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Oh yeah, you're the one into the flip side of hardcore, I forgot! This is cool! The comment "you need to process the vocal much more (unless you're trying to pull emulate your style to spivkurl's, which is cool i guess" was really very funny to me. Both because sometimes I feel like I process my vocals far TOO much, and because this is very different from most of my styles. Though I can hear a lot of Skinny Puppy/Ohgr in this, and they/he are some of my biggest influences. Don't let anyone keep you from doing what you love, because it rocks. I would not recommend giving this vocals more of a stereo presence, as they are clear enough and very focused... those are what I look for in a main vocal. Very great song! Faved!

Hardcore is a funny genre around looperman, as there is no specification as to whether hardcore dance or hardcore hip hop is what is meant... so I never know what I'll hear when clicking on that genre. I usually click hoping to hear hardcore dance, but as far as hip hop goes, hardcore is usually better. I think the vocals sound pretty cool. Every one has already mentioned the distortion (clipping), so I won't beat it to death. I don't think in this case that mastering or limiting is a good solution, as it will just increase the problem. I recommend hitting up the mixing stage, and turn all the channels down by about the same amount, until your mix has no clipping - then go on a do a slightly more gentle mix. It will be more listenable and portable that way. Cool effort!

This is unique and genius :)

This track is funny as hell man. Besides the vocals, the way you made the song just enhances how funny it is. I'm loving it!. As others have pointed out though, it does need to be mastered a bit cause it is distorted way too much. Distortion is good but their is a limit, lol. Good job bro

I love your voice. The only issue I see with this song is there is a gnarly distortion because the song has been pushed up too high. I suggest getting a limiter to solve this problem. There are several free ones you can get that do wonderfully.

ER

Hello,
This track very good, creatively laid out .
Nice Hardcore, however; your gain is too high that at the top end there is a distortion.
Maybe it should be a touch lower this is my view though.
It’s great job though.
Jamid

ez xXin
great track n unique sounding
agree with mosaic on the loudness of the drums n bassline just bring down in ur mix and then try processing the finished track to give it that oomphf
like the effect sound on the vox defo got potential
:P

What the hell man? This is AMAZING.

Not into this kind of music but this one is just amazing.
Really good job!

Hey xX

Mate not don't listen to this genre much, but thought would give you a listen just on the creation side of it, great vocal, some nice synths used here, waveform is like a brick, which is a sign it has been maxed out volume wise, which is causing massive distortion, which when playing this, that is the case too much distortion, especially over the beat parts, when beat drops out, seems a lot clearer but even then still distorted, need not to max the vol out too much, you can still do hardcore or any other genre with out boosting the daylights out of it,reckon this has very good potential to me to be great track and listen, had to lower my vol way down low, my vol is set at 12 percent for this track even then it was too loud, seriously need to lay off the vol booster, apart from that it has potential for sure, notice you doing many reviews, seriously how can you review 3 tracks in 3 minutes??? I least I gave you the courtesy of listen to your whole track, even with the distortion...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...

you should lower the bass then i think your voice would be abit more clear.

Definitely hardcore. It is pretty energetic. Wasn't really into it though to be honest. The mix seems overly distorted unless this was intentional. But whenever I hear a the term "hardcore" I do think of something kind of distorted. I do like the lyrics at points. The instrumentation is actually well done. Just not what I'm listening to right now. Keep it up. peace

Gramo/Neo

I like the instrumental, but like others said the vocals need work. The lyrics are nice, but the vocals just need to be better recorded and better mixed. It sounds like you have a filter on it or something. Other than that, nice work here.

I would like to ask though, if you don't mind: What mic do you use for vocals? And how did you process it in the DAW?

ER

Personally, I like the way the vocal sounds. I think it may be a matter of taste at this point. Maybe the vocal could have more stereo presence since the song is so driving but this definitely well-put together. A little bassy but very good :) Cheers and welcome to the site :P

ER

This reminds me on punk and new wave era in the late 70's and the early 80's...good to bring back some memories...and yes, the track is genuinely energetic!

Congrats_______orlando

hey there heavy track
like the intro and the dirty synth line,
sonically sounds sharp
:P

I'm surprised there is no comments sofar, this track is very cool!I Really, like it.
Well done.
Jamid