profita

SOunds complete already mate, but id change the tuning here and there, like for lead-up and lead-outs it wud give it variation and go with the bassline a tiny bit better :) - its a nice overall composition though :)

Always been a fan of songs about the rain. So I had to check it out. Very nice. Cool with the mellow lyrics with the trance beat. Nice mixing too.

I've been meaning to get around to this track and review it, but I always seem to be doing something when it's featured. Great flow and very laid back. Keep up the great art! aRtIsTic

I really enjoyed the tune, it's quite good for doing everything on your own. That's a lot harder than just using loops someone else made. I thought this track reminded me more of a tundra or wintery scene. Really nice job though!

beautiful track man, lots of change, smooth cahnge - keeps it interesting and had me glued through it all - it just glides through...very nice! I like...I like... peace.

Nice arrangement and flow.Hard and smooth at the same time.
Sounds like u finish it already..Anyways,Keep it up! =)

I like that strong kick! Nice synth that starts around 1:10 :D

I agree with TheHandThatRocksTheDecks about the bassline.

Great track :P

good effort nice and melodic. maybe a strong bassline might make it a little better.
Hunta

Excellent track..very catchy and upbeat....great work!...cheers planet

First of all thanks for dropping by and taking the time to comment on my music. What I try to do in this age of rap and electronica is create music that is digital but sounds like real musicans with real instruments, putting real messages in the music. I know I probably sound like a dinosaur, and I do feel like one at times, but thats where I'm coming from when I listen to music. Your tune sounds very nice in a electronic sort of way, but as a listener I want to know what you are trying to say with this piece of music? The message I get is: The desert has timeless beauty, ok I agree. That is good. For me the kind of music that really hits me and stays with me are subjects with a deep meaning, like lets say the mysteries of the universe, then you open up endless possibilities for subjects for writing. Who were your parents grandparents, do you know? are they watching you? How would you feel if a wife, or husband, or child died? where do they go? You can use music to tell people who you are and what you believe in and what your feeling. Anybody can put sounds together digitally these days, the only thing that will set you apart are the reasons and messages you choose to set your music to. Of course these are just my opinions and don't mean a hill of beans to anybody but me. Remember music is magic and I'll be listening for more of your sounds, keep up the good work.

yeah it needs some work done on it but not too much ..you dont want to over complicate the track.. sometimes less is more. cant wait to hear the finished version.. mik

Laidback, man...this is definitely something I fox with. Where some people *cough* me *cough* like to overbear people with a bunch of mishmashing sounds to create an atmosphere, you did a really good job of keeping this track clean, letting it build up at a smooth pace and allowing the details, like that flanged sound in the background, set the mood. Another fine track.

nice melody bro....perfect backround synth..i like especialy the deep synth which comes in 1:16!!as i tell you several times you have great feeling for building up songs!!!!!!

maybe try adding a compressor for your loudness.

I always appreciate music that has nice melodic hooks. This one has a couple and I think it sounds very good. It would benefit from a good bass line. And some pretty female vocals would add a lot of flavor. Very cool track. Peace and Love, Six

find a good singer and you gat summin....... Do Work.....

this was a treat to listen to very upbeat and happy kept me going all the way through! killer intro and when I thought that there should be a kick in BAM! there it was right on time!
I liked it Nice job the only thing this needs is vocals!

Johnny Gadget

Cool beat, really nice bassline and abstract bell sounds...

Keep up the good work..

Splish

I like those bell melodies maybe u should try makin that beat more shuffle sounds bit too static (robotic) to me.. except that good work keep on let'em shake!

Man, this is easy listening at it's finest. Loved the bells. Tubular hip hop, dude. Well done. Moke

Hello profita,
Just listened to your song here. Sounded decent to me. I like the piano in the background. Seems like if the bass and drums could come out front more, the song would sound better. But then, maybe electronic music don't use much drums?
Randy

Nice bass line cooking up a great back bone for the rest of the track, Liking those keyboard parts. Cheers Slap...

Great arrangement and production. Nice melody ideas and choice of sounds.Cheers Slap...

mate, i think that you have talent for building up songs...great track...i send greetings to the Yucca valley from Europe:-)respect...