InformalCircuit

wow man I'm really feeling your production skills and style, every track has such diversity, i really like a good listen that sticks out, this is just beautiful, you SHOULD get lyrics on this, a really good female vocalist a might reckon!! Another fav! Good Work!

SpitShine

Man, for stepping outside the box you get 100/10 on this one, plus my fav of the day spot, i would really like to dabble in different genres but find it really hard.. Great work!!

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SpitShine

Told you, you had it! Lol You did a great job! Im gonna geet you next time around though. lol

sounds illa tight love the scratches n horns keep doin work baby!

CONGRATS!!!!!!!!! FIRRRRRST PLACE.... killed it on this one homie, way to do your thing, Keep wait to hear the fire you bring to the "Final ShowDown". Cant checkin my thread to know whats going on with that, and who you will competing against...

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SpitShine

Dude i really enjoyed this. Kinda reminded me of some Radiohead. Like off the Kid A album

VERY GOOD ELECTRONIC SOUND !

VERY GOOD, HYPNOTIZING

DAAAIM! I've only recently started listening to hip hop stuff, I'm usually more DnB or Dubstep, but this is fucking awesome! You should get some rapping and/or singing to put over the top of it! Keep up the work mate, (Y).

i diggin' this track man.i definitely agree on lowering the bass part but other than that..its an o.k. track.

Weerd!!, this is a really good beat!!!!! Specially for saying your new to this style of beatmaking, you really did kill it!!!!! Thanks for sharing mang i really enjoyed listening...

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SpitShine

Yeah i agreeon the bass, other than this track is great ;] i love that original track

Liking it dude, I gotta say, sounds like the most professional sounding iones out of the comp.
Peace.
Kii.

dude you got it! i really liked what you did with the drums about 2 mins into the track.

phat beat, i'm not too familiar with hip hop, but this is definitely something i'd listen to. it's got this impeccable flow throughout, and the mastering of the sampled parts after slicing is right on.

good luck in the comp.

hell yes dude. love the concept, the sample, the beat and the lyrics and flow are definitely on point. great song.

wonderfull.......fantastic.......u know im new here^^but the best track i listend to since im on this site-.....this song hit me deep^^.......this track is like telling a story..........its like holdin a moment in itself^^

Nicee and calm I like this.
would be interesting with vocals in it .
great work

enjoyable glitch track.
the swooping beat in this track is lovely, and there isn't much i would change about the track.

the emphasis should be between the harmonious pads and the free-form beat.

in that little break around 1:50 i feel that the rush back into it could be a little more intense, however, the songs continuity shows no flaws.

the break around 2:45 shines, and the playful, almost brooding mood that ensues afterwords is tremendous.

overall this is a very relaxing and chill track, and i enjoy your current production as is. keep up the great work.

Cool beat/groove. I like the sparse bassline! Sometimes space is good, it allows the lyric to breath and for listener to digest what's being said. It sounds like the vocal is distorted slightly. Maybe this is the effect you wanted. If it wasn't then I'd say invest in a condenser mic. The MXL range are super...
Also bring the vocal up in the mix, you sound like a great lyricist and rapper, bring it more forward. The track it's self is solid. Great foundation for the extras on top, maybe as deadcult suggests some horn work would be cool, I have loads on my loops page...But all that said, you should be proud of your developing sound...

Cheers Slap...

yo, this is hot. i like it.
the beat is crazy, ya sounded like Beastie Boys.
lmfao
keep it up. peace

no shit? good lookin out man.

C h i l l ... O u t ... i am! I'm sitting in my shitty ass couch, smoking, and listening 2 your wonderful track, i almost fell asleep, serious! This one goes for the books (or something), its a really good song, keep it up!

i like the intro sample where is it from?

She has a nice voice, so that would be a good place to start :P