Sireone

yo this beat is TIGHT
that GUITAR sets it on PHIRE!

flow rides pretty PHAT on those
drums, only thing you guys could do
is make the OVERALL vol. for the track
a little louder...

i could barely hear it...
but considerin' it's a rough copy
i'll let ya off the hook fam'
ahahaha

KEEP BANGIN'
imma be on the lookout for an update
for this one!

Much Respect from LA

Interesting approach! Nice track

This track is straight fire man! The only thing i can really say is maybe raise the vocals a bit also maybe the overall volume of the song. Ima make sure i check out your tracks from now on.

- CMK

I dig the sampling of the baby's thing whatever it is - Might sound better if you can replicate it so it's in tune a bit better. Coz it's out of tune a little, it sounds more tedios the longer it goeas on. Pretty creative idea you came up with though.

Fantastically evil sounding in a way! Love some of your lyrics ob this track plus Reality Check. I've just uploaded a track that needs a vocal. I'd like to see what you could do with that - it's looking for a more commercial vocal with catchy chorus - it has 2 choruses plus a double-outro chorus. Let me know if you're up for it.

not a big fan of the beat, lyrics and concept are good, and I don't think this is a good song to have a female vocalist over.

It has a strange starting point but is very good

I like the lyrics a lot hommie they sound sick with the beat Peace God Bless

it has a jadkiss/canibus vibe to it like the song lots good work
DUCE

tight sirens and the bass and soundz are tight and unique

I liked the way you used an effect for the vocals. Nice track.

This sounds soo old school (not a bad thing)
Very simple and just a good listen overall!
:-)

Awesome vocals as well

x-_Bri_-x

I would like to hear some variance in your accompaniment during the chorus so there's a distinct verse/chorus structure to the music as well as the lyrics. The lyrics sound great and I really like the overall sound of your rapping. Very well done.

surprised nobody has reviewed this yet, i love it! you guys sure busted a move with this one! love the string stabs in there, and the lead synth, really feels as though you are moving!

sick ending as well!!

great tuneage guys, keep collabing if this is what you guys turn out!

ima d/l and fav this piece!

keep it coming!
B.S

Hi Sireone
Thats a real good track.
I will be downloading it when I get back from work.
Faved as well!
Well done
Regards
Krook

That was seriously some dope Shiz.

Awesome sirens and great synth panning tying this up nice.

whatchya gonna do with the midas touch???

ain't that a tire company??

LYRICALLY Faving this.

That's you rapping right?
Great lyrics...
(a little cheesy, but you actually made the whole idea work for me -- MADE me pay attention in a lighthearted way.)

Ok.. the mix.. (THIS IS JUST MY OPINION, AND I AM A METAL HEAD.)
Watch the bass, it can suck your mids...
so.. it's best to have a clean mix, that floats around the -6 to -3 db range.. and yeah i mean peak... that way, if you choose to master it, you give the person mastering the ability to play with the mix.

When you vocals, you really have to worry about the midrange... soo I would encourage you, when you do the vocal mix, you have a more or less flatter EQ....
soo keep in mind that you have the midrange and lower highrange to worry about with a vocalist.

"Bass is rumble
Mid is boxy
Highs are harsh"
--soundvisionz said it.

love it, post it in the forums when it's done, i hope to hear the end product.

this is a raw beat. Its a real ass intro and the song builds sick. is that your rhyme