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Sounds like you've put together a very cool theme for continued enhancement of this song! I like the ideas that you have put forth in your description and lyrics. I am in this process locally, of joining together/ bringing people together, in order to change things for the better. It is great that people are beginning to stand up for how things should be. I like this, and you should keep working on it! Keep making music!

wow nice composition well constructed chill vibes keep pushing liked the work

Nice one.
But for sure you should remove the Auto tune. Ok, i am not a friend of Auto tune at all but in this case it destroys your vocal work really a lot. I bet that all would Sound much better without it :) .....
The Music is very well made and sounds good in my ears. And like others already said, use some more emotions in this Kind of genre. I know that it isn't that easy to do but you should try it :).
Over all this is a nice rnb track and like said bevor, without the Auto tune it would be much much better.

Good work for sure.

stay tuned
joe

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Hey Greg, great track man!..I really like the vocals they sit perfectly within the framework of the arrangement are well modulated and clear, anytime a song presents well vocally it gets a big tick from me, if I was to change anything and it's very very minor, it would be to set some automated panning on the high hat when it comes in, at the moment it sits in the top left hand quadrant of the mix and draws a listeners attention, moving it around from right to left will help negate any silly little superfluous critiques from pedantic reviewers like myself! ;)...great vocals, great track man..cheers Dave :)

Hey man, nice work you did. There are a few issues, but the others have already said everything there is to critique. The only thing is the Autotune - stay away from it, that's my opinion. You got a nice voice, let it out!

Ok you were asking for honest assessment and feedback. Let me start out by saying that you have the basics of what can be a truly wonderful R&B song, but you're still missing some elements that can make this a great song. I would have probably produced this track a little differently; since this is a "Love Song", my emphasis would surely have been on having a very solid and well defined vocal performance. Not to say what you did was bad, but could have been much better.

I assume that you were the lead male vocalist on the track? You have a nice laid back "Keith Sweat" sounding vocal style (which is not a bad thing at all), you need to take better advantage of stretching you vocal range so that your singing doesn't sound so one dimensional. In other words sing to make the listener believe what you're sing is real. I like the delay used on your vocal, but obviously the Autotune was a big no, no. It distracts from your vocal performance, I kinda get what you were trying to do with it, but in the end it doesn't work.

On a love tune you should be able to carry the song with your vocal prowess not gimmicks; I also like the "Hook" of the song but it seems the female vocalist part was a little low in the mix. What I would have done was strengthen the hook by adding a secondary backing vocals singing the synth melody (since it's a pretty melody and runs perfect with what is being sung in relation to the hook).

Your basic music tracks are nice and you do have a nice concept, but I would beef it up a little. For me I like a "big lush" sound, so I would have added more strings for atmosphere and had more vocal interplay between you and the female vocalist. Sing the first verse, the hook, the second verse, the hook, improvise, repeat the first verse, the hook to the end of the song.

What I would suggest you do is listen to Keith Sweat's "Make It Last forever". As I stated before, although Keith has a laid back vocal style he does stretch his vocals and sings with emotion to make you feel what he is trying to convey. And since that is a duet with a female vocalist, they make you feel that song. Which is essentially what you have to do. If you do not sing the song with "conviction and emotion" your listening audience will not take you seriously.

Now please do not take my "critique" of your track as a put down, because that is not what I am doing. I am only giving my honest assessment of the song and what could make it better. You have the basics of what could be a great song, R&B music is a emotion driven music, so add some emotion. Other than what I have suggested, it is a good track. Keep up the good work,

D

Very good production.Both vocals sit really well in the track.
You obviously can sing,i would like to hear your real voice even tho the auto-tune sounds cool.
Keep at it
ps:great name btw

Nelson

Pretty good track but as other people said already: cut the autotune or just use it a little. I think the vocals can be very nice without it.If you mix the vocals to sound a bit fuller and less autotune you got me hooked.

Great lyrics man! Auto tune seemed a bit heavy in some places but other than that it was great.

Aye bruh, greetings, welcome to looperman! I did say I was going to critique. This is not to come off as hate or mean. The kick, clap, and hit hats is rubbish. The drum pattern didn't really work with the track. Good lyrical writing, the vocals isn't that bad, but not satisfying either. I believe with a little more practice you two can make something beautiful together.

I really liked this. Although I have to say that the auto tune seems a bit too heavy on the male vocals, but the female vocals were really quite beautiful and entrancing.

It sounds really well produced and well thought out as well, and quite looking forward to any future releases.

Thanks for sharing :)

Hello there! I really like the direction this track went! The lyrics was very sweet and the vocals were very nicely executed. The male's vocals could be a bit more fine-tuned, but perhaps that was the Auto-Tune. The female's voice was very gentle and absolutely had control though. The instrumentals was also on point as far as he levels and use of patterns. Cheers man!

~GO

Hey man, you can be proud of this. Great job. Since you asked for constructive feedback, I feel that some of the low mids in the main vocal could use some cutting at times to make more room for the bass line..but that's just me and it could be these cheapo cans I am listening on.

mike