donfons

AMAZINGGGG!!! work here, this whole track is delicious and well put together, the quality is so crisp and vocal/lyrics are on point!...Bravo!

Nice.

Congrats on doing everything yourself! Sounds good, love the message too. Peace.

Nice track Donfons! I like the rap vocals and the lyrics.

Good Job!

Ronabo

At 0:00 to 0:56 i was a bit bored by the long intro. But after that when the lyrics started, it sounded interesting again. The beat on itself is solid. Which i do find important as well. Mixing has been done properly to. So yeah a job well done. Keep up the good work.

damn. such a vibe even from this snippet
great job imma definitely try and find your project.
cheers man good work
-CAP

Rap not being my scene I was almost going to pass this over. But I'm glad I didn't. Great track. The rap is awesome, clear concise, lyrically intelligent, with a smooth flow. Backing track is snappy, sparse and just right. Interesting intro, and slick production. Super job.

This one is really good mate. The production is solid. Good work!!

I think it's awesome, great top end sparkle but didn't hurt my ears with spikes. Everything I have to say from here on is a matter of absolute taste I think it's great just the way it is if you like the sound, IMO though I would lose the reverb and make it in your face! At the very least you should eq out some of the high's in the verb trails. (Again unless you were going for that). Also, it's "glue" seems a little weird to me? Probably just my listening environment which is awful but I'd personally use something different on your bus for a better glue, again just IMO. Other than that very good clean sound that I like. (I've decided to not comment on tracks I don't like since that doesn't seem very constructive.)

Sounding good i like it.
Love that Sample in Portuguese from Brazil.
As for the Rap You got a good voice and your flow is neat.
The only thing i would say is that the track needs is some variation on the instrumental and a slight improvement on the mastering for overall clarity.
Regards

Hey Don

Mate first off don't listen much to this genre so no constructive feedback, but really loving the sound of this one, mainly one loop, but you have managed to get it to work, without it becoming boring, which is a credit to you and the brilliant loop maker Danke...Very nice track mate...Fav...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...

@BEATZMODE and @donfons ...I want to put this on my mixtape I'm working on called VINDICATION...I want it to be the first track...n @donfons ...I want it as a collab with your verse...so let me know how we can go about this..n what legal issues need to be handled.. Preciate it

Digging it!

you loss the flow some times.

another dope beat could hear some tech n9ne on this awesome track

damn this is pretty sweet lovin the whole vibe

A catchy tune. Good lyrics :) Well done.

if you could keep that flow that is at 0:32 to 0:36 and just keep all the way on the main part and make like two main parts and a nice chorus that goes betiwn.

Now that's cool. Like what you did with it. Took it to a chill place but real moment.

Thanks for posting it here Donfons. Good job dig it.. Peace.

Dope bro! fell free to throw it on SoundCloud or whatever!!!

I like the delivery on this one..clarity and production z great. A+ for me.

1st time it sounds off to me is at the lebron line

those words just need some more spacing

maybe replace it with "gunna bitch slap lebron next" then the beat stops. * WHAP * beat starts again

solid vocals

Good joint...Love the flow.The delivery is on point.

man this is hype head knoddn kinda beat!!damn im lovn this lol!!!killa sh#t fam

I can see a sick rap being laid over this.
Very well done!