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Strong words and great ideals for a crazy world we live in. This snipplet was just a tease for the ears I'd like to hear the whole jam I like what you've done here Peace ......Archaic Dreamz

Lots of interesting suggestions/critiques from producers and engineers far above my skills (likely). But at the end of the day it's about how a recording transfers emotion from the artist to the listener. If I'm in my kitchen singing your chorus at my espresso machine your mission is accomplished :-) Enjoying my triple shot now.

they dont knoe what ive bin true

t. I'm an older musical vet. I haven't heard one comment on MASTERING. You have a very natural commercial voice. Simplicity is the key to this song. I Feel where you comming from on this trackts of men and women can relate to this. In my opion this track minus the auto tune throughout the whole track, is Solid for mastering. I would pan the feamale backround vocals a bit wide but not rediculous. Your overall levels are great for mastering. They give the mastering engineer lots of room to work. You have the gift. I Would love to master this track to give you a reference point on when the mix is ready for mastering and to let you hear what you have realy created dymamicly.Let me know somtin mane via email. OLD SCHOOL GOT YOU. PEACE. THE MACK MAN OUT.

hell yeah,we are on the same page my brother.LOOKING FORWARD TO YOUR SUB AND COMMENTS ON MY VIDEOS MY HOMIE.

there you go,my video,with your awesome track brother,please check it out,make sure to SUBSCRIBE and let me know what you think about my content.LOOKING FORWARD TO YOUR SUB AND COMMENTS ON MY VIDEOS.let's stay in touch.
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this track is going to come out lit!,it's sad how things go wrong but on the other hand its a good thing that you're putting this together for that cause keep it up bro, i like the piano and its emotional fill; yo can boost the mid freq a bit on the piano and then the vocals like brado said, has effects something like a flanger or pitch effect. it might not fit in well with the mix so its best you go back to the raw vocals and use a reverb on it and a bit of delay for balance not too much delay though....cheers brother!
how can i contribute to this song?

So my word is my bond my brother,i really love this track,pretty impressive,so i'm using it in my tomorrow's video,i'll def give you a credit in my video,i'll send you the link.Please check out my channel make sure to SUBSCRIBE and let me know what you think about my content.LOOKING FORWARD TO IT.
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Good message, a little bit too much effects on the voice for me. The piano is emotive and I dig that, and particularly appreciate that you're speaking out and trying to make a difference. Keep it up.

Brado

Nice chill flow man, a lot of melody in your voice. I do think it has to much fx, just my personal liking, normally prefer natural voices.
You could seriously get somewhere, seems to me your tracks would do well with the mainstream community.

i gotcha in my mind my brother.

The highlight of the song for me was definitely the lyrics. They are very soulful, and it fits well with this beat, the second highlight being the piano. On top of making an emotional track it's mixed well too. Very pleasing to the ear. Awesome work. Where's the full track?

-Sheen

I love the beautiful piano in the intro of the song. I also love the idea behind the song and I'm glad that you're trying to spread a positive message during these violent times.

The simple chord progressions compliment your lead vocal, why not have done the 3rd or possibly the fifth harmony on auto tune and then mix it down above the other below your lead.In mixing vocals you will need to normalize tracks, and use a graphic EQ, use the female tracks sparingly, less is more, accents on Chorus, also try a step up in the chord and answer your lead and chorus with a melody that ties the 3 together just to break up and add transition.in response to your review on "TRAPEZE"I like color and levels with one lead instrument, the piano is the layer of color and the synth the lead, maybe I should have added a drop off of the lead if you are using it for vocal and rap.1st time I'm putting up a music track I have hundreds trying to stimulate comments, Thank you for yours the key is D at 120 bpm.

nice use of delay on the vocal, and on panning. you have a relaxed, steady delivery in your rapping. as for the lyric - sounds like you are asking for the real collab. am i even close? best regards - Dan

I would like to help out on your song .... Good message and topic

This songs has got a really good message.Hope you can make it into a full song.
The intro alone it's amazing.

Well done

Nelson

Hey man great song. It shows an understanding of the art of music and how to use it to convey a message artistically. I love the duet interplay as well. Good work. One critique I could think of is vocal presence. I also dealt with it at one point and have worked on it since. Obviously this song calls for a more soft voice, but you can still improve the richness and quality of your vocal. Ways that I've improved in this area are things like face stretching and vocal warm-ups before recording. Also, the expression that you have while recording helps also. Like smiling while recording reflect a more rich vocal as it invokes additional emotion that cones through to the listener even if its on a subconscious level. Overall great track. Keep it up. The small details will improve your artistry, it certainly has for me.

Not my jungle this but one criticism is the heart beat at the beginning ... I'd make that longer fading out and behind the piano. Sounds to abrupt just finishing like that. It's very well done very smooth and obviously way to short just being a snippet. Sounds cool though.

Wow Nice approach on the piano chilled vibes liked it cool theme

Good to hear some positive vibes Billion...I`m not really a rap fan so you will get more useful input from other listeners, but this is well done and I like the musical accompaniment...keep it going....Ed

Yo man , i did my own style of instrumental
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/177822
Try to take a look & rap on it :)
Really dope , just try to have a better quality on micro next time but it still dope