I can see the direction this is headed. This is indeed EDM, and such a light and gentle form. You've got the idea of the style, and now all that must be done is to redefine your EDM style. Lots of light and smooth sounds were used, which is really uncommon for many EDM tracks, so you've made an uncommon track, which many people don't do. Really creative! I'm excited to see more coming from you!
I don't listen to much music with lyrics, so my comment here is not based on much listening experience. Generally speaking, I would agree with everyone else here who says that it is pleasant to listen to.
The only thing I noticed that is suboptimal: Near the beginning (at ~0:35?), the vocalist sings slowly for a little bit, and the music does not change with the vocalist. Then the vocalist becomes really repetitive starting at ~0:48, and again the music does not change. This gave me the initial impression that the music is out of sync with the vocals. (Interestingly, the music does not strictly follow the vocalist in the second "block" of vocals either, but for some reason I did not even notice that the first time I listened to the song.)
I can tell that you have made significant progress compared to your previous EDM track, since the intro sounds "natural" enough that it is not blatantly obvious that the sounds were made using a computer.
However, I still like your earlier EDM track better, probably at least partially because it is pure EDM. My negative comments on this track:
-Its too repetitive (which I believe is perfectly acceptable for dubstep...)
-There could be more variety in the instruments used and/or the beat itself
haven`t listened to house in quite a while...nice flow & good memories here...the vocal sounds good & I like the nice kind of light bouncy accompaniment that contrasts nicely with the lower end & beats...the vocal gets burried a little bit in that section around 2:35 (lot5s of synth in the shared frequency range)...but overall its good listening GryllaQ...well done....Ed
Pretty cool stuff! Been listening to an old Paula Abdul cassette lately, and if the modern synthesis were left out, then this would remind me of it a bit. Of course that was more centered around verses as well, but I realize that people don't have the attention span now. Enjoying the feel of the mix very much... minimal and a little bit deep. Fun to hear!
House..haven't been around house music since it was big back in the 80's. Pretty damn long time. Love the energy pumping off of this, very catchy. I like the melody, certainly compliments the vocals. Good mix for first time producing vocals. Great effort, keep bringing it :)
That's pretty neat for someone who made their first vocal track! Actually, the tone goes well with the vocals! (It's just that the vocals at the start might be just a bit louder than the tone, or is it just my ears?) Anyways, great track! I hope you could do more and improve onto the future! Cheers!
Wow! Very well done. I am looking forward to the "many more" part. I suspect that I like EDM music. I especially like "light" (quieter/less "busy") EDM music that incorporates piano and/or other traditional/classical instruments. This track is probably the best example of this that I have seen so far on looperman.com.
Commented on Blossom by GryllaQ
I can see the direction this is headed. This is indeed EDM, and such a light and gentle form. You've got the idea of the style, and now all that must be done is to redefine your EDM style. Lots of light and smooth sounds were used, which is really uncommon for many EDM tracks, so you've made an uncommon track, which many people don't do. Really creative! I'm excited to see more coming from you!
~GO
Commented on Blossom by GryllaQ
Such a simple sounding track. All the sounds work together. Keep it up
Commented on Blossom by GryllaQ
Very suitable for vdo-games
Nice work
Commented on GryllaQ - The Greatest Feeling by GryllaQ
I don't listen to much music with lyrics, so my comment here is not based on much listening experience. Generally speaking, I would agree with everyone else here who says that it is pleasant to listen to.
The only thing I noticed that is suboptimal: Near the beginning (at ~0:35?), the vocalist sings slowly for a little bit, and the music does not change with the vocalist. Then the vocalist becomes really repetitive starting at ~0:48, and again the music does not change. This gave me the initial impression that the music is out of sync with the vocals. (Interestingly, the music does not strictly follow the vocalist in the second "block" of vocals either, but for some reason I did not even notice that the first time I listened to the song.)
Commented on Two Players by GryllaQ
I can tell that you have made significant progress compared to your previous EDM track, since the intro sounds "natural" enough that it is not blatantly obvious that the sounds were made using a computer.
However, I still like your earlier EDM track better, probably at least partially because it is pure EDM. My negative comments on this track:
-Its too repetitive (which I believe is perfectly acceptable for dubstep...)
-There could be more variety in the instruments used and/or the beat itself
-I personally prefer more upbeat music
Commented on GryllaQ - The Greatest Feeling by GryllaQ
haven`t listened to house in quite a while...nice flow & good memories here...the vocal sounds good & I like the nice kind of light bouncy accompaniment that contrasts nicely with the lower end & beats...the vocal gets burried a little bit in that section around 2:35 (lot5s of synth in the shared frequency range)...but overall its good listening GryllaQ...well done....Ed
Commented on Blossom by GryllaQ
Hi. This track remind me of the machine fliper game. But it's good.
Commented on GryllaQ - The Greatest Feeling by GryllaQ
Pretty cool stuff! Been listening to an old Paula Abdul cassette lately, and if the modern synthesis were left out, then this would remind me of it a bit. Of course that was more centered around verses as well, but I realize that people don't have the attention span now. Enjoying the feel of the mix very much... minimal and a little bit deep. Fun to hear!
Commented on GryllaQ - The Greatest Feeling by GryllaQ
House..haven't been around house music since it was big back in the 80's. Pretty damn long time. Love the energy pumping off of this, very catchy. I like the melody, certainly compliments the vocals. Good mix for first time producing vocals. Great effort, keep bringing it :)
TBK
Commented on GryllaQ - The Greatest Feeling by GryllaQ
Nice work. Sounds great
Commented on GryllaQ - The Greatest Feeling by GryllaQ
That's pretty neat for someone who made their first vocal track!
Actually, the tone goes well with the vocals!
(It's just that the vocals at the start might be just a bit louder than the tone, or is it just my ears?)
Anyways, great track! I hope you could do more and improve onto the future!
Cheers!
Commented on Blossom by GryllaQ
Amazing song
I can use in mobile applications for free?
Commented on GryllaQ - The Greatest Feeling by GryllaQ
No problem anytime my friend :D
Commented on GryllaQ - The Greatest Feeling by GryllaQ
Thanks finally found something I can listen to all week.
Commented on Blossom by GryllaQ
nice song yes
Commented on Blossom by GryllaQ
I can see this being used in a good scrolling platform game!
Commented on Blossom by GryllaQ
Wow! Very well done. I am looking forward to the "many more" part. I suspect that I like EDM music. I especially like "light" (quieter/less "busy") EDM music that incorporates piano and/or other traditional/classical instruments. This track is probably the best example of this that I have seen so far on looperman.com.
Commented on Blossom by GryllaQ
cool!