's all you, brother.
This track is a hard hitter for sure. It does have a sort of retro-80's-new wave-synth pop thing happening. But, only on the surface. When you dig into it a little harder, it's a pretty powerful and aggressive beast. I really like that filtered rise on the bass. It helps add to the intensity. With as busy as this song is, it's never crowded, or cluttered. You've done a killer job at arranging everything so it sits just right. But, you always do.
If I were to paint a picture to this, (Because that's my first love), it would be someone stuck in a spider's web while the spider closes in.
Take care, Spiv.
Aaron
on Nightr8 by Spivkurl
Compliments and respect_____Orlando
on Nightr8 by Spivkurl
on Nightr8 by Spivkurl
i was very busy , so i heard first another members who remixed your track , they are great ,
so i hear your track now after theirs but yours still the best!!
real great track !
love the synths and i downloaded the loops ...
greetzzz
on Nightr8 by Spivkurl