hi, this is really good music. my only sugesstion would be why do not find the proper balance between the arrangement and the vocal part? Some 'harmonic consonance' and 'proper chords' so to speak. I hope it makes sense. I mean there's really excellent vocals in here but all the rest seems to stand out or just maybe there's too much elements in here, I do not know. Myself I will put the main focus on vocals and the overall message instead developing the other elements. Let us say a very 'minimal' approach - but it is still only my personal preference. I enjoyed your track, Alex
you will not believe how i record the vocal :D my cousin Sara (The Vocal) in a different town now so i sent the music and she recorded her Vocal by mobile phone and whatsapp it so i had to lower the vocal volume to hide many mistakes i needed to have the vocal just as a rehearsal how it will be. so next month i'm going to re record the vocal (not by mobile phone) :D
Everyone has said it already. This is an awesome track.
All I would like to add is the kick-drum seems a bit fake and out of place in the track. I like how strong it is, it just sounds too muffled. I truly dig all the rest!
Thanks a lot for the comment this track was my first project on FL studio 10 so i was less knowledge about its abilities by time i become better (i hope) Glad to hear notices about my work it support me to improve it
Firstly thanks again for posting on my recent track "Stay".
I like this very much. It's so good to hear what i call "proper songs" with verses, choruses and middle sections. Nice vocals too. Not sure about the string section running all the way and maybe you might consider pacing it a bit and adding instruments as the song progresses. However, welcome to the Loop and best regards from Chester, UK.
Yeah man! Nice rock track. Loads of different sounds going on and nice vocal. The mix quality is all on point and the arrangement is good as well. What a great way to introduce yourself. FR
Thanks.. i think that the strings is the base for most music and sure not all but i like mixing Guitars Power this something more soft i feel it give nice music you know sure i have some mistakes but i wish i could correct and improve my work
Very cool track ...My Man Really like how you put this together, off the top I felt her voice was a little low in the mix, but as she gets going it does increase in level... For me I like to give the vocal control of the front line, it's about the lyric in a singing song, the Music is just along for the ride " The Car she sits in " if you understand my point... Your Music bed track Man, is very good tight and feels real good...I LIKE IT... Keep up the good work...
I didn't know that rock/metal is a fav style right there in Syria...good news...and if I listen to your track, I can hear lots of melodies and an awesome female voice...the instrumentation is stunning too, bass is wow as 18 signed it...bravo, bravo...was that live played? 1 side note (if I can): guitars are a bit sterilized in tone...there are lots of amp collections on the net, for example Amplitube, gave you nearly live feeling... But that's only my visions...:-)
Thanks bro You gavdon't answern amazing words - yes in Syria rock and metal is a fav. Unfortunately we don't have good metal band localy but I wish some day we will. - all music in the track edited on fl studio by keyboard but I tried to give each instrument the soul of a real one - unfortunately i don't have a good electric guitar vst I just used Slayer vst. And it didn't make realastic guitar but I will try to re edit again with less amps
finally ofcourse you can give any notes any time it help me to improve my music
Welcome to The Loop samern...I am sure you will find good musical friends here....I am always interested in hearing the compositional thinking, arrangements and special elements that musicians from different parts of our world bring with them...you do it well...I do not listen to a lot of metal rock but I do really like groups like Nightwish (Norway) that bring the melodic approach to it...Goth rock...I enjoyed this one...you have obviously put a lot of thought into making it not just metal...but melodic metal..good job....Ed
Commented on Tearing MySelf by samern
hi,
this is really good music. my only sugesstion would be why do not find the proper balance between the arrangement and the vocal part? Some 'harmonic consonance' and 'proper chords' so to speak. I hope it makes sense. I mean there's really excellent vocals in here but all the rest seems to stand out or just maybe there's too much elements in here, I do not know. Myself I will put the main focus on vocals and the overall message instead developing the other elements. Let us say a very 'minimal' approach - but it is still only my personal preference.
I enjoyed your track, Alex
Commented on Tearing MySelf by samern
Everyone has said it already. This is an awesome track.
All I would like to add is the kick-drum seems a bit fake and out of place in the track. I like how strong it is, it just sounds too muffled. I truly dig all the rest!
Commented on Tearing MySelf by samern
Hi Samer
Firstly thanks again for posting on my recent track "Stay".
I like this very much. It's so good to hear what i call "proper songs" with verses, choruses and middle sections. Nice vocals too. Not sure about the string section running all the way and maybe you might consider pacing it a bit and adding instruments as the song progresses. However, welcome to the Loop and best regards from Chester, UK.
Richie
Commented on Tearing MySelf by samern
This is just great, I can not wait to hear more of your work.
Commented on Tearing MySelf by samern
Yeah man! Nice rock track. Loads of different sounds going on and nice vocal. The mix quality is all on point and the arrangement is good as well. What a great way to introduce yourself.
FR
Commented on Tearing MySelf by samern
I really like the strings in the background. Gives it kind of a cinematic vibe.
Commented on Tearing MySelf by samern
Great track, Samern. Not usually my preferred taste, but when the musicianship is there, which it is here, I can certainly appreciate it.
I look forward to hearing more of your work.
Cheers,
Scott
Commented on Tearing MySelf by samern
Very cool track ...My Man
Really like how you put this together, off the top I felt her voice was a little
low in the mix, but as she gets going it does increase in level...
For me I like to give the vocal control of the front line, it's about the lyric
in a singing song, the Music is just along for the ride
" The Car she sits in " if you understand my point...
Your Music bed track Man, is very good tight and feels real good...I LIKE IT...
Keep up the good work...
Peace...TG.
Commented on Tearing MySelf by samern
Definetly sounds like something id have on my player. Great work all around
-EYEDYE
Commented on Tearing MySelf by samern
Welcome to Looperman family Samern...you shared very good rock number for a start! Keep up good work!:)
Compliments____Orlando
Commented on Tearing MySelf by samern
Hello Samern!!!
Warm welcome right here...good place...:-)
I didn't know that rock/metal is a fav style right there in Syria...good news...and if I listen to your track, I can hear lots of melodies and an awesome female voice...the instrumentation is stunning too, bass is wow as 18 signed it...bravo, bravo...was that live played?
1 side note (if I can): guitars are a bit sterilized in tone...there are lots of amp collections on the net, for example Amplitube, gave you nearly live feeling...
But that's only my visions...:-)
Much respect and have a nice time here...
Greet you, Danke
Commented on Tearing MySelf by samern
Welcome to The Loop samern...I am sure you will find good musical friends here....I am always interested in hearing the compositional thinking, arrangements and special elements that musicians from different parts of our world bring with them...you do it well...I do not listen to a lot of metal rock but I do really like groups like Nightwish (Norway) that bring the melodic approach to it...Goth rock...I enjoyed this one...you have obviously put a lot of thought into making it not just metal...but melodic metal..good job....Ed
Commented on Tearing MySelf by samern
Wow kick-ass bass :D nice I like
the song is awesome