BillionaireExclusive

Wow! Keep this up! I love this so much! It's a great, inspiration and sort of emotional mix and I LOVE IT! :)
You should definitely try submitting to some big labels because I think you could go somewhere bigger with things like this!
I'll be checking a lot more on your channel :)

Very smooth and great production. I agree on the fact that your voice has been processed a bit too much as I think that your original voice sounds ore than good enough on its own. But for the rest solid sounds and great timing on the vocals! Great job!

Love the vibes your puttin out man. keep it up!

this beat has a nice drake vibe to it! I dig it!

i like that beat

Great sound and an important message. Thy lyrics are so well thought out. I really love the chorus. Considering this is a rough cut, it was really easy to listen to. Looking forward to hearing the finished mix. Good work.

TA

Hi man. I love how chilled this track is. You've done well with taking a minimal approach, but keeping things interesting with your vocal interplay. My only criticism is (and I am definitely guilty of this myself) that the vocals might be a bit too over-processed in places. I love the quirkyness of them, but feel they are a bit too distant from the backing track. Other than that, it's pretty damn awesome.

TA

This sounds decent as it stands, and you should be proud of your advances in vocals. I guess one thing I'm noticing here is that the music sounds very muffled... is it possible that it was an mp3, and the vocals got mixed on top of it? I ask, because there is a major difference in fidelity and high frequency presence between the vocals and the music. Judging by the genre, I am guessing that this is the case. It is far better to work with the musician to have them mix the vocals in with the original quality project, or to ask for wav stems and do it yourself. If I am wrong in my assumption, then please correct me. I think the song could sound so much better! Your vocals are good for sure!

Nice work on the track.

Great tone, cool tempo, really nice track!

TD

Hi Billionz this is a fantastic track with a very relevant message the flo the flo the flo so good. Best regards.

Beat is dope for sure.
I feel like your vocals are over produced. Too Much fx and shit on em. Mainly the hook.
Sometimes I ending up doing similar shit to my own vocals. I think its the fact that most people hate to hear their voice on the playback, which in turn would make you want to throw fx on it to get it sounding like what you think you sound like. lol that make any sense?
What do you record with?

NOW THIS IS REAL MUSIC

Great message bro, especially with everything going on in the world. This is a mind opener, Keep it up!

Rezurrekte

yesss...for me it's a smooth chill out cause I absolutely donno hip hop...minimal but maximal cool...:-)

great loungy...

handshake, Danke

Yo smooth work, diggin the chillness to it. Good lyrical thoughts. Nice change ups, keeps it interesting man. Some cool hip hop track, ty for sharing with us, Peace!

Niiiiice

Keep up the good work bro!

Hey overall good job bro, but in the other hand most of the criticism here is on point n most of these people know what they talking about and I myself hear alot of what they saying about your mix. But learn as much as you can bro keep it up and in time you'll learn everything you'll need to learn to succeed. It took me a while bro I'm still learning but you'll get it brotha.

*Rezurrekted

a way different vibe, and it sounds original as if no one else made it
&& i love it, its always great to approach things in your own way to be original

That message tho

great hook homie! your lyricism is on point ,great work ,we should collab sometime

OK, I will admit that I don't listen to rap much. Didn't really understand much about it until I watched Straight outa Compton. Then it really started to make a lot more sense to me. I still don't listen to much, but something made me want to listen to your track. I'm glad I did. Great lyrics. Important message. Talking about real things, important things. I liked the beat too, but you really nailed it with the lyrics. I hope it gets a lot more listens here on Looperman.

Awesome, awesome song with much needed to hear message. Larry

Great song and message. The lyrics nicely captured the message of the song.