Thanks a lot. Stay tuned bm4r, I got some joints written to your beats. You're making good work. Means a lot coming from you. Thanks for listening and commenting.
Format, young man I find that you have some interesting and deep insights on the subject matter that you present. I like your thought process and it's truly refreshing to hear a artist of your caliber doing your thing. I'm not into the "Get My Money- Shoot You to get Yo Money, Shoot 'em all Up and then degrade our Sistas in the process" kind of rap.
I more into "conscious / political" style Hip Hop ie: "Immortal Technique," "Boots Riley & The Coup," "Street Sweeper Social Club," (also Boots Riley) "Dead Prez," ect,
Hip Hop with a true messgae.
The more I listen to your tracks, the more I'm liking what I hear. The "Landr" site did do a great job in mixing and mastering on this track, congates. Another great production
very well done!
Thank you for the compliments and kind words. The Universe has a way of bringing balance to everything, even a genre of music. I'm just one humble adherent.
I know about a few of the acts you speak about and they have been part of my inspiration.
Thank you for listening and commenting and for the great music you make that I enjoy very much.
What a dope production nicely composed
love the soulful feel you got going there
every track always presents its share of drama
when it comes to mixing and mastering which I myself
also encounter but with time one can only get better
keep pushing
Thank you. Oh is that a fact? It did seem a little slow tempo wise which forced me to use multiple syllables to fill the gaps. You welcome, loved the beat. Probably my favorite song I've made despite the dark lyrics.
This is clever and creative stuff.
I get it!
My kids would love this.
When I say kids the oldest is forty odd youngest thirty odd.
Their teenage kids would like this too but guess what .... this old fart likes it too.
So well rapped out.
Do you really rap that long without breath or have you edited it to sound that way?
It's clever and clean editing if so.
Like the ending.
Very good stuff top notch.
What's the word now ... this is sick bro ... the dope.
Thanks! Yeah, it was fun to write but when it came time to rap it i ran out of breath initially. I basically took a big breath before each verse and went off of the momentum until the hook. Appreciate your comment!
Hey Format what's up man? I just had to return the luv, I see you joined the site about a month ago. So let me officially welcome you to Looperman, just have to say I'm really, really digging this track! Luv your "Smooth Poetic Approach" to the song. And the musical arrangement and feel gives the track a nice "r&b flavor" along with the hip hop theme. Very enjoyable to listen to. Like to hear the mastered / mixed version, and also I'm sure you have a longer version of the song.
Thank you Dennel, this site is unique and the best ive seen in terms of providing critiques from other artists and the ability to collaborate, so thanks for welcoming me. Thank you for your detailed and honest assessment of my music. This was one of those songs that was under the surface for many years. When i heard the beat for the first time it activated me and motivated this creation. The mix/mastering issue is the next challenge that I face in the evolution of my music. Thank you for listening and commenting.
I'm going to have to kill myself!
For heavens sake I'm 63 and almost everyday I'm listening to and enjoying hip hop!
It wasn't supposed to be like this ......
I love the little tweaks in this that appear here and there ... I dunno what you call them but I'm sure you know what I mean. Extremely well put together. You or whoever are very good at editing and arranging this stuff.
Someone mentioned mixing and mastering it ... hasn't that already been done?
Glad you liked the song. Thank you for the compliments. Technically it hasn't been mix/ mastered no. It sounds ok to the untrained ear, but the difference as one of my sound engineer associates pointed out to me is significant. Didn't stop me you or the others from enjoying the song apparently, which is what matters most. Have a good day.
Love this song, I love your vocals. Plus, I visited Wichita Texas a few days ago :D
I can't add much to what the others have said about it, if you ever fancy a collaboration with real instruments then check out my other tracks and come back to me, maybe we can do something. Cheers, TG
Thanks, glad you enjoyed the track. I actually live in Wichita Kansas. I'd love to do a colab with you. I like the style of your music. I don't know, maybe look at my work and see if you could match my style with an instrumental and ill ryhme over it. Peace.
Thanks for the detailed comment. Yeah, I seem to lean more towards the shorter songs. My thinking is to make a short statement that is also musically enjoyable to listen to. Either way, its really fun to make which is the main motivation hands down. Plus the beat was made for a 32bar song with no hook. So my challenge was to create a message that was true, aesthetic and creative and fun for me to make. Thanks for listening and commenting.
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I more into "conscious / political" style Hip Hop ie: "Immortal Technique," "Boots Riley & The Coup," "Street Sweeper Social Club," (also Boots Riley) "Dead Prez," ect,
Hip Hop with a true messgae.
The more I listen to your tracks, the more I'm liking what I hear. The "Landr" site did do a great job in mixing and mastering on this track, congates. Another great production
very well done!
Peace
D
I know about a few of the acts you speak about and they have been part of my inspiration.
Thank you for listening and commenting and for the great music you make that I enjoy very much.
Blessings
4M@
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on Myy Lyyfe by KnightHeir
love the soulful feel you got going there
every track always presents its share of drama
when it comes to mixing and mastering which I myself
also encounter but with time one can only get better
keep pushing
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I get it!
My kids would love this.
When I say kids the oldest is forty odd youngest thirty odd.
Their teenage kids would like this too but guess what .... this old fart likes it too.
So well rapped out.
Do you really rap that long without breath or have you edited it to sound that way?
It's clever and clean editing if so.
Like the ending.
Very good stuff top notch.
What's the word now ... this is sick bro ... the dope.
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good work.
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Great Job
D
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For heavens sake I'm 63 and almost everyday I'm listening to and enjoying hip hop!
It wasn't supposed to be like this ......
I love the little tweaks in this that appear here and there ... I dunno what you call them but I'm sure you know what I mean. Extremely well put together. You or whoever are very good at editing and arranging this stuff.
Someone mentioned mixing and mastering it ... hasn't that already been done?
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greetz KB
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I can't add much to what the others have said about it, if you ever fancy a collaboration with real instruments then check out my other tracks and come back to me, maybe we can do something. Cheers, TG
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love the constand bass I hear, awesome played
Tight vocals to back it all up, love it guys!
~Eighteen
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The music here is pretty decent, with some quite funky bass playing and a pleasant synth lead.
However, your vocal is really good. Sounds like a good, natural voice and your delivery is very laidback and relaxed. Good reverb on the vocal too.
Shame the track is so short and ends so abruptly. Doesn't feel like a full track though I do appreciate the good times vibe.
Congrats.