7venth12

This is brilliantly put together. ie, 1:48 when the singer is silent you add a melodic line (synth pipes) works awesome and follows the rules of pop songwriting to a T. Nice male vox at the end quietly introduced.
really good work.
Cru

Dang man, this track is so good. It's a bit too compressed though, you're losing clarity on some of the percussion (shakers and such) because it is pressed so hard. But the vocal and the instrumental are flawless. It's extremely catchy, why are you still here when you could be getting big? :)

Brado

Hi.

Yes, not that many active commenters here and very few decent, interesting ones. But there are still a few.

These vocals are pure pop music to me so not at all what I'm into. It's a good voice and the kind that people love, I understand that.

0:32 reverbed bongo type of hits are a surprise and work quite well.

0:52 good movement of pads. Arps, perhaps. Then a fat kick as this builds with a good, melodic new lead.

Then the drums drop out pretty much where I thought they might kick into a firmer groove. Then a long build again, with those high vocals on top. Then things get a bit steadier in terms of groove and more exciting before coming back down for the end.

This is chilled out but also quite loud and powerful. Perhaps too loud (on the master) but I know that's popular in this sort of style. Makes me think of some sort of emotional, chillout dubstep.

Sorry if I didn't have much interesting stuff to say but I did try.

Congrats on some decent work though it's not my kind of style.

Almost good track...liked the way you didn't use the conventional 4-beat kick rhythm. The bass goes in well too.
You know,just a wee bit of mastering needed here and there (volume normalization perhaps)
Thank you
TJ

Very interesting style of song here. Has a very pop vibe to it, which is not what I would usually listen to. All the same, I do dig the composition and arrangement. I found the mix/master to be extremely loud and harsh, especially for this sort of "emotional" song. I had just listened to one of my songs in order to reply to a comment well... then I started your song, and I had to to lower the volume on my speakers so that they were nearly off. This is a bad sign. You want the listener to be able to adjust the volume on their own. There is some clipping present in the song, and I would back of on any compression and limiting thresholds/gain. Good work on the composition though for sure. Don't be discouraged about Looperman, just keep doing your thing here, and people will come around.

Ok, i can freek this. Is there a hook section per say or how should I approach it in your opinion?

Excellent sound, and quite original too. Or am I just a bit behind the times? Probably :)

Thanks for sharing.

You are getting good at this future bass sound bro! Did you designed the sounds or is it presets?

Just maybe, it gets boring here, I don't know lol

I thought this track was beautiful. Love the arrangement. I'm going to guess either Dm or Gm. Keep up the good work.

Nice use of vocals and very chill. enjoyable.
cru

(Something I wrote to this beat)

.optimistic - not un-real-istic
.a mystic
.re-al-ist

.we in this - journey to please
.so lets be honest - i - want - my peeps to be free
.the sequel to see - is = to 3...

Great work! I wrote a few bars out of respect but I could just as easily listen to this and just reminisce. Keep em coming 7venth12.

Another gem. Great mix man

What a beautiful chilled out track you have here. Laid back and really easy on the ear! How did you put it together was it a vocal sample worked round a tune or someone singing over the track? Excellent work here anyway. Very well done!

You were definitely correct about the emotion part. Definitely got me feeling haha! Great track, honestly love he samplework. And it fits just right with the synth! I'm jealous :D Samplework is still a weak point for me. But anyways, with looperman dying out. I think it's more like this time of year, everyone's out and about. So it might not be as active, however I never saw this place as a place for people to listen. I always thought of it as something where you can get the advice from others on what can improve your track. And those people who actually take the time to listen and give honest feedback are all still here, dont worry :) Much Love man! And best of luck to you in the future!

Very creative, really like the flow of the track, awesome vocal samples, one of my faves from here.

Dang 7venth12, you got quite the skills. The voice lacked presence to my ears, was drowned out a bit by the music. But your track is FIRE. I love your production. I think just boosting some frequencies around 2-5kHz (you can toy with it) on her voice to help it cut through a bit more would really bring her voice to life and help it to mesh a bit better with the track overall. Great production, I critique you but with the utmost respect. Good stuff, what are you doing here when you could be big? :)

Brado

Daaaamn!!! This is a hot track, nicely arranged really like this a lot. excellent job

Like the vocals, I'm going to have to check out those vocal packs. Very well arranged. I like monsters, there's no more under my bed or in my closet, I scared them all away 3:D>

I really like this song, are you singing in it?

Really enjoyed that, thanks for sharing :)

Your stuff is definitely different. I like the flute you use, in particular. What software are you using to make this kind of music? I've been getting more interested in making electronic music and this is only motivating me more.

Brado

Great track, second the good job on side chaining, very chilled the piano is great too!

Really nice one for dreaming yourself a bit away.
Very good production and synth work here.
Calm and groovy at the same time.
Really well done! I enjoyed the listen

stay tuned
joe

(rap lyrics )

.on a higher plane
.migrane from the eye strain
.-now making thoughs real
.for the pain kill

.many thinking "pay bill"
.so they can't chill
.i just pray to the heavens
.for today's meal......

Nice work!

Fav'd my friend. I immediately fell in love with the tone. The rain effects, the piano, with that vintage old timey effect on everything in the intro. And everything following that is just so appealing to my ears, I ca't even comprehend haha! Thank you for the experience. Congrats on te track, And best of luck to you in the future! Much love!