dsam

Sounds great, my friend, hope you flesh it out a bit more.

Keep them coming

John

I like the track, my friend, and your vocals kick.

Keep them coming

John

Very nice. I just wish it was longer. Love the depth of the atmosphere you created in so short a piece.

John

I hope this project hasn't been abandoned. It has a lot of potential.

John

it is a lil jazzy but id drop some flows on it nice work

i like it very creative good job on this

tight track man i like it this is str8

this is a fine track...Eshar and Sam...vocals are tight and so is the track...keep em coming...
we should hook up and do a track.
keep em coming...I hear u from Block A...Sam
Eshar...nice track...

K.I.M

nice tune man..i like the nice 7th on teh guit too :) catchy and you got a good voice! more like this please :p

Chris

Cool track. Nice bassline! I really like the piano you have on here, and the cut out with just the piano and drums. Looks like you put a lot of thought into this piece and it shows. I always like a storyline. Nice job!

I love the song, and you're description really puts everything in perspective. I feel like I can understand where you are coming from. Good work! Thanks for sharing!

Thank you playa...it takes a long time to find some talent on this joint. Good work for real!!

nice touch with this one very fitting just before valentines day! can't wait to hear the final product, anything with eshar in it, will be good

yeah man, this is a nice beat, piano is cool and I like how you paused it, man keep it up, peace
N18th

i couldntt help but move to this hahaa i like it its nicee dudee its good chillin music

sweet song. it'll be awesome when it's done.

I love this song by eshar, im sporting it
on my ipod lol.

Excellent vocal job
:)

hahahahaha, well dash dash we go then, dance alone

i would sugest u take this track to the samba part if i am not mistaken, it sounds very well in a samba tango section of mind, nice work.

hey, i like this one, i like the trombone in there, rocks me, i like this one, good work, got me

this track is kinda like jazz to me, with the lower bass line and the high keys.

this track is nice in tune, but i like it best when u play it with the lower stabs, the pianos sound a lil out of each other.

Hello Dsam,

You have this song down as punk, but it sounds more like rap to me with all the words.

The tune was pretty short, but as Eshar said, if made longer, it could have a lot of interesting things put into it musically.

I'd say you got the voice to do a nice job on any tune, so i'd sing more too.

Thanks for sharing it,

Randy

i dont think this is hip hop lol

I like that flow from beginning you got in this track maybe chilled piece thoug nice pitchin art you got inhere! keep up cheerz dusthill