KattWinter

its a very different approach to the song it's very busy, i have to agree your voice is somewhat spoiled by the mic and the mixing of your vocals but! those can be put right ...great effort and well done.

I think that distorted vocal was intended blue transit. She was trying to use it as an FX vocal, but applied it wrong. You should use a vst plug in, like a vintage warmer and add it to the track your recording your vocals on. Try to eq out all the bad frequencies to,somewhere between 300 to 800hz. Keep at it and read up on mastering techniques or just pm slap he is good and can help you. Also go to computer music website loadsa free stuff

ok the song itself is pretty dang cool, some cool sounds. but holy cow the vocals are turned up so high. not that your voice is bad (its quite good) but its heavily heavily distorted.

Great test run! Very creative sample of what's to come! I look forward to listening to your songwriting. Cheers Salp...

very cool!

gizz

Love your voice. I agree that a better mic, with less static, would be advisable so that we could hear more of your voice. The static might also be a result of clipping. Anyways, I'm also looking forward to more.

John59

too much going on at once, and the levels are way outta wack. I like your voice, but you need a better mic. i like the song though and i think you should keep at it!

I must say like this:) If you take the part from 0:00 - 0:20 and use it to make a complete track, i think it would be really nice!

you have a nice voice to be willing to put yourself out there on a track acapella. props.

For a test run I really loved this.. you have a beautiful voice, and very obviously creativity. Sorry, couldn't leave this track without saying something.. looking forward to hearing more of your own stuff. Lisa

Girl, I LOVE your voice. I think you have a ton of potential if this is only an idea. Keep playing with the software.. I went from loops to synths in one track, out of plain ol frustration lol. It was easier than I thought it was going to be.

Excellent vocals. There is some distortion there though. You can prob fix that easy enough. A very haunting piece. Love your voice and your style.

Keep it up.

John59

You have a great voice and I like this take of the song. Look forward to hearing more.