mackeymarshel

Interesting subject matter beautiful stuff wen the lyrics are heart well constructed and you telling your story well you just told another mans experience good stuff

keep working on this. it sound good so far, but need some more energy.

NICE JOB KEEP IT UP

damn sound so good

agree with bonez below

4 real tho...D O P E

tight joint!!maybe a better mix on the verses though.

Hey Mack

Mate not a genre I listen too to much so can give to much constructive feedback, one thing that did stand out was the clarity of the track, crystal clear through laptop speakers which is a good sign, great vocal, lol thought my net dropped out, but no, just a short track...short but enjoyable man...Fav...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...

definitely different...and since rap isn`t on my usual listening menu I sure wouldn`t be a good source of advice...I do agree with the comments on the rap & music being out of sync...and sure...the production is a bit weak,...but we all start somewhere...You have the good fortune of getting off to an early start with your music mackeymarshel...so you know if you keep at it & invest in the learning you will be well on your way.....its a great addiction and a lifetime of satisfaction...all the best & keep on......Ed

Wasn't bad but I don't think the track suited your vocals(or the other way around).

believe it or not i kind of think about frank zappa mother of invention on your beat/instruments. it is a neat, sound and yea - satirical quality (which was also in zappa's stuff). nice work - hope you keep goin with it.

What's up, mackeymarshel

Nice track. It's a bit out of the box, like you meant it to be -- it could be mixed better by laying the kicks and snares and turning down the bass plucks... but I like the direction. It's refreshing, really, like the string in the background has a quirky touch to it that's a bit charming, along with the bass.

Your flow and delivery needs work, also turn it up so I can understand what you're saying.

Like the first guy said, this is a good start. Keep it up!

Hey so I'll get back to your comment on my mecha track soon, I return the favor to anyone who reviews one of my tracks. I see you just joined basically, welcome to the site bro. It's a cool place really, community is great. Anyways, nice starter track you got going here.

The lyrics were are actually better than I thought. You need a bit more of a flow but lyrics wise, It wasn't too bad. The beat itself is more of a electronic minimal type of beat. But alot of people tend to do their own thing (including me) so I don't do the genre nazi business much. (Hardly do at all) Cool track, I would just like some more effort put into it.

Most people on here also give honest critique. So don't take it personal, we just like to help and push others. Keep at it man, peace

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