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Word! BilliOnzit! Captured well the message. The vibes from the instrumental allow me to think about the message of vocals deep. Feelin this, has good leveling, ez volume bump, thanks for food. Peace.

Man I dig this...loving the groove, that's a nice beat too.Love the message..Good work bro.

Listened to this twice and would just like to say that I am still wanting more lol
Nicely done mate

Steve

Finally got a chance to hear this track of yours after some internet issues, but I must say you have a super clean flow and the music compliments your voice, nicely done billions!

you have a nice feel for the rapping. a nice flow. i like your vocal mixing too. nice work. keep it up buddy.

Commercially ready except for final Mix and Master, which comes before release...really good work and clean duo...congrats on the writing!

Like the emotional piano and lycris, well done :)

Looking forward to see the full song :D

hey man that is piece of music i love it although it not yet finished and you melody are hot !

Awesome track man. I love the message behind it and how you're using your voice and your music to spread the world that; the world is in a very bad state. But we can all stand together and change that in love the message you convey. I do the same in my own music and lyrics. Keep up the good work!! I'm a dj and produce anything from hip hop to edm to dub step to trap. If you're ever looking for a collab or lyrics hit me up! We both the share the same passion with what's wrong with the world and I'd love to share that message; the message so many others are "afraid" to speak out. Peace bro, and keep up the excellent work!
-Jacob

Strong words and great ideals for a crazy world we live in. This snipplet was just a tease for the ears I'd like to hear the whole jam I like what you've done here Peace ......Archaic Dreamz

Lots of interesting suggestions/critiques from producers and engineers far above my skills (likely). But at the end of the day it's about how a recording transfers emotion from the artist to the listener. If I'm in my kitchen singing your chorus at my espresso machine your mission is accomplished :-) Enjoying my triple shot now.

I love what I hear here. I like the doubled vx and i like the effects on them. Serves the vibe well and adds mojo. You have a clean voice. nice. Can't wait to hear the finished track. Played it three times. I got a couple of beats if you would like to try them.

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Nice track. Your vocals sound like a mix between bone thugs and outkast and that is a big compliment. I understand the most of what you are saying so clear enough for me. The beat is good and fits the vocals nicely!

t. I'm an older musical vet. I haven't heard one comment on MASTERING. You have a very natural commercial voice. Simplicity is the key to this song. I Feel where you comming from on this trackts of men and women can relate to this. In my opion this track minus the auto tune throughout the whole track, is Solid for mastering. I would pan the feamale backround vocals a bit wide but not rediculous. Your overall levels are great for mastering. They give the mastering engineer lots of room to work. You have the gift. I Would love to master this track to give you a reference point on when the mix is ready for mastering and to let you hear what you have realy created dymamicly.Let me know somtin mane via email. OLD SCHOOL GOT YOU. PEACE. THE MACK MAN OUT.

hell yeah,we are on the same page my brother.LOOKING FORWARD TO YOUR SUB AND COMMENTS ON MY VIDEOS MY HOMIE.

Bill I'm sorry about that and forgetting to say the rest of it sounds quite pro to me but but but how would I know I'm thinking. My ears need a clean out! I'm off to the clinic this afternoon and I will come back and listen to your lyrics no doubt .... I'll be back!

Nice one man, very melodic. I'm not a big fan of autotune but fits well with your style.
The track got a little of 80s feel.

i think you have a great understanding of the beat, your cadence is almost dictating the listener to tap their foot or get that head nodding, but i do agree with Beatmaker4real... your delivery could be KILLER on this if you took a little more time on it.

the beat is great as well. very minimalist so the vocals can breathe.

all in all a great job.

Hey Billion

True this has a very nice laid back feeling about it, vocal suits the track well, very enjoyable listen, one of the first RnB tracks heard with a rap vocal, but overall very good work on this one mate...Peace mosaic...Fav...

This is going to sound harsh.
I can't understand any of what you're saying.
Hasn't mattered much in the world of popular music this last fifty years weather or not you could understand the words but if the idea is a message then then it's important people can hear the words.
What I'm wondering is are my ears waxed up because no one else seems to be having that problem>

A very good track! I like the way the arrangement (with the perky horn sound) brings out the right mood setting of your message - being on the edge where the light defeats the darkness, as it hammers out a soothing rhythmic assurance that all is going to be well (we have the power). The song definitely inspires - keep up the great artistry in your work!

Smooth, soothing, with just enough bounce....nicely done!

Great track! Dope beat. Nice Lyrics. My only comment would be to make the beat a little bit louder. I feel like the vocals overpower the sick beat.

Man this is dope..really nice beat..
I would work on the delivery a bit more, but this is good work bro.