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sounds like a death scene in Ocean's Twelve if it had that kind of vibe. The vocals could be a touch louder or saturated to give it a bit more presence but overall sounds really good. Top work!

Lot's of nice articulation going on. Good work

Feels like Middle child a lil bit. The panning on the 808 glide is a nice touch

I can see some youtube choreographers going mad to this one

Really good stuff! Love the nostalgic vibes of this one

This is tight! Really well done mix.

Track got hella bounce. Absolutely got to record with a pop filter to catch those plosives tho. Also, there were a couple spots where the performance timing was off. I got a few other notes on the vocal performance and mix but overall the tonal balance and mix is very drake-esque. Good work.

This is tight. Your flow is impeccable. There are some battles happening with the beat in certain sections but nothing that doesn't seem over the top or unfix-able. Nice work!

How can we help as a community? I produce, write and engineer and I would be willing to dedicate some time to helping bring your art to the world. Need more hip hop with flows and rhyme scheme.

This is tight. A little crisp and loud on the highs for my personal taste but the track overall is on point. Can see it going over super well at a festival.

Nice remix. Similar to dumarecht the vocals have a heavy auto tune presence but the licks you went with are nice. Very modern Nicki Minaj or Cardi type lead up to the next phrase. Nice work.

so peaceful yet soul stirring. Good work.

YOOOO!!! Every now and again I'm surprised with what nooks and crannies looperman has and you definitely caught me off guard. Good work mate! I like how you have the flow under complete control. Giving me Star Power Era Wiz Khalifa vibes with the hook and beat (that double tho). Overall nice work!

Such a good groove with this one! I'm a sucker for drums so when the break comes in at 3:04, i'm smiling from ear to ear. Very cool job!

Now if you'll excuse me, i'm gonna go run through Deus Ex: Human Revolution for some more of these feels. Nice work!

I'm usually not a sucker for dnb but you've got some real "this is Klandestyne's corner of the world" type ish going on here! Mucho kudos friend.

There are some elements of this I could see myself sampling for a hip hop/rap track. Would you allow for such use? If not, its all good. I'll stick to listening.

This is A1 Klandestyne. It gives me the feel of the Wipeout racing games from Sony's heyday, but cruising through the tracks instead of speeding like a maniac.

Thanks for this! Keep them coming.

Usher much? This shxt hoppin!

Not much more to say other than what's been said already. Pure fire streaming out my speakers! Nice work!

Somebody get meek mill on the phone... Toro got sum for him to wreck.

Nice drum work. I like the kick pattern!! Still a bit charged up (see my comment on TRVLL LORD). Otherwise, I can imagine some industry cats going to work on this! Keep it up fam!

This baby slappin'... Nice Beat!!

I feel like the kick drum is a bit too charged up. The other elements could use some mix tweaking as well. Dope ass sample choice as well. Overall I think you've got some serious fire here. Those tricking hats remind me of this producer cat named Artem from out in Germany. Look him up! (His latest project is titled Synesthesia).

Dude?!... No... (lol)

this one caught me off guard when I first listened to it. 0:48 through 1:00 is an absolute treat the way you started flowing with the instruments. I'm a huge fan of the technique.

1:45 through till about 2:12 falls a little flat for me cause the flow is a little repetitive (until you switch it up towards the end).

Funny and Dope lyrics at the same time. I would rerecord the verse from halfway through just so when your flow is hitting with the instruments, they sync up tightly (something I'm constantly struggling with myself).

Otherwise, Nice Track!!

Amerie - That's what U R! A favorite of mine from way back in the day. Couldn't believe my ears when I heard the vocal sample.

Dope beat. I can see a lot potential laid out in front of you. I'll be keeping my eyes peeled for your next uploads. Can't wait to hear what you come up with next!

Just uploaded my verse. Check it out and let me know what you think. Extended and rearranged the second verse. Added your chorus to close the track on a fade out. Light EQ effects to the beat to make the verse fit a little better.

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/165935

I can hear someone like Toro y Moi going off on a love ballad when listening to this. Cool Sound!

Reminds me of Johnny Juliano in a lot of ways. Dope production. I like the ice cream truck swinging around the neighborhood feel its got going.

life as it is... not as it should be...

This is a fire track! I'm all about the message. My only critique is that you play with your EQ settings to reduce the amount of "pressure" in the track (the thudding, sub/kick action - unless of course that's the effect you were going for) and your panning and stacking to make the hook pop.

Other than that, keep it up!