dang i love how it starts great track i love da siren you used maybe you can email me dat sometime but, again maybe change it up at times, i love dis one though keep on doing your thang
dang man dis is hot ral big improvement, id prolly change it up at places an add some synths at places like the heavy pad type maybe do lika remix or somethin but ay dats jus me, butchu did a great job on dis one keep it up
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not talkin shhh, not saying im better.
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i like the melody and the phaser you put on it.
but you should try making a counter melody or something to go with it or something. maybe cut out the melody a for 16 bars then bring it in with everything. you get what im sayin?
i mean, if easy simple beats are your fortay then i understand, but technicality without over producing is what can turn some heads.
if you want, i could maybe try throwin something else on there for ya. add a counter melody and a bass line.
hit me up if that sounds good.
if not, its cool.
all in all, this track has potential.
just needs more work put into it
this is one of those special tracks which has so much atmosphere it just makes u wannna listen to it again and again it has a real tunefull soul which is acoupined by a great bassline i like the the squealing synth the most i think it makes the track.
hot man reminds me of the Lonely loner although the snare intro to the chorus is a little off beat its still hot i guess your not finished id also add another drum pattern like a faster drum pattern and alternate from both good job man keep it up
tight beat..I would have like to have heard the drums come in sooner..it was like i was waiting for something big to happen at eh beginning..lovely programming on the drums..add so chimes..lol
solid crunk beat man. good job i like the bells and synth sounds you put in there. and you mixed it all well. keep it up. you should check out some of my stuff when you get a chance
THIS IS A GOOD CATCHY BEAT MAN, I DUNNO IF YOUR DONE WITH IT YET BUT I RECCOMEND TURN THE CLAP DOWN A BIT AND THE BASS LEVEL IS DISTORTED AND THEN IT WOULD BE FIRE, AND MAYBE ADD ANOTHER LEAD OR SUMTHIN DURIN A TRANSITION, JUST MY OPINION BUT PRETTY SOLID BEAT KEEP IT UP!!!
-T R I S-
werd, not a bad lil beat, reminds me of a commercial song i hear on the radio all the time but cant quite put my finger on wich one... hmmm, either way, its sick, def hip-hop beat, haha if u got hard time finding genre, just ask yourself, would MCs sound good on this?? plus anytime u got hi-hats and snair rolls laced up like that, lol, thats usualy hip-hop...
I think it's good but the claps kind of overwhelm your main loop
and the bass could be turned down a bit
im not sure if youd be better off making the main loop louder, its up to you
Aite the loops nice.... The Claps too loud and out.... Ouch!!! That bass needs to be turned down alot... The snare roll was a little bit off. The kick should be double layered in my opinion as well. But considerin ur jus startin out its a nice attempt... keep workin at it man
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not talkin shhh, not saying im better.
musician to musician
i like the melody and the phaser you put on it.
but you should try making a counter melody or something to go with it or something. maybe cut out the melody a for 16 bars then bring it in with everything. you get what im sayin?
i mean, if easy simple beats are your fortay then i understand, but technicality without over producing is what can turn some heads.
if you want, i could maybe try throwin something else on there for ya. add a counter melody and a bass line.
hit me up if that sounds good.
if not, its cool.
all in all, this track has potential.
just needs more work put into it
-celestial
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yea chimes =]
ill d0o that lol
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-T R I S-
thx though
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and the bass could be turned down a bit
im not sure if youd be better off making the main loop louder, its up to you
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