MGproduct

Very beautiful melody and haunting chords. Love the instrumentation. Thanks for the listen. You have a great talent. PDmuzak

Mate, this is one of your best work yet.
Congrats and well done.
Brilliant……favs it goes.
Jamid

i love the intro . and your choice of sounds are great. keep up the good work .. im a hip hop r&B but im getting into the electric music and combinding it with my style of music .. peace and if you like to lets collab

I like the mellow intro. I was almost disappointed with the breakdown, then well ... the breakdown happened haha !

Its surely something I'd listen to while playing Zelda, or a theme track for a boss battle on the earlier Final Fantasy productions, the 16 bits style.

Props mate.
I dont do electronic, but I dig this.

Faved !

Good for you MG...welcome to Looperman....I think you have all the parts of a good song here...the music is good and your singing is fine...the technical things about mixing the final product will improve as you do it more often...I like your words.....well done...keep on doing your music...Ed

cool mystical vocals i like it! :)

An interesting track. The vocals weren't bad, they work for this track. It sounds happy & uplifting, I enjoyed listening to the instruments you used.

- JAweGuy :)

Hello Mr M.
This is really nice track, is the vocal your voice?
It is brilliant my friend.
Well done.
Jamid

Well I didn't know what to expect as i was listening through,Coz the intro got my utmost attention.Its a beautiful track indeed.You saying the vocals are not clean lol, but I heard the potential in your singing which is good,going well with the song.My advice is that you get a nice mic and record the same vocals and you have a hit.secondly I don't think the beat is fitting for this one,just a kick-snare affair,eg 1/4 k.s.k.s etc will do.(that's my view)keep on it dude

The lyrics sound vaguely similar to Far Away by Feed Me + Kill The Noise. Either way, nice mix overall, vocals are kind of a little drowned out, but that's the only major issue.
Nice Job!

Dude. I could Master this for you.

Very nice idea overall. I like the singing, wish it was clearer but the idea is good. The drums seem a bit loud maybe even a little busy for the song, just my opinion. My suggestion would be to soften them with some more reverb or lower the volume a bit, even simplify them. Pretty cool idea though, well done MGproduct!

Wayne

MG
Hello my friend,
Your track is a brilliant track.
From 0:48 it is fantastic.
If I was you I would take the section from0:48 to 1:02 out.
Then join the track, I believe it would be a lot better.
Please don’t be put off this is my personal take on it.
Thanks and well done.
Jamid

When the page reloaded after leaving my comment, the waveform had completely changed... maybe you just updated this? It looks far quieter now, very thin waveform which doesn't use the headroom available. Might want to check into that.

This sounds pretty nice as well. My initial reaction is that the real instruments are pretty quiet compared to the drums. My system is turned most of the way up and I needed to strain to hear some of the passages. Possibly this is what you intended though, as it is final version. I did just use a power drill, so it may be my ears, but I almost never turn up my speakers that far unless I'm in a different room. That's the best advice I can give. Like your other track, I find the composition pleasing. I still find some amount of sampled feel to some instruments here, but it could be I'm mistaking an effect such as a gate or expander for the choppy sound of a sampled one shot instrument. Please don't take my suggestions as being critical, just trying to assist you as you have asked for. I enjoy hearing your tracks!

Well, the composition is pretty nice overall. I guess my best tip is that you use a real guitar and/or piano, since your profile states that you play both of them. The sample based composition is quite choppy, and guitar is one of the instruments which is least believable as a sampled instrument (at least to my ears). Like I said, the writing is good, it just needs to be brought to life.