jean2014

Your guitar seems a bit out of sync in places, the main riff isn't synced with the drums. the other riffs are fine. Cool tune though, would sound great with some soloing over it :D Instead of cutting the guitar off at the end why not let it ring out and decay away?

cool song

Your rhythm guitar track sounds a quarter-note early, or your pick-up note is early, something is off with the guitar and drums for sure. I'd sort that out before you look for vocals.

This will sound pretty good then!! The guitar solo at the end sounds like it was done in the right time, though very impromptu. Still some good soloing there.

I think you need to go back to the Master and work on getting your guitars in sync with the drums. Definitely off somewhere.

tv

I agree with danke, there is a little disconnect, something isnt in sync between drums and guitar. Also I think the guitar is a bit to loud. I love the riff tho

Dear friend!

Hope it won't hurt you but there are heavy slidings over here...the guitars sometimes are out of the programmed drums rhythm...
If you will fix it, it won't be a bad number but in this form there is not much chance to find a vocalist who will make a try on this...
Respect, Danke

wild blues (here comes the wolfdog)

at the dog park yesterday this wolfdog came in and all the dogs freaked out and got all aggressive. lyric could be from the perspective of one of the frightened dogs. don't have anything other than a few word phrase ideas

blue ice for eyes
aint one of us
we gotta test him boys