ChrisHall

This is awesome, your voice is light but powerful at the same time, congrats on being talented enough to create such a powerful song :)

Another great acoustic track! The harmonizing is actually pretty good! It's light, but it's a staple in the song. Nice lyrics. I can tell that this girl means a lot to you ^^

I'm always amazed how you can write such powerful songs just with your voice and guitar.Definitely love the colour of your voice and your guitar playing.Somehow reminds me of acoustic Pink Floyd tracks.
Great
French Kid

Can i have this one? Goooshhh i would pay you for it!

Loving every minute of this. Reminds me of something like Coldplay But so much more you own! You should be famous!

Really good track! World need more songs like that! 5/5 ;)

This is just a great song!Good to hear a simple acoustic track made with heart and soul,with great vocals and guitar strumming.I also prefer the verses than chorus,maybe not punchy enough but it's such a great track!.Faved!

Hey man great track! I had to fav it. I would love to put some work into this myself. If you are cool with that let me know. Send the track to: conan_swanson@yahoo.com

Awesome track. One of my top favs on the site for sure. Love it all dude! Awesome shht!

Hey mate must say i really enjoyed this! i listened to this all the way through more than once! looking forward to hearing more!

Hi Chris,

Getting around to give you a proper review back from the recent rock tune you reviewed of mine.

Nice tune here. I like the finger picking style of the acoustic guitar. I own a Mitchell myself. Mostly heard on my country tunes.

I like all the playing, and your vocals are pretty good I think. You seem to have a soft voice. I don't sing myself, so I can't give any pointers that way.
Great job,
Randy

nice tune maybe alittle more depth on ya soundz but cool tune
maybe a live type drums and thatz a winner

great track again love your voice even if (oops its our secret, lol) love the structure this just flows, but I'm an honest guy and in my opinion there is a line in your first verse that does not flow like the rest of your text and its this one (the last on of the first verse) Theres an ocean between The lives were living But we think the same things, rythm wise this one just does not sound right like the rest of the track, maybe if your deliver it in a different way it won't clash, but even the words sound not right, to my hear, and this is one mans opinion, and I really think its the end of the phrase that is not right (But we think the same things) again maybe its in the way your deliver that part I think maybe there are to many syllable in that part I've just listen to it again and that part But we think the same things does not flow like the rest of the track for sure, but for the rest it a great love song you romantic fool, told you that voice will get you girls, lol.

aww this is really sweet, I'm sure your significant other will love this, or already does. I would absolutely melt if somebody wrote something just for me. And it is not cheesy by any means. Soo awesome! :)

i love how uv mixed the two, very relaxing well done pal

This is an awesome tune. I would suggest uping the vocal volume just a bit, coz without the lyrics posted, it's a bit hard to understand what you're saying. But, I understand the style of the song so it fits nicely for this stripped version. Just for when you make it into a full band song it'll help a lot.

Really can't wait until you make the band version.
This is a hot one. Instant favorite.

(UPDATE) Yeah, that sounds better. Can hear you more clearly now.

X

What bitrate did you convert it at mate? I'm getting these buzzy pops mixed with fluxuating tone changes that come when it's too low. I kinda feel bad because I can't really give you the in-depth kind of feedback you were wanting for this.
Though from what I can hear I really like the melody of the guitar here and am thinkin that it'd be really sweet if they had some accompanying piano (and if ya really wanna go epic with it some rich, sweeping strings too). As for the vocals, I'm thinkin that you could do 'em yourself, but what I'd recommend is that you record them separately from the mix so that way you can duplicate 'em (for extra volume & depth) and you can experiment with adding effects on some extra copies of 'em. For style and sound quality think of Jakob Dylan's style when he was with the Wallflowers, like Sixth Avenue Heartache maybe). And I'm thinkin that drums are completely optional for this type of track, but if ya do add 'em think of the Smashing Pumpkins' style on Tonight Tonight. And I'm outtie 5000. Later on!

(update)
Naw, I'm still getting those sounds mate. Hmm, maybe it has to do with the frequency that you rendered this at (is it 44khz or...?). Coz these extra sounds shouldn't occur @ higher than 96 Kbps. And twastn't a problem for the other thing. Lates again!

cool track, i like the guitars in this one. its a good effort here, but for some reason it just doesnt sound full. i cant really pinpoint why. now i do really like the solo. that was awesome! good job on this and good luck!

soundz good maybe if u turn clapz a tad down or layer it with snare but overall nice spanish vibe cool. love that guitar

Adding in the birds....brilliant.

Made me feel like I was chillin' with you in a beautiful park. Wanted some lyrics to sing along :D (Well, probably just some oooh's and aaaah's to harmonize and not take away from the guit.)

For not being a singer you did real well. Good melody on the guitar and cool lyrics.

WOW! What a great update to an old jam. I love your guitar style, the sweep picking is really impressive and clean!!! No whammy bar needed thats all chilrish's fingers people!

Hi Chris,

Hey, cool track. Like the guitar fuzz sound. Reminds me of the older days. I've never done any hip hop stuff as it doesn't particulary interest me. But I like your tune here with this beat.

Randy

love that track that guitar is killerwith those drumz. Check my feature with Toxicvoltage 1

sick bruv, needs some double time spittin over it! peace

woah this is pretty sweet. the guitar is awesome, it really makes the track. very unique track, and its very well put together.