KnightHeir

Hum, with just the finished mp3, will be hard, you will always lose quality.
But I just listened again with better speakers and actually think it's quite okay. Where I listened before, the voice came up too on top and I couldn't hear the bass and kick well.

Anyway, EQ and compressor is the best way to master simply, just listen to hiphop you like and try to get it the same. It's all trying and experience

I want to collab with you in the furute if you're up for it. I really like your rap style and recording is quite good.

This beat goes hard, nice job

Nice track here man! The vocals are really cool and the beat is really chill. I also think the mix needs some work though. The beat and the vocals levels need to be fixed and I think you should fade out the track or add a cymbal, so we can know the track has finished. Other than that, the track is on the right track, Nice work!

I liked it a lot but the bass playing or let us say rather the bass 'soloing' (because there is no really the bass dimention or bass quality in here regarding the frequency sound range) is simpy worth getting more presence here. Overall your song feels like a teaser or just a part of something bigger. the impression is that the vocal is a little bit too much upfront-sounding while the bass guitar somehow hidden.
my opinion is you can always try somehow work out the actual mix (see 1:05 overpower a little momentum when doubling the vocal) by experimenting more with putting the elements in different 'places' in the 'sound spectrum' space. this can be done on the mixing stage.
Fine song and impressive songwriting qualities. Congrats. A.

I like this a lot

very lyrical in this track.....some i can listen to with out loosing my mind!! word play on point, delivery on point......ill give you 9 out of 10, you surly got the cure for lame rap music my friend......love the message in your music..larry

It is a nice track. I am not much of a HH fan but the track is solid. Work on the compression on the master track to give it some more punch, a little limiter, not much. Those will give it punch and added volume.

Wayne

I like this one. A lot of the quality of the master really falls back to the quality of the mix. If the mix isn't perfect it'll affect the master. Any good-sounding song is really 90 percent mix, 10 percent master.

Brado

pretty cool, if only the instrumental was mixed better it'd be a great song.

Really nice man.
Just master it better, specially the instrumental. It's awesome really, nice flow.

I gotta agree with franko in terms of making the instrumental a little louder, but holy damn dude you've got an amazing flow! I can see you going great places man :D best of luck for the future!

Bro your flow is sick man. Loving what your doing. Just heard some of your other tracks and wow, very impressed. Great to see you using some awesome beats from looper too.

the beat is simplistic and to the point(in a good way), and it gives you space to flow very well on the beat and the hook is on point. good shit Format

Dude I love this, it´s gold.

Switch this up for cassette tape and 1/4" and XLR sources, and you would have something kill. I like your flow! Only it sounds very virtual at the moment. Keep doing what you're doing and explore more!

Reminds me of Hodgy Beats/Mellowhype kinda stuff

cool beat and lyrics but you need to bump that beat up more give it some balls! Vocals are too loud in my opinion but other than that it's pretty swish!

respect

(LF)

Really took my attention kept on listening drawn by the format Really Good work bro

good beat good flow good lyrics = good track

I like your style bro nice track.....

Dope Man !

Great!!

This is nice...good job, on message and total content..
well written!

TD

Hello mate,
This is brilliant.
Well done
Jamid

Would you like to put something on this one?

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/175683

Man the flow on this is DOPE bro. Its super dope ask someone to mix and master it and release it. The song has alot of potential and could develop your career alot.